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Posted: 8 years ago
Where r u? Please update its been so longg..i'm waiting
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Hola people...I know you have been waiting for my update since long...long time...and am really sry for that...right now am working on my another story LOVE IS MY LIFE and will be updating this right after that...so please wait till that and I promise I will surely try to update asap...thank u for waiting with patience till now and am really sry for my irregular updates...will be back soon...luv u... once again sryyy...
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no problem dear...
its totally ok...
will wait fr the update...
take ur time...
excited fr love of my life...n also fr this...
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Its okky
Will be waiting for ur update
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guys due to everyone's requests I have finally decided to post my stories in wattpad and here is the link for my id... do follow me if you don't want to miss any of my works because very soon I will be updating over there and not here...!!!

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PS : will give you an update by tonight and if not then tomorrow for sure...
Edited by anumanan - 8 years ago
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PART 14 :


MANIK : ayeee

NANDINI : haa

MANIK : rukne ko kaha tha na maine neche kyu agayi

NANDINI : manik main kamre main kali baitke kya karthi bekar main aur vaise bi sab log neche the tho

MANIK : tho...tho apne pathi ko akele chodke chele jaogi...

NANDINI : tch manik tum naaa

MANIK : forget it ab idhar aao aur jaldi se ek kiss do

NANDINI : kyaa

MANIK : it's your punishment so common jaldi

KABIR : nanduuu...nanduuu...

NANDINI : aayi

MANIK : oye... you are not going anywhere...

NANDINI : arey hato na kya karre ho sab bahar hain

MANIK : nahi hatunga pehle mera kiss do aur ye tum itna ajeeb kyu behave karri ho isse pehle bi ham akele reh chuke hain jab sare log hamare bahar hi the tho phir ab...ab kyu tumhe iss bath se itni pareshani hori...

NANDINI : thab ki bath alag thi manik ab main iss gar ki bahu hoon

MANIK : aur meri patni...isliye jaldi se apne pati ki bath mano aur...

NANDINI : bas karo manik har vakth shaithani nahi chelegi

MANIK : chilla...kyu...rahi...ho

NANDINI : nahi tho kya karu jagah nahi dekthe vakth nahi dekthe bas apni manmani karthe phirthe ho

"karo jo karna hain...bath hi nahi karni mujhe tumse..." and he walks out silently while nandu sighs watching him walk out without turning back once...

DHRUV : le...agaya...

MANIK : kya hua

MUKTHI : kuch nahi bas nikal re hain

MANIK : kaha

MUKTHI : dhruv ko kabir ke sath kuch kaam hain aur mujhe alia ke sath thoo

MANIK : teek hain

MUKTHI : byy aunty...byyy uncle...

NYO & RAJ : byy beta

DHRUV : tc buddy...nandini kaa...

MANIK : ofcourse...

KABIR : chel byy

NANDINI : kya hua itni jaldi jare ho

MUKTHI : haan ab manik ko sirf tumhare sath hi time spend karna hain tho ham kya kar sakthe hain

DHRUV : yaha bekar main ruke faida nahi hain thooo

MANIK : just shut up guys

KABIR : itna serious kyu hora mazak karre hain

MUKTHI : chod kabir log sahi kehthe hain biwi ke aane ke baad kisi ko dostho ki zarurath nahi hothi

MANIK : tuuu

MUKTHI : nandu byyy main jari

DHRUV : are ruk main bi ara hoon...byy buddy...byy nandini...

NANDINI : byyy

KABIR : chelo main bi nikal tha hoon byyy byyy

MANIK : byyyeee

Alia who was standing silently since long takes fews steps close to manik while manik receiving a call walks away excusing himself not wanting to talk to her...

NYONIKA : ye aur iske phone calls kabi katham hi nahi hothe

ALIA : I'll leave then

NANDINI : byyy

ALIA : hmm

MANIK : maaa main...kyaa...kya dekre ho...

NYONIKA : dekho tho ye mujhse hi bath karra na

MAYANK : lag tho aise hi raha hain parrr

MANIK : ho gaya ya aur bi kuch baki hain

seeing them not replying he sighs bending his head down and then am sryyy...kush???

MANIK : arey kaha na sryyy kyu aise dekre ho

NYONIKA : kyuki har baar ek sry bolne se sab teek nahi hotha

MANIK : maaa

MAYANK : shadi ho chuki hain manik teri...kab bada hoga...kab sikega ki ek ka gussa dusre par nahi nikal the hain...

