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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.. Manik Bina bataae hi Chaka gya.. N ab realise bhi nHi ker pa raha Wat is the matter..
Sachi bolu toh these actually are the real life problems all couples face.. But ab yeh Manan hai toh lets c how they are going to come above all the odds

Thanx for the update


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Posted: 8 years ago
After so long but its amazing awsime
I hope manik realise his mistake soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank god. u updated.. me bhot miss kr rhi thii . seriously. manik kam me itna busy ho gya ki sb bhul gya. use kuch yaad nhi aa raha use ... poor nandu. kaise ho gyii. andr se itni sad h pr kisi ko nhi btaya. Nyo ne jake kuch kamal dikhaya... ab jake manik ko shyad kuch smjh aayee.. let's see ab kyaa hogaa.. Nandu bhot sad h hurt h.. Ab manik ko smjhna hi pdega. waiting for next update. Thanks for pm Stay blessed.
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Posted: 8 years ago



Thanks for pm.dear

Awesome chapter. ..

Manik is busy in work...

She felt alone. ...

Very interesting update.




Thanks.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Omg super awesome fantastic marvellous update

Manik doesn't realise that Nandu also needs his attention even for few minutes but he needs to be with her

He is taking Nandu for granted and thinks that everything is fine but he needs to taste his own medicine when Nandu started ignoring him he couldn't handle it

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very nice and interesting update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Am really sry for not being able to reply to your comments...network issues hain so please bura math maan na and I promise iss bar ke comments ko pakka reply dungi...!!!

PART 16 :


Nandini..!!! and he whispers seeing her smiling fully having tears in her eyes...!!!!

NANDINI : sorry

MANIK : haa?

NANDINI : tumhe bas sathane ke liye kiya aur kuch nahi

nandini..!!! and he utters staring into her eyes reading a totally different story...!!!

athi hoon..!!! and turning away her gaze she quickly walks out from kitchen making manik close his eyes sighing...!!!

MAYANK : manikk...tu..

MANIK : haan wo umm sone jare the kya

MAYANK : nahi...bol na...

MANIK : kuch nahi bas aise hi

NYONIKA : patha nahi bagwaan apne sare mardo ko ek jaisa kyu paida kiya

MANIK : kaise??

Pagal...matlabi...!!! and stopping in mid nyonika glares manik and simply leaves the room ignoring his calls...

MANIK : maa mujhse itni kyu naraz hain...tchh...

MAYANK : tu bilkul mere jaise nikla isliye

MANIK : matlab

MAYANK : pehle ye batha tu kyu aaya yaha pe

MANIK : mainnn

MAYANK : bath huyi nandini se

MANIK : haan

MAYANK : kya kaha usne

MANIK : patha nahi...uski ankhen kuch aur kehri thi aur uski zuban kuch aur...

MAYANK : tujhe kya lagtha hain uski akhen sach kehri thi yaa

MANIK : uski ankhen kabi jhut nahi kehthe papa

MAYANK : thooo phir kya kaha un ankhon ne mere bete se

MANIK : kuch badal gaya hai hamare beech...ham pehle jaise...pehle jaise nahi hain...

MAYANK : hmmm tho phir ab

MANIK : kuch socha nahi hain uski wo akhen hi dimak main charo ore gumre hain mainnn...

MAYANK : jantha hai teri maa tujhse itni kyu naraz hain

MANIK : nandini ka kayal nahi raka isliye

MAYANK : hahaha nahii

MANIK : tho phir

MAYANK : tu ne wohi galthi ki hain jo salon pehle maine ki thi

MANIK : kyaa

MAYANK : jab teri maa aur meri shadi huyi thi na nayi nayi thab main bi teri tharah kaam ke chakkar main itna busy ho gaya itna busy ho gaya ki teri maa ko bhool hi gaya bilkul usi tharah jaise tu nandini ko bhul gaya

MANIK : bhul gaya...ye aap kya kehre hain...

MAYANK : kyu kya galath kaha maine

MANIK : main nandini ko nahi bhula... mantha hoon ki bohuth zyada busy tha lekin...

MAYANK : acha teek hain mai teri maa ko bhul gaya par tu nandini ko nahi kush????

MANIK : haan...tho phir shayad maa ne apko thab bi ignore kiya hoga jaise mujhe abi kari hain

MAYANK : haan

MANIK : tho phir

MAYANK : phir kya wo apna saman leke apne gar cheli gayi bina bathaye

MANIK : tho apne kya kiya...

MAYANK : kuch karne ka vakth hi nahi diya beta teri maa ne

MANIK : haa???

MAYANK : main kuch kartha usse pehle teri maa ne mujhe divorce papers bej diya

MANIK : kyaaa

MAYANK : haan...bilkul sahi suna tune...

