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monstermanik

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

beautiful update...

loved manan moments..

cont soon
waiting...

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kiranmai_angel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Awesome

I loved your writing vry much

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navla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

awsum update...
manik shouted on alia...
nandini make manik understand...explanation was nice...
loved d update...

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Vandyandy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

ANU...

THKS FOR THE PM...MUAAHHH

JUST PERFECT ...

NANDU DID THE RIGHT THING ...

TREATING ALIYA THE WAY ALIYA SPOKE TO NANDU WOULDN'T BE ANY DIFFERENCE IN THEM...

I MEAN KI AGAR NANDU BHI JAKAR ALIYA SE USSI TONE MAIN BAAT KARTI TOH ALIYA AUR NANDU MAIN FARAK KYA RAHEJATA...

BUT ALIYA SHOULD PUT A HOLD TO HER FEELINGS FOR MANIK , AS HE IS MARRIED AND HAPPY WITH NANDINI..

MANIK KA GUSSA BHI SAHI HAI ...

NANDU KO ISS CONDITION MAIN DEKH MANIK APNE AAP KO ROKH NAHI PAYA AUR GUSSA SABPE NIKAL RAHA THA...

LOVED MANAN MOMENTS BEING IN THE CAR ...THE WAY HE WAS SOOTHING HER SORROW WITH HIS SOFT KISSES

OR IN THE ROOM WHERE NANDU WAS COOLING HIM DOWN

AWESOME...

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dhillon90

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Amazinggg...awesomeee...suprrbbb update
Omggg manik ka gussaaa baap re...aliya ko bach gyi aane wale toofan se...lovd it...continue soon

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Tiara115

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Wow..

Lovely

Nyc explanation

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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pravidya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

wowww its awesome there is no need fight back whatever nandu said is exactly correct i loved it thanks for the pm

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Sweetsuraiya2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Amazing...

Superb...

loved manan moments...

plzzz continue soon...

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Shafya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Hey dear that was a nice update. ..
U portrayed nandu's feelings so well nd I just loved this thought of urs bcs sometimes it is needed nd if we will answer them then it will lead to a big fight nd increase the distance between the two. ...
I completely agree with you that nandu should not do the same with aliya but I hope from next time she will not let aliya hurt her...
Ok bye take care. ...

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Sakshi_maheta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

Awesome...
Loved id...
Manan moment was so cute...
Thanks for the PM...
Waiting for the next part...

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