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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update father son duo both r same to same.. wow.. The way Nandini said she is angry on herself and her tears very emotional 👏👏.. finally its going to be a peaceful sleep for her after a month wrapped in his arms.. now Maniks turn to make things straight we know he will do all the extreme steps to correct them, waiting for those moments...
Thanks for the update and the PM..
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautiful update...
loved it...

nandini's emotional breakdown was penned down beautifully...
poor girl...manik ruined whole month...that too first month of wedding...hawww...
girl needs her husband d most in that phase after wedding...coz she sacrifices her own family ,name,home...
manik deserves tough punishment...

cont soon
thanx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update
Nandini's reaction was good according to the situation
Lets see what manik will do to manofy nandu
All in all lovely update
Thnkx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
Manik created a big mess...
Mayank nd manik did same mustake..
Lyk father lyk son..
I hope nandu cld 4gv him..
Luvd it...
Thnkz 4 d pn
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Posted: 8 years ago



Thanks for pm.dear


It was amazing chapter...

She gives very well deserve answers to him...




Thanks...







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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Nandu ka reaction is valid
Manik needed this anger
Continue soon
Let manik suffer a little for making nandu cry
N aliya should be far away from manan
Edited by devilkhushi - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update...
loved it...
read all the parts in one go...
beautifully penned...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Welcome back dear . ...
It was an awesome update . ...
Thank you loads for the chapter and update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
PART 17 :


Getting continuous kisses from sunlight nandu crings her eyebrows tilting her head not wanting to wakeup but soon after tilting presses her eyes ever so tightly clutching the bed sheet feeling manik warm breaths on her face...!!!!

Being afraid that all might be a dream she slowly tilts her head away and tries to get up without even opening her eyes while manik groaning pulls her even more close to him not letting her move an inch...!!!!

Thinking that he might have woke up she lies not moving acting like asleep but still feeling his breaths on her neck pushes away that thought and slowly opens her eyes tilting her head once again only to witness most beautiful pair of eyes staring her back with utmost love...!!!!

Not blinking her eyes she lies without moving staring into his eyes while he too without turning his gaze continuous staring at her making time freeze between them...!!!!

Is this a dream and nandu asks herself not being able to believe her eyes...!!!

"Gud mrn jaan..!!!" and he whispers in low husky tone kissing tip of her nose making her believe that it all was real answering to her unasked question...!!!!

Getting into senses nandu quickly turns her head aside trying to get up while manik pulls her back instantly making his grip tighter on her giving her do-you-really-think-i-will-let-you-go look...!!!!

Not wanting to talk nandu lays silently looking at ceiling while he without saying anything places his head on her heart hearing to her heart beat making her look him surprised the very next second...!!!!

Watching him smiling having his eyes closed nandu continuous staring him not being able to move her gaze while he feeling her gaze slowly opens his eyes smiling even more huger..!!!!

Turning away quickly nandu licks her dry lips and eyeing at watch "aat bajre hain"

"Hmmm" and he continuous staring her..!!!
"Mujhe kaam hain" and nandu tries to move while manik lifting his head a little stares her making his grip tighter on her giving her i-wont-leave-you look...

"Aaj kaam pe nahi jaana???" and she asks sighing looking everywhere except him..!!!

"Nahiii...!!!!" And she looks him through corner of her eye listening to his reply but soon closes her eyes sighing hearing him complete "jana tho padega...!!!"

"tho phir apna vakth barbad kyu karre ho" and she utters in cold tone having her eyes still closed...!!!!

"apni biwi ke sath sona vakth barbad karna nahi hotha...pagal...!!!" and he whispers resting his head back on her heart...!!!!

"mujhe thayar hona hain...chodo...!!!" and she utters opening her eyes trying to get up...!!!

"ek sharth par...!!!" and he utters not letting her move still lying in the same position...!!!!

"chodo...!!!!" and she whispers once again but this time not at all moving away...!!!!