MANIK : tho phir apne aisa kya kiya jo maa ne apna dil badal diya...apko maaf kar diya aur apka sath diya...aaj thak...!!!!

zyada kuch nahi...bas wohi jo zaruri tha...uske liye...mere liye...hamare liye...!!!! and mayank utters smiling making manik cring his eyebrows...

MANIK : wohi...kyaa???

Not replying mayank simply shrugs his shoulders while manik without asking him anything more looks him and main cheltha hoon...!!!!

MAYANK : hmmm

papa...!!!! and manik utters walking a little and stopping near door rubbing his hand at his neck...!!!!

MAYANK : kya hua

MANIK : ye sab...maine jaan buchke nahi kiya...

MAYANK : main jantha hoon manik and its ok...ab bas sab jaldi se teek karde aur meri beti ke chehre par muskurahat vapas lade...

MANIK : ummm

MAYANK : chel jaa ab and don't worry nandini divorce papers bejne valon main se nahi hain

MANIK : tch...papa aap bi na...gud nite

MAYANK : hehe...gud nite...!!!

Maa..!!! and manik calls nyonika seeing her walking into kitchen...!!!

Without replying nyonika stands silently looking away while manik walks close to her and "am sryy...!!!"

NYONIKA : tumhe ye mujhe nahi kisi aur ko bolna chahiye

MANIK : bolunga maa but please aap mujhse yu naraz math rahiye

NYONIKA : tu ne bohuth pareshan Kiya meri beti ko

MANIK : galthi ho gayi and I promise aage se aisi galthi phir kabhi nahi hogi tho please iss bar ke liye mujhe maaf kar dijiye

NYONIKA : teek hain lekin pehle jake meri beti ko mana

MANIK : haan...zarur...

NYONIKA : jaaa...!!!

entering into room manik silently lies down on bed after changing witnessing nandu asleep and nandini..!!!!

seeing her not moving an inch he sighs after waiting for few minutes and closes his eyes having no other option left while nandu slowly opens her eyes gulping down her saliva...!!!!

Lying in the same position for almost two hours nandu slowly gets up and walks towards balcony without looking at manik knowing that he was fast asleep...!!!!

Lifting her head she stands staring at sky blankly without blinking her eyes but closes them soon in no time feeling a person standing beside her and knowing very well who exactly the person was...!!!

Slowly opening her eyes she stands continuing staring at sky without uttering anything while he after waiting for a very long time sighs closing his eyes and "ye khamoshi kyu???"

ignoring him she stands without replying while he takes a deep breath and "kuch kaho na..!!!"

Kya kahu..!!! and she utters in a low tone still looking at sky...!!!

"Kuch bi" and he replys instantly without wasting a second..!!!

"kuch nahi hain...kehne ke liye...!!!" and she utters still not looking him totally lost..!!!

"kya hamare beech bath karne ke liye kuch nahi hain..!!!" and he utters staring nandu not moving his gaze away from her for once...!!!!

"Rath kaafi ho gayi hain...hame sona chahiye..!!!" and she replying in a calm tone simply turns back without sparing him a glance while he holds her hand stopping her from walking away and "naraz ho???"

"Nahi..!!!" and she replies turning back and smiling at him making him stand staring her blankly not knowing what to say...!!!

Freeing her hand she walks away in no time while he coming into senses quickly enters into their room and nandini..!!!

NANDINI : haaa

Walking close to her he holds her shoulders slowly and "ham sabse pehle dosth hain aur hamne ek dusre se..!!!"

"Vada kiya tha ki chahe jo bi ho ham pehle ek dusre se bath karenge...sach kahenge...mujhe yaad hain manikkk..!!!" and she completes cutting off him in between..!!!

MANIK : tho phir kyuu...kyu bath nahi karri ho...sach kyu nahi kehri ho...

NANDINI : bath tho main karri hoon na manik...abi bi...thodi der pehle bahar bi ki thi aur ye tum konse sach ke bare main kehre ho wo tho mujhe patha nahi...

Closing his eyes for a moment he opens them again and "naraz nahi ho mujh pe...jhut kyu kaha...!!!"

NANDINI : maine koyi jhut nahi kaha...main tum se naraz nahi hoon...

MANIK : kyaa

NANDINI : main tum se naraz nahi hoon manik...sach main...

MANIK : tho phir teek se bath kyu nahi karri ho...agar mujh se naraz nahi ho tho phi aise...aise kyu ho???

Smiling she looks him for a second and "kyuki main khud se naraz hoon..!!!"

MANIK : haa???

"main naraz tum se nahi khud se hoon manik..!!!" and she utters slowly moving his hands away from her making him startled..!!!

"kal suba tumhe office hain...so jao..!!!" and she uttering walks into washroom while manik stands in the same position staring at her back..!!!

