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Posted: 7 years ago
Awsome update..
Manan fyt..
Nandus thoughts..
Mananz really cute..
Luvd it.
Thnkz 4 d pm
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Posted: 7 years ago




Thanks for pm.dear

Awesome sweet update. ..

Just loved it their cute fight. ..

You always wrote from heart. ...

And it is very beautiful. ..

I just loved your stories ...

Thanks for posting dear...






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Posted: 7 years ago
As usual nice update ma.. finally.. they have sorted both or big tease .. good sentimental and good end of this chapter... so let them cont their honeymoon now peacefully..
Thanks for the update and the PM
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Posted: 7 years ago
THKS for the PM Anu ...
Super duper awesome update ...

Ufff...tuneh TOH humari JAAN hi NIKAL de Anu ...

Finally Manik ne Nandini KO mana LEYA ...
DONO pyaar KARTE hi AACHE LAGTE hai ...
Nandini is really so innocent ...but no BHI ussne SOOCHA about he no more interested in her cant blame her ...

ITNA BHI koi busy NAHI HOTA ...esp a newly married couple ...

But now since everything is OKK between them ...KHUCH hot romance Deekhana Anuuu ...heheheheh
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Posted: 7 years ago
PART 20 :



Kissing her ever so softly for what seems to be an eternity he slowly breaks the kiss and rests his forehead on hers while she slowly opens her eyes and "tumhe kya lagtha hain...ek kiss se main sab bhul jaongi...!!!"

"main bas tumhara sath dena chahtha hoon wo sab bhulane main aur main tumhe bas itna hi bathana chahtha hoon..!!!" and he utters making her turn towards him while she looks him and "achaaa...tum meri help karoge...!!!"

MANIK : dekho nandini

"Lekin kis kis main..!!!" and she cuts him off in between making him cring his eyebrows..!!!

NANDINI :

"Har suba bed pe tumhare bina ankhen kolthi thi iss bath ko bhulane mai ya har roj thayar hothe vakth sindoor ko dekh jo tumhari yaad athi thi usse bhulane main..!!!"

"Har baar gale main mangalsutra dekh jo ansu ankhon mai athi thi usse bhulane mai ya uss akelepan ko bhulane mai jo main khana kane vakth mehsoos karthi thi..!!!"

"Har baar jab koyi call ya msg aya wo tumhara na hokar kisi aur ke hona ka dard ko bhulane main ya uss tadap ko bhulane main jo tumhari ek jalak pane ke liye hothi thi..!!!"

Speechless he stands staring her not blinking his eyes for once while she smiles nodding her head with tears and "tum kis kis main meri madad karoge...pichle ek mahine main jo har pal ka intezar maine tumhare liye kiya usse bhulane main ya phir pure ek mahine ko hi bhulane main jaise hamare beech kuch hua hi nahi...!!!"

staring her silently for a moment he pulls her into a bone crashing hug closing his eyes ever so tightly controlling his tears while she presses her lips inside not to cry out loud without hugging him back...!!!!

calming down himself he slowly breaks the hug and "haan...main wo har ek cheez bhulane main tumhari madad karna chahtha hoon...!!!"

MANIK :

"tumhe barosa dilana chahtha hoon ki aaj ke baad tum kabi bed pe akele nahi utogi aur na hi har roj sindoor lagathe vakth mujhe yaad karogi...kyu ki main vahi rahunga... tumhare sath...!!!"

"tumse vada karna chahtha hoon ki aaj ke baad apne gale main mangalsutra dekh bas muskuraogi aur kabi galthi se bi kane ki vakth khud ko akela nahi paogi...kyu ki main vahi rahunga...tumhare paas...!!!"

Letting out her tears she stands staring him while he cups her cheeks and "main tumhare uss dard ko mitana chahtha hoon jo maine tumhe di...uss tadap ko dur karna chahtha hoon jo meri vajah se tumhe huyi...!!!!"

"mere intezar main bithayi wo har ek pal ke badle zindagi bar ka pyar dena chahtha hoon tumhe...pichle mahine ki uss har ek buri yaad ko tumhare dimak se nikalna chahtha hoon...thaki hamari aage ki zindagi ki yaad achi bane...khubsoorat... bane...!!!!" and he ends wiping away her tears looking her with all the world's love...!!!!