"ek selfie..!!!" and he whispers lifting his head staring her with love..!!!

huhhh???? and she looks him shocked not blinking her eyes...!!!!

"ek hi...I promise...!!!" and he uttering quickly takes his phone from side table while she continues looking him shocked not being able to believe her eyes...!!!!

here...common...!!! and manik utters smiling looking at his cell asking nandu to look at screen...!!!

NANDINI : are you sure???

MANIK : huhhh

NANDINI : you...just...want a selfie???

"well...if you wana give something else...!!!" and he stops eyeing at her lips while she quickly turns away from him and click it...!!!!

yess and he quickly kisses her cheek due to which she turns her head towards him only to kiss him back on his cheek while he instantly clicks the picture capturing the moment smiling ever so hugely...!!!!

Awww...!!!!! and he beams looking at the screen while she gets up without looking him having a teeny weeny smile on her lips along with a teeny weeny blush on her cheeks...!!!!

entering into washroom nandu turns to close the door but before she could do it completely manik enters inside whistling completly involved in his cell making her cring her brows thinking what exactly he was doing...!!!!

done...!!! and he muttering places his cell inside his pocket and raising his eyebrows looking at nandu who was already staring him...!!!!

MANIK : what

NANDINI : mujhe thayar hona hain

MANIK : tho

NANDINI : mujhe fresh hona hain

"hmmm...mujhe bi...!!!" and he replies taking a toothbrush in his hands...!!!

"wo mera hain" and nandu quickly moves to grab it but he pulls back holding nandu with his another hand and "mujhe patha hain"

NANDINI : ye tum

MANIK : mujhe office ke liye nikal na hain

teek hain and grabbing her toothbrush nandu quickly turns to walk away while manik instantly pulls her close and "kaha jari ho"

"aaj ham ek sath brush karenge" and he utters not letting her speak taking her toothbrush in his hands again..!!!

staring him like he was an alian nandu nods her head a liitle and while she was about to say a no to him he inserts her toothbrush in her mouth he himself placing his inside his mouth asking her to brush quickly...!!!!

obeying him she stands lowering her eyes brushing her teeth while he simply moving towards her back places his left hand around her belly making her look him through mirror widening her eyes...!!!!

nothing...you continue...!!! and he gesturing her closes his eyes brushing while she after trying again and again to jerk his hand away sighs not being able to succeed and closes her eyes brushing as quickly as possible..!!!!

Once done nandu notices manik busy in washing his face and taking this as a chance she simply walks out shutting the door behind silently and then out of the room not wanting to face him again..!!!

Finding her no where manik sighs closing his eyes and then quickly getting a hot shower comes out of the washroom and "nandiniii...!!!!"

"Nandini...nandiniii...nandiniii...!!!!" And he continuous singing her name like a kid drying his hairs with towel not even realizing that she was standing in front of him since long..!!!

Nan..!!! and he stopping shows his 32 teeth to nandu as soon as he sees her while she stands looking him without any expression..!!!

"Kaisa lagra hoon..!!!" and he utters smiling while she rolls her eyes not knowing why she was standing infront him when she wontedly walked out of the room not wanting to face him..!!!!

"Ohhh...itna hot ki apni ankhon se dekh bi nahi pari ho..!!!!" and he comments twitching his lips while she turns back opposite to him getting ready to walk out..!!!

"Achaa suno tho...mere liye ek shirt nikalke do na...pleaseee...!!!!" and hearing him plead she slowly walks towards cupboard and places her hand on a hanger to remove a white shirt while manik back hugs her at the same time resting his chin on her shoulder making breath hitch in her throat..!!!

"nahiii...white nahi...uss main aur bi hot dikunga..!!!" and he whispers in her ear while she closes her eyes controlling herself clutching the hanger in her hands due to their proximity..!!!