"kyu...!!!" and manik utters staring at ground as soon as nandu comes out from washroom...!!!

NANDINI : tum soye nahi

"kyuuu...!!!!" and manik repeats lifting his head staring into her eyes...!!!!

"tumhe andeka karke...tumhari har ek lavz ko ansuna karke...chup chap chele jana chahthi hoon...!!!" and she utters walking close to him making him gasp...!!!

"lekin kar nahi pathi hoon...tumhare samne ake yuh tumhare aur tumhare sawalon ke jawab dene lagthi ho...!!!!" and she completes standing in front of him staring into his eyes...!!!!

"isliye...isliye naraz hoon...khud se...!!!!" and she utters after a pause making him completly speechless...!!!

"shadi ke dusre din se hi tumne mujhse bath karna chod diya hain...lekin phir aaj pure ek mahine ke baad jab tum mere paas akar mujhse bath karne lage...main tumpe gussa nahi ho saki...!!!!" and she continues looking him not blinking her eyes for once...!!!!

"isliye...isliye naraz hoon...khud se...!!!!" and she utters smiling slightly making manik lower his head not being able to meet her gaze...!!!!

"pichle ek mahine main tum mere sath nahi rahe...har roj maine apni ankhe khud ko akele pane ke liye kola hain...sara din akele rehne ke liye...khud se bathe karne ke liye kola hain...!!!" and she continues even more further still looking at manik...!!!!

"lekin phir bi iss vakth tumse ye sab kehne main dard hora hain...ye janthe huye ki tumhe mujhse kayi zyada dard hoga...!!!!

isliye...isliye naraz hoon...khud se...!!!!" and she completes making him look into her eyes instantly...!!!!

nandiniii...!!!! and he whispers getting tears in his eyes feeling her pain...!!!!

"pichle ek mahine main tumne mujhe bohuth chot pahunchaya... lekin phir bi iss vakth tumhari ankhon main ansun mujhe pareshan karri hain...!!!!

isliye...isliye naraz hoon...khud se...!!!!" and she utters staring him continuously with tear full eyes while he stands staring her back not being able to utter anything...!!!!

"pichle ek mahine main ek pal nahi tha jab maine tumhare bare main soch nahi...tumhare liye tadpa nahi...!!!!

lekin phir bi...phir bi...sab kuch bhula ke...tumhare paas ana chahthi hoon...!!!

isliye...isliye naraz hoon...khud se...!!!!" and she utters nodding her head smiling making tears flow down from manik eyes...!!!!

itna sab...itna sab ho jane ke baad...main tumhare paas ana chahthi hoon...tumhe gale lagana chahthi hoon...tumhare dil pe sur rake tumhare dil ki dhadkane suna chahthi hoon...!!!!

lekin kal suba tum mujhe phirse akele chod ke chele jaoge ye soch ke kuch kar nahi pari hoon...pichle panch ganto se khud ko rokri hoon...!!!

isliye...isliye naraz hoon...khud se...!!!!" and she utters finally letting her tears roll down while he takes her into a bone crashing hug closing his eyes tightly realising how badly he messed up things...!!!!

"am sryy...am sryy...am sryyy...am so soo sooo sryyy...!!!!" and he repeats and repeats while she stands without hugging him back giving way to her tears flow continuously like a river...!!!!

Breaking the hug after what seems to be an eternity he slowly wipes away her tears while she not letting him speak looks away lazily and "mujhe sona hain..!!!"

Not waiting for him or his reply she moves back quickly and before he could hold her lies down on her bed turning off the lights while he palms his face cursing himself for being an idiot and ruining everything...!!!

seeing her lying back facing him he slowly moves close to her and lays down wrapping his left hand around her waist back hugging her while she bites her lips controlling her tears closing her eyes ever so tightly...!!!

gud nite..!!! and he whispering closes his eyes placing a warm kiss on her head promising her silently to make everything between them alright like before taking responsibility for the mess he created...!!!!!




Phewww done...!!!! kaisa laga??? nandu ka ye reaction expect kiya ya kuch aur socha...bathana bhul na math and haan haan before you ask love is my life update karne ki koshish karri hoon par nahi hora hain please pardon me for that but I promise apko zyada der latkake nahi rakungi aur do teen dino main update dene ki koshish karungi... that's all for now...tata...byyy... byyy...tc...!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesomeee amazinggg suprrbbb update
Nandu ne sahi kiya bilkul pr fir bhi wo manik se naraaz nhi hai...manik ko ab sb kch theek krna hoga
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update...
nandini all dialogues too gud...manik mess everthing...
emotional scene...
nandini is not angry on manik...
this time manik have to do major to bring smiling nandini back...
beautifully written...
loved it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
Manik idiot...urghh...
Nandini still care for him...poor baby...
Continue soon...
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