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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome update
Continue soon
So nandu is angry on manik very much which valid
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Posted: 7 years ago
Excited. .. realy nyc yaar..
Wohooo.. honey moon...
Awesome pary...
Manik teasing section was to gud...
Vnt soon..
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Posted: 7 years ago
wowww amazing update manik manofying nandu excited... loved it
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Posted: 7 years ago
Really manik???? Selfie ???? I was just shocked ...but same time happy that manik doing so much ...excited for their honeymoon...
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Plz update next part soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
hahaha ...
that was so funny na.

manik kitnaa sweetly behVe kr rha h..
mAnik have to try hArder.

nandu bhi kitni pyari h na.
bura lga h lekin kuch bolegi nhii.

waiting for update eagerly .
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Posted: 7 years ago
yaar awsm nd emotional update...😭

but plzz update na ASAP...😕


Edited by SIAZAHEED.1 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
kaha kho gayi yaar phir se???
itna exciting more pe laakein??

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Posted: 7 years ago
PART 18 :


"Kaaa...kyaaa...kaha...!!!!" and nandu utters in shock widening her eyes...!!!!

MANIK : vahi jo tumne suna jaan..!!!!

Nandu stares him opening and closing her mouth trying to say something while manik chuckles looking her and "haye meri jaan... main sach bolra hoon...ham honeymoon pe jare hain...!!!!"

sitting silent for few seconds nandu tilts her head looking away from manik while he smiles watching her and "nahiii...!!!!"

Moving her gaze ever so lazily nandu stares him blankly while he looking deep into her eyes "tumhe manane ke liye plan nahi kiya maine hamara honeymoon...kal rath ko hi bathane vale tha sabke samne lekin...kair...kal rath ke bath jo hua...surprise dena chahtha tha...bas...!!!!"

"sooo...kaisa laga surprise...!!!!" and he mutters moving close to her while she getting up from her seat tries to walk away only to get pulled back by him the very next second as usual...!!!!

"you seriously think main hamara honeymoon tumhe chodke manonga...!!!!" and he utters making her sit on his lap while she tries to get up again and again ignoring him and his words...!!!!

"jaan for god sake just stop moving...ek tho pehle hi bohuth mushkil se kud ko control karra hoon aur tum ho ki...!!!!" and he stops in mid making nandu stare him back with open mouth not moving an inch...!!!!

controlling his laugh he looks her pressing his lips inside and "kuch kehna hain...!!!!"

turning away and closing her eyes nandu nods her head biting her lips while manik smiles knowing very well how red colour might have gotten painted on her cheeks...!!!!

"jaannn...!!!!" and he whispers huskily moving close to her while she gets up opening her eyes with a jerk before he could hold her and "mujhe kahi nahi jana...!!!"

MANIK : am sry jaan lekin tumhe ana tho padega hi

Not replying nandu starts walking while he holds her hand tightly stoping her and "mujhe na blind fold kolna hi nahi chahiye tha"

NANDINI : hath chodo

MANIK : nahi

NANDINI : excuse me... hellooo...excuse me...!!!!

MANIK : listen kya karri ho

"yes mam...how can I help u..!!!!"

"I don't want to..!!!" and nandu stops getting pulled back by manik while he holds her tightly making her sit again in his lap and "am so sorry...actually my wife is just a bit angry...sooo yaaa it's nothing serious...!!!"

"no...he is...!!!!" and nandu stops widening her eyes feeling manik breath close to her while he stays inches away from her lips and "you don't want me to kiss you right here...right now jaan...do you...!!!"

"am sry sir...i will take a leave...thank you...have a safe journey mam...!!!"

getting into senses nandu closes her eyes slapping herself mentally for getting lost in him while manik smirks watching her expressions and "kya hua jaan...tumne jawab nahi diya...!!!"

jerking away his hands nandu settles in her seat beside him while plane successfully takes off from land...!!!

NANDINI : mera phone

MANIK : haa???

turning her head she gives him "really..!!!" look while he shows his toungue and "umm...haan...hain mere paas...tumhara cell...!!!"

NANDINI : wo mujhe patha hain...lao...do...

MANIK : nahi

NANDINI : huh?

MANIK : am sry...agar tumhe kuch chahiye tho mujhse keh sakthi ho...!!!

NANDINI : listen

MANIK : hamare dono ke cells switch off hi rahenge...maa papa ko sab patha hain so tension lene ki zarurath nahi hain aur haan tumhara saman maa ne sab pack karke diya hain so agar tum apni chezo ke bare main sochri ho tho you don't need to worry

NANDINI : kyaa...saman maa ne pack kiya...

MANIK : haan wo mujhe office main meeting attend karni thi na isliye... nahi tho main hi kartha tha...

nandu closes her eyes holding her head while manik places his hand on her shoulder and "kya hua...sur dard dera...!!!"

sighing she slowly looks him opening her eyes and "kyu...kyu kare ho ye sab...maine kaha na tumhe...!!!"