MANIK : papa mera dimak math kao

NANDINI : manikkk

MANIK : apki beti mujhe already bohuth pareshan kar raki hain isliye please...please ab tum dono bi math shuru hojao...

NYONIKA : kya hua...sab teek hain na...tu...

MANIK : arey kuch nahi teek hain maa kuch nahi teek hain ye apki beti mujhe apne paas bi nahi ane deri hain aur

NANDINI : manik kya karre ho pagal hogaye ho

MANIK : aur kuch bi karne jao tho aise tokthi hain

mayank and nyonika glancing at each other silently walk away from there while nandu stands lowering her head not knowing how to react...

MANIK : varun ka call aya...use milne jara hoon...

lifting her head she looks him without blinking her eyes while he silently leaves avoiding her gaze walking as soon as he can...

yar das minute ke duri par hain... gar chelthe hain na...shadi main tho tu vaise bi nahi aaya...isi bahane tera nandini se bi milna ho jayega...!!! and manik utters driving picking his long old friend varun...

VARUN : sry yar par phir kabi...abi ek zaruri meeting hain varna main tujhe yaha bulatha bi kyu...

MANIK : chel teek hain lekin ek bath batha tu itna kyu pareshan ho ra hain... ek choti si meeting hi tho hain... ho jayegi teek se... zyada stress math le...

VARUN : I really hope so yar

MANIK : meeting bade contact ke liye hain kya

VARUN : nahiii...normal contract hi hain...

MANIK : oohhh...milegi tho milegi...nahi tho nahi...you just relax...

VARUN : kya milegi tho milegi wo contract ofcourse mujhe kisi bi haal main chahiye

MANIK : tu ne kaha na ki ek normal contract hain tho phir

VARUN : aise normal contracts ko ignore karne se aage jake bohuth badi loss hothi hain yar isliye hame kisi bi contract ko hath se nikalne nahi dena chahiye

MANIK : hmmm and now lets just end your professional talks here

VARUN : hehehe teek hain

MANIK : pooja kaisi hain

VARUN : teek hain...pregnent hone ka pura faida utari hain...

MANIK : pregnent????

VARUN : oops tujhe bathaya nahi na...haan...she is pregnent... second month chelra hain abi...

MANIK : kya bath hain...tu tho bada fast nikla yar...

VARUN : well truly it wasn't planned yar but then shayad god planned it for us

MANIK : nice...vaise baby teek hain na...

VARUN : haan...teek hain aur hamesha teek rahe isi vajah se hi tho ye sab karra hoon...

MANIK : matlab

VARUN : I just want the baby to feel special yar manik...main...main usse iss duniya ki har ek cheez dena chahtha hoon...

MANIK : aur isi vajah se uske liye subah sham mehanath karra hain

VARUN : hmmm

MANIK : you are surely going to be a great father man

VARUN : even you would manik... one day for sure...

smiling like never before manik stops the car and here you go

VARUN : thnx yar agar tu nahi atha tho meeting ko shayad time se pohunch bi nahi patha

MANIK : ab itna formal bi math ban chel jaa aur haa teri gadi ko main servicing pe deke tere gar pe bej dunga tu sham main dusri gadi

VARUN : arey nahi yar main

MANIK : jana hain mujhe tu bi jaaa byyy

VARUN : par manik

MANIK : byyy

VARUN : byee

MANIK : maaa...maaa...

NYONIKA : haa haa kya hua

MANIK : papa kaha hain

NYONIKA : apne study room

MANIK : okk thnx

NYONIKA : acha sun tu... manikkk...manikkk...ufff...ye ladka bi na...

MANIK : papa

MAYANK : haan

MANIK : wooo...ek bath kehni thi...

MAYANK : honeymoon pe jana hain na...jantha hoon...wo actually

MANIK : papaaa...pleaseee...

MAYANK : kya hua maine galath kya bola

MANIK : papa main ek serious decision leke aaya hoon apko bathane aur aap hain ki

MAYANK : acha acha sryy bol kya bath hain

MANIK : main office join karna chahtha hoon...fully...

MAYANK : kyaa...par music...

MANIK : dono ko ek sath manage karna chahtha hoon...nahi kar saktha hoon kya???