"dusra dekho na..!!!" and he whispers once again while she coming into senses jerks him away walking aside gulping down her saliva..!!!

"okk...agar tum ye hi chahathi ho tho teek hain..!!!" and he utters taking the white shirt while nandu licking her lips silently walks away ignoring his intense gaze on her..!!!

MANIK : suno tho...vaha table pe mera watch hain kya...ek baar dekho na..!!!

NANDINI : ummm

MANIK : kyaa baba hain ya nahi

NANDINI : hain

MANIK : mera volet

NANDINI : mmm

MANIK : jaan...hain ya nahi..!!!

"Hain..!!!" and she mutters sighing while he smiling walks towards her taking steps as soon as he can..!!!

Feeling him reaching near her nandu quickly tries to walk out without looking him while manik looks her and "suno tho...zara mera belt la do na...main bhul gaya..!!!"

"ummm..!!!" and nandu extends her hand holding his belt standing infront of him in no time while manik being busy in tieing his tie doesn't look her and kya hain jaanaa..!!!

"Belt..!!!" and she replies instantly while he looks her lifting his head smiling and thank you..!!!

Without letting him touch her hand she smartly gives away his belt and turns to walk out but stops closing her eyes hearing him whisper "jaan..!!!"

"zara ye tie bando na...please...!!!!" and he utters as soon as she turns back to him looking her with his puppy eyes making it impossible for her to ignore him...!!!!

"Itne dino se ye sab khud hi karre the tho phir aaj achanak kya ho gaya..!!!" and she utters moving closer to him taking tie in her hands...!!!

"Itne dino se sab kudh hi karra tha isiliye aaj se kuch bi akela nahi karna chahtha hoon...!!!" and he replies instantly staring into her eyes making her look back him...!!!!

"Meri maafi ke liye tumhe ye sab karne ki zarurath nahi hain...!!!!" and she mutters looking away placing the tie around his neck ignoring his gaze...!!!

"Kisne kaha ki main ye sab tumhari maafi ke liye karra hoon...!!!" and he utters making her look back him surprised and lifts her up suddenly the very next moment placing his hands on her waist...!!!

"Maa..!!" and she suddenly stops fisting her hands not holding him while he places her on bed infront of him making her stand face to face to him..!!!

MANIK : bolo

Ha??? and she whispers suddenly looking him turning away her gaze from his hands which were on her waist

MANIK : kisne kaha ki main ye sab maafi ke liye karra hoon

NANDINI : ummm...wooo...mujhe...kuch nahi...

MANIK : okkk

"Hmmm" and she lowers her eyes

MANIK : kya hua

NANDINI : kuch nahi

MANIK : tho phir aise kadi kyu ho

"Ooo umm" and she tries to get down from bed while manik stops her pressing her waist and "jaan tum jaa kaha rahi ho mera tie bandhe bina"

NANDINI : oohh main

MANIK : teek hain chelo jaldi se bandh do

Placing the tie around his neck nandu starts tieing it without saying anything further while he stands staring her with love filled eyes not blinking for once..!!!

Ignoring his gaze she ties the tie while he once again lifts her up suddenly seeing her getting down but stands staring her not placing her back on ground making her look back him surprised..!!

MANIK : jathe hi office main meeting hain isliye nashtha vahi karlunga meeting ke baad

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : tum thayar hoke apna nashtha kar lena

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : nandini

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : meri ankhon main dekho

NANDINI : aur kuch

MANIK : meri akhon main dekho nahi tho neche nahi utharunga

sighing she slowly looks him while he nods his head and "kaise...kaise..!!!"

"aaa???" and she whispers cringing her brows while he shrugs his shoulders and "gusse main...naraz hoke...tum...tum...itni...sexy kaise lag sakthi ho...!!!"

pressing her lips inside she turns away her head quickly while he already witnessing her light red coloured cheeks smiles placing her on ground and "thank you"

not looking him she stands looking side ways while he quickly pecks her cheek and "byyy"

3 HOURS LATER :

KABIR : nandu...nanduuu...!!!!