"tum bohuth bure ho...!!!" and she utters staring him while he smiles staring her back and "matlab meri bathon ka tumpe asar ho gaya...!!!"

"mujhe tumse bath nahi karni...!!!" and she utters jerking away his hands while he rubs his neck with his right hand and "kyuki tum janthi ho mujhse kabi jeeth nahi sakthi...!!!"

Glaring him she turns to walk away while he twists her right hand back holding it and "maan kyu nahi lethi ki tum kabi mere bathon ke samne tik nahi pathi"

"your misunderstanding...not my fault...!!!" and she mutters gritting her teeth trying to free her hand without even turning back and looking him...!!!!

"prove it then...that am at fault...!!!" and he whispers letting his lips touch her ear lobe moving deathly close to her making her close her eyes instantly in anticipation...!!!!

"I don't have to prove anything to you...!!!" and she takes few steps ahead while he simply pulls her back turning her with a jerk making her collide with his chest still holding her hand at back...!!!

"open your eyes...ankhen kyu band raki tumne...!!!" and he mutters dangerously close to her lips while she pushing him back with her left hand turns away quickly not being able to tolerate their closeness..!!!!

"wrong move mrs malhotra" and he mutters above her lips touching them deliberately with his turning her back again holding and twisting her left hand too...!!!

He made her week...He gave her jitters...!!! and she stood hating it completely not knowing why the hell she was still getting affected by him when all between them was only distance from day two of their marriage...!!!

"Ye pyar bi kya kambakth cheez hain na...ab dekho...tumhe mujhse dur ja bi nahi deri hain aur khud ko mujhe dene se rok bi rahi hain...!!!" and he whispers tracing his nose on her cheek while she tilts away her head and "mujhe na hi tumse aur na hi tumhari koyi bath se farak padtha hain...!!!"

"Lekin tumhari kampthi huyi ye badan kuch aur jawab dera hain mujhe...!!!!" and he whispers ever so huskily teasing her ear with his lips making her gulp her saliva...!!!!

chodo...!!! and she tries to move away while he turns her in a swift leaving her both the hands and wrapping his hand around her waist holding her close securely...!!!!

"Kyu...khud ko rok nahi pari ho...!!!" and he utters moving his free hand up and down on her hand making shiver run down her spine...!!!!

"enough now" and she jerks away his both the hands while he once again turns her towards him pressing their bodies together and "enough what...!!!"

"just" and her voice gets died as he starts tracing her skin above her breasts with his index finger making her slap herself mentally for choosing such dress to wear that too for him...!!!!

"janthi ho kitni achi lagri ho iss dress main...!!!" and he mutters kissing her neck drawing circles on her exposed skin under it making breath hitch in her throat...!!!!

"kya karre ho..!!!" and she panicks seeing him lifting her while he smiles at her and "mere liye pehni thi na ye dress tumne...tho uska koyi tho faida hona chahiye na...!!!"

"kya matlab" and she utters cringing her brows while he smirks at her and "samjaonga...thoda tho sabar rako...!!!"

"ye tum" and he shuts her sealing his lips with hers not giving her any time to protest having innumerable plans in his head...!!!





Manik ko punishment bi milegi aur uske sath sath manan ki romance bi hogi...dono kaise honge jaan ne ke liye padthe rahiye manan ki ye kahani and haa update kaisa laga bathana math bhulna...am waiting...luv u...tc...smileee and make people smileee...!!!!




Tiara115 thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow..
So good
I excited for next
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update and as well as passionate...
Naughty Manik and angry nandu baby...
Continue soon...
Jaldi...
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Posted: 7 years ago
super update when nandini told him mistake everything is emotional then manik accept her mistake the way nice
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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg ...
This story still stuck at naughty manik...

Manik was really really very bad for ignoring nandu for a whole mnth...
Poor nandu...

Finally that idiot got his brain back n took her to honeymoon...
Their fights with sweet sugary coated dialogues ..ufff..typical of mishtee...

Nandu's emotional break down was saddening...
Poor girl went thru a lottt...

Manik is now on manaofying mission...in his style with naughty dialogues n romance...
Nandini wud b blush blush all d time ...

Pata nahi ab kya punishment degi nandu..
Lets c
Edited by manandeeplove - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update...
manik is naughty ...
nandini is suffered one month...nandini should give him punishment...
loved d update...
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