MAYANK : ofcourse tu kar saktha hain manik...main tho pehle se tujhe yehi kehra tha...tere office join hone se tere music pe koyi asar nahi padegi...

MANIK : thanks dad thank you so much

MAYANK : it's ok par...ek minute...zaruri call hain...

MANIK : hmmm

MAYANK : hellooo...kyaa...par achanak...bath wo nahi hain...ek din main presentation kon thayar karega aur unhe vaha jake sab explain kon karega...nahi...main dektha hoon...

MANIK : kya hua

MAYANK : mehra ke sath ek deal hone vali thi...ek hafthe ke baad...lekin ab wo chahthe hain ki wo deal kal hi ho aur wo bi yaha nahi balki lunavla main...

main abi aya...!!!! and manik runs out without wasting a second leaving mayank totally surprised...

MANIK : nandiniii

NANDINI : haa...kya hua...tum...

MANIK : idhar aao

NANDINI : kya bath hain manik tum

MANIK : baito

NANDINI : haa

arey baito and he makes her sit on his lap comfortably he himself settling on bed...

NANDINI : manik kya karre ho

MANIK : ek zaruri bath karni hain...please...

NANDINI : kya

MANIK : wooo

NANDINI : mmm

MANIK : hamare...bache...!!!

Getting his words a little late she tries to get up from his lap controlling her blush avoiding his eye contact while he not letting her go makes his grip tighter on her making her unable to move even an inch...

MANIK : puri bath tho suno na

NANDINI : manik please

MANIK : nandini...look into my eyes...

NANDINI : chodiye na

jaan...!!!! and he calls her ever so lovingly while she accepting her defeat slowly looks into his eyes lifting her head ever so lazily...

MANIK : papa ne aaj thak mujhe kisi bi cheez ki kami hone nahi di janthi ho na

nandu nods her head slightly while he staring into her eyes licks his lips and "main bi apne bachon ki har ek khwaish puri karna chahtha hoon...unhe har wo cheez dena chahtha hoon jo wo log chahthe hain...!!!"

Lowering her gaze slowly she bites her lower lip and "par...abi...!!!"

MANIK : pooja...varun ki wife...pregnent hain...unki shadi huye teen mahine hore hain...

Holding her chin and lifting her head up manik makes nandu look him and "jantha hoon ki tum kya sochri ho lekin nandini main bas itna kehra hoon ki main hamare bachon ke liye khud ko layak banana chahtha hoon"

"jab bagwan ashirwad dega na thab hamare paas hamare bache honge...lekin...thab thak...thab thak...main itne paise kamana chahtha hoon na...itne paise kamana chahtha hoon...ki usse iss duniya ki sari kushiya mil sake aur main...unhe apne bachon ko de saku"

speechless she sits listening to him staring into his eyes while he continues even more further "you know aaj jab meri varun se bath hori thi mere ander kuch alag hi feelings aare the...jis tharah se wo apne bachon ke liye mehanath karra hain na unhe kush rakne...main bi...main bi apne bachon ke liye mehanath karna chahtha hoon..!!!"

MANIK : sahi sochra hoon na main...bolo hmmm...!!!!

simply staring him for good few minutes she smiles at him and "haan...tum sahi karre ho...!!!!"

MANIk : tho kya tum mera sath dogi kya tum

NANDINI : ofcourse main tumhara sath dungi manik chahe jo bi tum karna chaho...I promise...

MANIK : main office join karna chahtha hoon aur dad se bi bath kar chuka hoon

NANDINI : manik ye tho bohuth achi kabar hain

MANIK : aurrr

NANDINI : aur?

MANIK : ek deal hain jo hamare company ko karni hain aur jo infact kal hi karni hain

NANDINI : tum karna chahthe ho wo

MANIk : ummm

NANDINI : tho karo na soch kya rahe ho

MANIK : mmm... wo deal yaha nahi... mujhe lunavla main karna hoga...

Seeing her not being able to utter anything he closes his eyes for a second and "nandini...agar tum...!!!"

"Ek sawal karna chahthi hoon" and she utters not letting him complete...

MANIK : kya

NANDINI : kitchen main jo hua uski vajah se tum gussa nahi ho na

MANIK : tumhe kya lagtha hain main gussa hoon isliye lunavla jana chahtha hoon

NANDINI : woo

MANIK : arey meri jaan main tumse gussa nahi hoon aur agar kabi gussa honga bi tho tumse uss vajah se door nahi jaonga samjii

NANDINI : sach??