NANDINI : haan bayya

KABIR : kya karri

NANDINI : kuch nahi

KABIR : tho chel mere sath

NANDINI : kaha

KABIR : bathatha hoon pehle chel tho sahi

NANDINI : nahi pehle aap bathayiye na

KABIR : wo darasal

NYONIKA : kabir chod...tu jo bi kahe wo manegi tho nahi...iss gar se bahar kadam rakegi tho nahi...phir kyu bekar main vakth barbad karna hmmm...

KABIR : kyu nandu...tu gar ke bahar jana nahi chahthi ab...

NANDINI : nahi aisi

KABIR : tho chel mere sath aur ek bi sawal nahi

NANDINI : teek hain

KABIR : byy aunty

NYONIKA : by beta

NANDINI : maa main

NYONIKA : Haan haan jaa byyy

NANDINI : aap itni kush kyu hain

NYONIKA : nahii...kuch nahi...tu jaa...

NANDINI : lunch ke liye

NYONIKA : arey wo sab chod aur jaa main hoon na main dekh lungi

NANDINI : teek hain...byy...

NYONIKA : byyy byyy...!!!!

NANDINI : kya hua...gadi kyu rok diya...

KABIR : ek minute

NANDINI : ye kya hain

KABIR : ankhe bandh kar

NANDINI : kyu

KABIR : kitne sawal karegi chup chap apni ankhe band kar na

NANDINI : arey par

KABIR : bas ab ek lavz bi nahi

NANDINI : tch ye blind fold kyu

KABIR : eyyy nikal na math

NANDINI : kabir

KABIR : silence please

NANDINI : par

KABIR : shhh

NANDINI : agaye?

KABIR : offooo haan

NANDINI : ab nikal ri hoon

KABIR : arey nahi

NANDINI : kyu

KABIR : wait

NANDINI : lekin

KABIR : umm hath de

NANDINI : ye blind fold nikalthi hoon pehle ruko

KABIR : arey nahi pagal

NANDINI : kabirrr

KABIR : ab chup chap kadi reh

"kyu...beech sadak main ye sab kya karne ki koshish kar rahe ho tum... mujhe kuch samaj nahi" and she stops in mid feeling lifted by someone whom she was very much familiar with and whom she was least expecting of all in that particular moment..!!!!

Not wanting to say anything she remains silent not even trying to open her blind fold or to get down even though continues questions pop in her mind making her worry though being helpless...!!!!

after what seems to be an eternity she feels herself settling comfortably and her blind fold falling down while she quickly opens her eyes not being able to control more only to witness her love smiling at her fully...!!!!

Licking her lips slowly she diverts her gaze sideways and widens her eyes in very next moment taking quick glance all around not being able to believe her eyes...!!!!

Kya hua jaan..!!!! and manik whispers in an innocent tone settling beside nandu making her look him still in a state of shock..!!!

ye..ham...!!! and she whispers in mere audible tone while he bites his lower lip controlling his smile and "ham...kya jaan...???"

"ham...yaha...kya...mera...matlab... kaha...jaa...re...hain..!!!" and she completes glancing everywhere while he smiles seeing her and whispers in a slow husky tone mimicking her "ham... honeymoon...ke...liye...jaa... re...hain...!!!" making ground escape beneath her...!!!!!



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Posted: 7 years ago
Thankyou for the PM!
Beautiful update!!
Loved it!!!
Awww Manan moments are soo adorable!!
Love their kisses... soo cute!
Ahhh the selfie moment was too good!! Hehe!
Love Manik asking her for the stuff! King of romance!
He knows what to do and how to do it!!<3<3
Awww he planned a suprise
Oooh they going for a honeymoon!!
Cant wait to see more Manan scenes!!
Eeeks so excited for the next part!
Continue soon!!:)
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