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Posted: 8 years ago
[Font]please pm me its just aeesome i would like to read next part plsss [/FONT]
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Here is the update now please stop making puppy faces...!!!


PART 15 :


Kya kar rahi hain meri pyari behna..!!! and kabir utters sitting beside nandu who was busy staring ground blankly in garden...

NANDINI : aap yaha

KABIR : hmm main yaha

NANDINI : office nahi gaye aaj sab teek hain na

KABIR : haa baba sab teek hain... jab se tumhara pati office join kar liya hain mere liye tho koyi kaam rehra hi nahi karne hehe isiliye socha gar pe hi ruk jao aaj...

NANDINI : ohhh

KABIR : tujhe kya hua

NANDINI : kuch nahi

KABIR : tho shadi ke baad bayi se jhut bolna bi seek liya tu ne

NANDINI : nahiii aisi koyi bath nahi hain

KABIR : phirse jhut

NANDINI : tchhh

KABIR : bol kya hua jab se manik deal karke lunavla se louta hain thab se tu koyi koyi si rehri hain

NANDINI : zyada kuch nahi wo bohuth busy ho gaya hain tho

KABIR : miss karri

NANDINI : hmmm

KABIR : tu janthi hain na agar jaruri nahi hotha tho wo tujhse door kabi bi nahi rehtha

NANDINI : haan

KABIR : abi ek haftha hi hua na usse office join karke isliye thoda kaam ka stress hain kuch dino main sab teek hojayega aur phir wo tere sath pehle jaisa romance bi karne lagega

chup and she hits him smiling while he takes her in a hug kissing her hairs...

NYONIKA : aa gaye aap

MAYANK : hmm

NANDINI : papa pani

MAYANK : thank u beta

seeing nandu staring at door mayank sighs closing his eyes and "manik aaj bi shayad der se loutega"

NYONIKA : maine kaha tha na apko usse sath main lane ke liye

MAYANK : kaha tha maine lekin wo meri bath mantha kab hain

NYONIKA : lekin

NANDINI : maa...chodiye na...papa aap fresh hojayiye main kana lagathi hoon...

MAYANK : ummm

NYONIKA : tu kyu kadi hain aaja

NANDINI : maa wo

NYONIKA : manik ke sath kane ka bahana math de

NANDINI : maa

NYONIKA : please nandu main ache se janthi hoon ki pichle kuch dino se tu bilkul bi teek se nahi kari hain

NANDINI : nahi maa aisi bath nahi hain main kari hoon

NYONIKA : tu kyu meri bath nahi manthi haan

MAYANK : nyonika

NYONIKA : teek hain... karo apni man maani ka...

NANDINI : maa...maaa...!!!

MAYANK : main dektha hoon usse zyada pareshan math ho

NANDINI : am sryy papa

MAYANK : nahi beta teri galthi nahi hain

NANDINI : aap please jayiye na maa se bath kariye

MAYANK : teek hain...zyada der thak rukna math uske liye...kake soja...gud night...

NANDINI : gud night

Falling on bed nandu stares at manik photo frame and slowly taking her mobile dials his number...

NANDINI : hello

"busy hoon phir se call kartha hoon...!!!" and before she could reply to him call gets disconnected...!!!

Sighing she takes his photo frame and closes her eyes hugging it tightly trying to get some sleep but failing horribly gets up lazily and sits staring his picture untill her eyes give up and close automatically...

hearing a sound nandu sits straight opening her eyes with a jerk only to close them again in relief seeing manik entering into room...

MANIK : sryyy

Not replying she looks at the clock opening her eyes while he moving close to her "kaafi der hogaya aaj...am sryy...!!!"

NANDINI : teen baje koyi gar ane ka time hotha hain

MANIK : I know lekin kaam main busy tha and ab please gussa math karna kyuki bohuth zyada thak gaya hoon aur ek percent ka strength bi nahi bacha mujh main

getting up she arranges the bed silently while he quickly changing himself falls on bed lazily and "mere liye intezar karthe karthe phirse bina kaye baiti tho nahi na"

wanting to answer him she instantly turns her face towards him parting her lips but closes them again even before completion of a nano second witnessing him already drift into sleep...

finding him no where like every morning she gets up slowly and walks into kitchen getting completely ready...

NANDINI : gud mrn

NYONIKA : gud mrn

NANDINI : gussa?

NYONIKA : kana kaya

NANDINI : wooo

NYONIKA : kam se kam nashtha karegi ya

NANDINI : karungi

NYONIKA : bath kiya usne

NANDINI : haan

NYONIKA : kab jara

NANDINI : kaha

NYONIKA : london

NANDINI : manik???