MANIK : much...!!!!

NANDINI : tho phir teek hain...tum jao lunavla...

MANIK : sach bathao agar tum nahi chahthi

NANDINI : ache kaam karne main der nahi karna chahiye manik aur vaise bi main tumhe lunavla jane ki permission tho deri hoon par tumhe deal katham karke kal rath thak vapas loutna hoga...samje...

MANIK : teek hain madam main kal rath thak vapas ajaonga

NANDINI : nahi tho phir main naraz hojaongi aur bath bi nahi karungi

MANIK : uski zarurath nahi padegi

nandu smiles slightly while manik continues main papa se milke atha hoon

NANDINI : teek hain

MAYANK : manik... tujhe achanak ho kya gaya...tu...

MANIK : kya main wo deal karne lunavla ja saktha hoon

MAYANK : haaa???

MANIK : mehra ke sath deal...kya main wo kar saktha hoon...

MAYANK : tu...tu kaise...

MANIK : kyu kya hua mujhpe barosa nahi hain

MAYANK : nahi manik mere kehna ka matlab wo nahi tha...teri shadi kal hi huyi hain tu nandu ko chodke...

MANIK : it's ok papa main nandu se puch chuka hoon

MAYANK : tune bathaya usse ki thuje lunavla jana hoga

MANIK : haan

MAYANK : agar use problem nahi hain tho mujhe bi nahi hain

MANIK : thank you so much papa

MAYANK : lekin tujhe shayad ek gante main nikalna hoga

MANIK : ooo

MAYANK : manik tujhe ye karne ki zarurath nahi hain agar tu

MANIK : nahi...main teek hoon...main thayar hoke miltha hoon...

MAYANK : teek hain

NANDINI : agaye tum

MANIK : hmm

NANDINI : vaise tumhe nikalna kab hoga rath main hi na main sochri thi ki

MANIK : nandini

NANDINI : haan

MANIK : am sryy

NANDINI : kya hua sry kyu

MANIK : mujhe... ek gante main nikal na hoga...

NANDINI : ek gante main

MANIK : am really sry nandini

NANDINI : manik tum pagal ho

MANIK : I know nandini main

NANDINI : you know what forget it

MANIK : nandini...nandini...

NANDINI : arey ab kya...mujhe bag pack nahi karne doge kya...

MANIK : haaa

NANDINI : ha kya...bina kapdon ke jaoge lunavla...

MANIK : nahi wo main

NANDINI : acha bathao kapdon ke alawa kya pack karu

MANIK : ummm

NANDINI : vaise jo bi zaruri saman hoga main wo laga dongi kuch aur hoga tho batha dena

MANIK : hmm

NANDINI : ooo...hellooo...manikkk

MANIK : haa

NANDINI : tumhara phone thab se bajra uta kyu nahi rahe ho

MANIK : phone?

NANDINI : tum bi na

MANIK : hellooo...haan...main thayar hora hoon...nahi...bath kar sakthe hain hum...haa...ek minute...

seeing manik walking out nandu sighs closing her eyes leaning back to cupboard and "control nandini control...ek rath ki hi tho bath hain...kal ajayega vapas...kyu bekar main filmon ki heroin ke jaisa senti hori ho"

manik tu pagal hogaya hain and nandu opens her eyes listening to nyonika voice

NANDINI : maa

NYONIKA : kaha gaya tera pati

NANDINI : bahar hi hain phone par bath karra

NYONIKA : ye ladka na

NANDINI : maa please manik ko kuch math kahiye

NYONIKA : kyu

NANDINI : kyuki maine hi use lunavla jane ko kaha

NYONIKA : kya

NANDINI : haan

NYONIKA : bhul gayi...kal hi shadi huyi hain teri usse...

NANDINI : maa please kuch math kahiye na...na hi manik ko aur na hi mujhe...

NYONIKA : aise bejegi usse... haa aise...