MANIK : agar tumhe lagtha hain ki main tumhari maafi ke liye ye sab karra hoon tho nahi...haan...jantha hoon mujhe tumse maafi mangni chahiye lekin ye sab main sirf maafi ke liye nahi karra hoon...hamare beech agar sab kuch teek hotha thab bi ham honeymoon pe jathe the...isliye please...dobara math kehna ki mujhe tumhari maafi ke liye ye sab karne ki zarurath nahi hain...!!!!

NANDINI : tumhe meri maafi chahiye...lekin...tum meri maafi ke liye kuch nahi karre ho...

MANIK : haan

NANDINI : tumhe patha bi hain tum kya kehre ho

MANIK : jaan main tumhari maafi chahtha hoon...it's just that I don't want you to think that am here right beside you just because of that...I know galthi ki hain maine and I just want you to know that am here because I love you and only because I love you naki iss liye kyuki main apni galthi ko sudarne ki koshish karra hoon..!!!!

NANDINI : main kya kahu...mujhe kuch samaj nahi aara...

MANIK : jaan main

NANDINI : achanak tum mujhse bath karre ho...mere saath vakth bithare ho...tho vishwas hi nahi hora...apni ankhon par...

sighing sadly manik stares her and "am sry jaan...sab meri galthi hain...tum...tum aram karo...ham iske bare main baad mai bath karenge...!!!"

Hours paas but only silence stays between manan...nandu doesn't utter a single word no matter how much manik tried talking to her while he unwantedly accepting his defeat remains silent watching her and only watching her without blinking his eyes...!!!

drifting into sleep nandu unconsciously places her head on manik shoulder while he finally having a tiny smile wraps his hand around her making her sleep even more comfortably...!!!!

MANIK : jaan

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tucking a hair strand behind her ear manik smiles adoring her and then lifting her carefully walks out holding her securely in his arms making everyone smile admiring them...!!!!

turning lazily nandu opens her eyes slowly stretching her hands and gets up with a jerk looking at unfamiliar surroundings only to close her eyes again hitting reality hard...!!!!

licking her lips she slowly opens her eyes and glances all around only to smile happily witnessing the huge bedroom decorated beautifully with all types of roses spreading it's scent all around giving a soothing atmosphere...!!!!

remembering manik she suddenly stops smiling and quickly looks all around but crings her eyebrows not finding him while he at the same time enters into room making her relieved and nervous both at the same time...!!!!

MANIK : ut gayi tum...

NANDINI : main yaha...utaya kyu nahi...

"utaya tha par tum uti nahi...gehri nendh main thi shayad isliye" and he utters walking inside placing a bag on bed..!!!

MANIK : iss main tumhara saman hain change karlo phir dinner ke liye niklenge

not replying she gets down from bed and opens the bag without sparing him a glance while he turns her towards him holding her hands moving closer to her...!!!

"meri ankhon main dekho... please...!!!" and he mutters seeing her still staring ground..!!!!

moving her gaze she slowly looks him while he stares into her eyes and "tumne kaha tum mujhse naraz nahi ho"

NANDINI : haan...nahi hoon main naraz...

MANIK : tho phir bath kyu nahi karri ho

nandu remains silent while he cups her cheek and "jaan...naraz ho tho batao...gussa ho tho danto... maro...kuch bi karo...lekin aise chup math raho...apne feelings ko ander math dabao...please...!!!"

seeing her lowering her eyes he rubs his thumb on her cheek and "jaan... please...!!!"

"mujhe kuch nahi kehna hain...!!!" and she whispers turning away her head...!!!

"tho tumhari khamoshi meri galthi ki saza hain...!!!" and he utters looking her hoping for an answer...!!!

seeing her silent he smiles sadly and "teek hain...galthi ki hain tho saza bi manzur hain...!!!"

she slowly looks him through corner of her eye while he moves back taking away his hand and "bath nahi karni hain na mujhse...teek hain...math karo...lekin...main tumse bath kartha rahunga...aur agar...aur agar tum galthi se bi mujhse kuch kaha...tho phir tumhe apne dil ke ander jo kuch bi hain wo mujhe bathana hoga...mujhe ek mouka dena hoga...apni galthi sudarne ki...!!!"

"agar aisa kuch nahi hua tho ham gar vapas jayenge" and she utters in mere audible tone biting her lower lip...!!!

doneee...!!! and he utters smiling and smirking...!!!




doneee...mera kaam bi...haan haan thayar hoon...maro maro...arey I know sharmaneki bilkul bi zarurath nahi hain jis tharah main ek update deke gayab hojathi hoon na uske liye apke maar kana hi padega mujhe...isliye jisse chaho usse maar sakthe ho... tamator... chappal...kuch bi...marne ke baad ek baar bula lena...kyuki abi ankhen bandh karne vali hoon...okay so ready...one...two...three...gooo...!!!!!








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Posted: 7 years ago
Awww...Manan honeymoon...yeeeiipppii
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Nandini naraz he...
But love the challenge
Continue soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Haha that was good
They are really unique
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