NYONIKA : haan nahi bathaya tujhe tu ne hi kaha na ki usne bath kiya tujhse

NANDINI : nahiii wo mera matlab hain haa bath kiya tha usne lekin london jane ke bare main kuch nahi kaha mujhse

NYONIKA : tere papa ne bathaya mujhe lekin shayad post pone hogaya hain uska jana

NANDINI : mmm

NYONIKA : preeti ke sath bahar jari hoon ayegi kya mere sath

NANDINI : nahi maa aap jayiye

NYONIKA : der hogi shayad mujhe akeli kya karegi yaha aja na mere sath

NANDINI : nahi maa man nahi hain

NYONIKA : teek hain tho phir main jaldi hi vapas loutungi dyan rakh apna hmm

NANDINI : nahi maa aap meri chintha math kijiye aur aram se ayiye

NYONIKA : dekthi hoon...byyy...!!!

NANDINI : byyy

NIGHT 9 PM :

MAYANK : nyonikaaa

NANDINI : maa bahar gayi hain papa...preeti aunty ke sath...!!

MAYANK : teek hain vaise mujhe kuch kehna tha tujhse

NANDINI : jee kahiye

MAYANK : woo manikk

NANDINI : kya hua papa sab teek hain na...manik...manik teek hain na...!!!

MAYANK : haa beta wo teek hain kuch nahi hua usse

NANDINI : oohhh tho phir

MAYANK : bath ye hain ki kuch kaam ki vajah se usse achanak bahar jana pada

NANDINI : ooo...!!! teek hain papa vaise bi wo roj der hi vapas aara hain thoo koyi bath nahi...kab thak ayega batha sakthe hain kya aap..!!!

MAYANK : beta wo...london gaya hain..!!

NANDINI : huhh?

MAYANK : achanak jana pada tho usne kaha rasthe main hi shopping karlega

NANDINI : haa...umm...!!

MAYANK : beta vakth bilkul bi nahi tha tho

NANDINI : teek hain papa koyi bath nahi

MAYANK : tujhe bhuk lagri?? ham dono pehle dinner kar lethe hain aur

NANDINI : maine lunch der se kiya papa...abi nahi ka sakthi...aap kalijiye...

MAYANK : beta tu

NANDINI : main kana lagathi hoon

MAYANK : nahi...mujhe bi abi bhuk nahi hain...

NANDINI : teek hain


ONE WEEK LATER :


KABIR : manikk

MANIK : haan

KABIR : bahar ayega zara

MANIK : kaam main busy hoon kabir baad main

"kaam main busy tum re hi kab nahi rehre hoo mr manik malhotra...!!!!"

MANIK : maa...!!!

NYONIKA : arey wah tujhe tho yaad hoon main

MANIK : maaa...kaisi bathe karre hain...!!!

NYONIKA : kyu...galath kya kaha maine...do haftho se kaam ki vajah se tujhe kisi se milne ka vakth thak nahi hain tho socha shayad mujhe bi bhul gaya hain...apne...kaam ki vajah se..!!

MANIK : pehle aap yaha ayiye aur baitiye

NYONIKA : jee nahi am sry mere paas utna vakth nahi hain

MANIK : lekin

NYONIKA : main yaha tumhe bas ye yaad dilane ayi hoon ki gar main tumhari ek biwi hain jiska kayal rakna tumhara farz hain...

MANIK : ye aap

NYONIKA : tum gar par agar mujhe do minute ke liye bi milthe tho shayad ye bath bathane mujhe yaha thak nahi ana padtha kair mujhe jo kehna tha maine keh diya ab aage tumhari marzi karo jo bi karna hain

MANIK : maaa...maaa...!!!

KABIR : nahi rukegi wo

MANIK : achanak kya hogaya... nandu ne tho kuch nahi kaha mujhse...!!!

KABIR : ek baar bath karle na usse koyi misunderstanding hogi tho clear ho jayegi

MANIK : hmmm...teek hain...aaj rath hi bath karunga usse...!!!


ONE WEEK LATER :


MUKTHI : thnx for the dinner nandini

NANDINI : your always welcome mukthi

DHRUV : special thnx for the kheer too nandini

NANDINI : your welcome too dhruv

MAYANK : lagtha hain sab ne kaafi enjoy kiya

KABIR : hmmm bohuth lekin aap ko miss bi kiya

NYONIKA : tho phir bulaya kyu nahi hame

MANIK : romantic date pe gaye the tho disturb kaise karthe

MAYANK : ayee chup

ALIA : hame nikalna hoga shayad

MUKTHI : hmmm kaafi der hogaya hain

DHRUV : chelo then byee to all

ALIA : yaa byyy

KABIR : byy byyy

MUKTHI : once again thank you nandini kaafi dino baad finally we had our time

NANDINI : am happy that you all are happy and you don't need to thank me at all

smiling mukthi nods her head and gud nite...byyy...