NANDINI : maa

jaa jake pehle ache se role uske baad kar uska bag pack and nyonika uttering in low tone leaves the room while nandu lets her tears flow down bending down her head

MANIK : nandini

NANDINI : thank god manik tum agaye...patha hain kab se wait karri thi...deal ke kaam se hi jare ho tho itni der phone main bath karne ki kya zarurath thi...ab chelo jao... jaldi se thayar hojao...sirf pandra min reh gaye hain...dekh kya rahe ho...jao jaldi...der hojayegi...

Manik quickly returns after freshening up and changing and "nandini"

NANDINI : manik ek baar bag check karo na dekho ki main kuch bhul tho nahi gayi

MANIK : nandini

"haan mani" and manik hugs her ever so tightly running towards her making her stop in mid...

MANIK : am really sryy...am very very sryyy...agar tumhe leja saktha tha tho

I know manik...it's ok... and she utters cutting him in between hugging him back...

MANIK : main jaldi vapas aonga

NANDINI : patha hain mujhe

MANIK : rona math

NANDINI : stop it manik...bachi nahi hoon...janthi hoon ki kaam zaruri hain...

MANIK : aur phir bi mere samne ansuyon ko rokri ho...hain na...

Breaking the hug slowly she lowers her head trying to utter something while he lifting her head holding her chin places his lips on hers trying to calm her down...

listening to the door knock they part away lazily but manik hugging her back instantly rubs her back and "kayal rakna apna..."

tum bi...!!! and she utters with shivering tone trying hard to control herself and her tears...

MAYANK : ready hain

MANIK : haan

MAYANK : vaha pahunch the hi call kar...maine sare arrangements kardi hain lekin phir bi agar kuch zarurath pade tho batha dena mujhe...

MANIK : hmm teek hain

MAYANK : nyonika jaa raha hain wo ab tho bath karlo usse

NYONIKA : nahi karni mujhe koyi bath usse...kaho jane ko...mujhe kya farak padtha hain...

MANIK : soch lo...iss baar mazak main nahi sach main jara hoon...

NYONIKA : tu

MANIK : maaa...ansu kyu...konsa bada yudh karne jara hoon main...

NYONIKA : tujhe achanak ho kya gaya hain...jana zaruri hain kyaa...

MAYANK : nyonika bacha nahi hain wo jantha hoon pehli baar gar se bahar jara hain lekin phir bi tumhe itna pareshan hone ki zarurath nahi hain

NYONIKA : aap chup kariye...kuch nahi janthe hain aap...aur tu...aaj se pehle kisi music album ke liye bi bahar nahi gaya tho phir ab kyu...

MANIK : maa please...bada hona chahtha hoon...kuch karna chahtha hoon...ashirwad dijiye...bas...

NYONIKA : teek hain jaisi teri marzi

MANIK : chelo now smile

NYONIKA : hmmm

MANIK : biwi ko gar pe chodke jara hoon serial ki saas banke torture math karna bichari ko

NYONIKA : chel jaa...pagal...

MANIK : byyy

MAYANK : presentation ke bare main kuch bi doughts ho tho arav se bath karle

MANIK : hmmm...chelo phir nikal tha hoon...

MAYANK : haan

chelu???? and manik asks looking nandu who was standing like a statue since long...

NANDINI : haan

MANIK : haan kya haan give me a hug common

moving close to him she hugs him ever so lazily and "byyy"

I love you...!!!! and he kisses her hairs ever so lovingly...

tc...byyy...!!! and he utters breaking the hug looking into her eyes...

smiling she nods her head and byyy...!!!!

watching him till he gets out sight nandu returns back along with mayank and nyonika while they both stare each other seeing how well nandu was acting looking completely fine...

MAYANK : beta tu jaa kamre main aram karle

NANDINI : nahi papa main teek hoon

NYONIKA : kaam hi nahi hain tho yaha ruk ke kya karegi ja apne kamre main aur thodi der aram kar

hmmm...!!! and she uttering walks towards her room finally letting tears roll down her cheek which she was stopping since long...





PS : Next update as soon as I can...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Suprb update
Luvd it totally
Thnkx for pm
N plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh so beautiful the way Manik acts cool in front of everyone and the way he explains her that he wanted to work and earn for his kid's so cute..
Poor MaNan one daybold marriage again one day separation...

Very well penned thanks for the update and the PM
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome
Loved it
Manan convo is so cute
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Posted: 8 years ago
what a come back yaarr!!!!

lovely update!!
Manik 's realization is way too much lovingly penned out !!
plzz update soon...😊

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