#2 MANAN FF DO DIL EK JAAN PART 23 ON 53 - Page 14

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SIAZAHEED.1 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update...
Mostly their lovable talks...😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
Aweosme .. I totally love MaNan here. So beautiful they are. Aliya is so mean. Hope Nandini's good heart changes Aliya too.. Beautifully penned down Nandini's PoV n I loved it Bahut sara. Thank you for awesome update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Such a nice update.!

Manan moments were so cute...they kissed...n the way expressed...their feeling.!

Manik u were so adorable..:)

Loved it whn manik took stand for her.!

Ummm nandini did right thing ...the way she make him understand awesome..!

U have written beautifully...!

Loved it..!

Thankx for the pm..!

Continue soon.!

Stay blessed!


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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update Loved manan moments Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Really nice story.
I like it a lot. .
Plzz updated soon
And pm me also..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update!!
Loved it totally!!
Tysm for the pm!
The way nandu explained manik was very nice!
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Kaha gayeb ho gayi phirse yaar???
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update...

Manik was sooo caring n protective for nandu...
He soothened her pain with his lovely gestures...😳😊
Their confession was simply awesome...
That feeling wen ur love cares for u is beyond beautiful...

Bt i didnt liked when manik shouted at every1..😡
It shud have been for alia only...
Bt he said...
in logon ko tho adath hogayi hain choti si bath ko bada karke thamasha karne ki...
dimag kharab karke rakha hai SAB ne...

I understand he was angry with alia for hurting his love bt what did his parents do?
He was soo rude with them ...
Caring n protecting ur wife doesnt give u right to shout n disrespect ur loving parents...
I hate him for this...

They love ur wife like a daughter...so cnt they have right to scold her ??
I liked ki nandini didnt argue n apologised to nyonika...
Bt she shud also make manik realise this n make him apologise to his parents ...

ab tumhare sath mujhe kya kya karna hain wo bi yaha bathao..ishhh..😳
Itna angry hone ke baad bhi ye ...😳
He is truly hell naughty guy...😆😆

Nandini's explaination abt alia was beautifully penned down...
I loved that part ...
Giving others pain wont get u gain happiness...

Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyy
Both the updates were awesome!!
The way manik explained to orphanage kids about being special was really amazing and you have written it very beautifully!!
Kisse pyar nai hoga yaar is manik se
He was awesome
And beacuse of alia uska mood off ho gya!!
Nandinis explanation about alia situation was superb
Everything was prefect!!
Hats off to you for writing such a beautiful piece
Waiting for next
Thanks for pm
Take care
Keep smiling
Love you
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Posted: 8 years ago
where r u????
hope u r fine
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