NANDINI : gud nite

MANIK : byy guysss

KABIR : chelo phir main bi nikal tha hoon

MANIK : arey ruk mujhe kuch bathana hain

NANDINI : papa apke liye kuch letters aye hain...maine unhe apke room ke locker main rak diya hain check kar lijiye...

MAYANK : teek hain beta

MANIK : nandu

NYONIKA : kaha jari

NANDINI : kitchen main sab saaf karna hain

NYONIKA : ruk main bi athi hoon

NANDINI : nahi maa teek hain main karlungi

NYONIKA : par

NANDINI : it's ok maa I can manage

MANIK : nandini ek minute

seeing her walking without responding he crings his eyebrows and "nandini main tumse bath karra hoon...!!!!"

KABIR : manik

MANIK : suna nahi dera kya usse

NYONIKA : nahi...suna nahi chahthi...!!!

MANIK : huhh kya kaha

NYONIKA : kuch nahi khud galthi ki hain tho khud hi savar lo

MANIK : haaa...galthi..???

NYONIKA : main sone jari hoon kabir...gud nite...

KABIR : gud nite..!!!

MANIK : papa

NYONIKA : aap nahi aare

MAYANK : haan...ara hoon..!!!

MANIK : papaaa

MAYANK : gud nite

MANIK : goddd

KABIR : ab kada kyu hain jaa nandu ke paas

MANIK : haa

KABIR : jaaa...!!!!

seeing nandu busy in arranging plates manik slowly walks towards her and "nandiniii"

No reply

MANIK : nandiniii

No reply

MANIK : nandini agar bath nahi karogi tho mujhe patha kaise chelega ki problem kya hain

No reply

MANIK : nandini pichle do ganto se tumhare aage piche gumra hoon... tumse bath karne ki koshish karra hoon...tumhe dikayi nahi dera kya...!!!!

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"for god sake just stop f**king ignoring me nandiniii" and manik shouts out loud on top of his voice holding her tightly making her turn towards him only to make his grip loosen on her the very next second as soon as his eyes meet hers...!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago


ohhh u pm me before... but I didn't get any..

now I got it... thank u for pm update...😊


ohhh so manik has taken his work so seriously that he doesn't have any time for his family... he doesn't get any time to even talk to nandini...hawww


how much busy you are but you should always take time for yourself n your family...

manan ki nayi nayi shadi hui h and manik wasn't able to give time to her...she must be feeling so lonely despite having maa n papa with her but as a wife she is craving for attention from her husband n this isn't any wrong deed...

before marriage also she was alone in life n now after marriage also she is feeling the same...

firstly he went to Lonavala n then after coming back from there he didn't has time for her one week... n then he started coming late n then even don't talks to her nor even told her about going to London... n I'm sure from there also he wouldn't hv called her also... n after coming back also he didn't talked her... now where is her fault...??

Though I don't know about Manikz POV yet he is at fault...aise kaam ka kya fyada jab aapke pass apni biwi k liye time hi nahi ho...!!

jitna marzi busy ho aap manik ji kya aap apne 24 hours mein se khuch minute bhi nahi de sakte nandini ko ...haan...??

morning me thodi si baat, ek hug, thoda sa cuddling n one kiss n lunch time mein when u have lunch just give a call or at least text n when u come back if not having dinner together atleast sleep hugging n cuddling to her n one goodnight n good morning kiss won't take ur much time yaar...


and here manik doesn't even know what mistake he is doing n had done...

nandu wasn't even having proper meals... I hope she doesn't fall ill...


ab toh mna lo apni biwi ko...!!! abhi bhi jyada time nahi gya hai...

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nahi yaar ab gussa nhi hun...!!! update milte hi gussa furrr ho gya...!!!
comment bhi kar diya...

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Posted: 8 years ago
now toh I'm waiting for other two stories to get updated...

especially... mystery behind ring...

yaar jaldi update kar do...wait nahi ho paa rha hai...

*puppy face*

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Posted: 8 years ago
pretty please
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow...
Manik is tasting his own medicine..lol
Awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
Its a very emotional update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update..
Emotional..
Manan misunderstanding..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nyc chap...
Bt wat hpn to manik...
Y he is behaving lyk nandini doesnt even ecist...
Cnt soon...
Stay blessed.
Thanks fr d pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update
Loved it
Y husbands ignore wives
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