DANCING DREAMS New MANAN FF part 12 page 101 updated - Page 57

Oh my god!!
It's so beautiful update...
This update showed how dear Nandini is for manik..
He craves for her...
He can't share her attention with anyone else..
Mukti & navya found out about them...
It was very blissful update...
U should update it everyday if possible.. 😉
Ahhhaa!!
I love this story so much...
U r doing well as a writer.. 👏
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read the further parts..

thanks for the pm...

here is the review of first part...

ohhh so it was sound from nanu's room...thank God nobody saw them or catched them in compromising situation... 😉
manan got saved...!!!

nanu was little hesitant now to let nandini do her daily chores after seeing her family background n the way she lives like a princess in her house...but nanu you forgot whether she is princess or belongs to quite richie rich family... she won't leave taking care of her dear ones n now u also comes in that category...

manik was highly impressed with nandini to see respect n love for his nanu...

nandu toh nanu k pass hi so gayi...paer dabate dabate...!!! such a Caring girl she is...!!

navya ne subah subah pakad hi liya nandu ko n apni interrogation kar hi dali...

why is nandini confused? when she knows he loves her n she also does then why confusion...!!!

navya ne aakhir khar pta hi lga liya ki manan ka relationship kitna aage badh chuka hai...!!!nandini ko jiss question ka darr tha woh puch hi liya navya ne...hehee


nandu is such a baby...everyone loves to pamper her...

love the bond she has with her jeej n bhai...!!
abhimanyu explained nandu very well n she agreed to his conditions...

nanu is also very much impressed with her n sees perfect daughter in law in her...awww that was very cute...

navya doesn't leaves any chance to tease manik... nandu is specially preparing breakfast for him...awww

Rishabh hahaaa...students ko toh bhana chahiye studies bunk karne ka...heheee...

liked the way cabir is concerned towards rishab's future...

amms n nanu are gelling up very well with each other...

now what's cooking in navyaz mind...what she is gonna do make sure manik is serious in relationship with nandu...???

chali me toh chali aage read karne...

bbyeee

part2

manik was getting so irritated on not getting any chance to be with nandini...n navya is trying her level best to irritate him more n that too intentionally... n she is enjoying that...

saali hone ka pura fiyada utha rahi hai...apne jeejaji ko pareshan kar ke...

ohhh so manik wants to impress everyone of her family members so that he can be in their good looks so that he can be nearer no nearest to his nandini...awww

manik beta papad belo...ladki k ghar walo ko impress karna asaan baat thodi na hai...lage raho manik baba...😃

pari is also on manik's side...ho bhi kyn nahi...future fufag jo hai...😊

mukti also get to know about manan...awww...which in return made nandini very shy...heheee😉

song selection itself is little tedious job as u have to select the best n this thing also takes time...👍🏼...good job...
loved the song...

pictures of western Ghats n coffee estates were so good...

PART 3

"Okay okay... do you know the way to the beach house
from here..." Cabir asked her and in the meanwhile
Manik entered the shelter too. Manik gave an intense
look to Nandini which she avoided again.OHHH HOO SO MANIK N NANDINI ARE GONNA HAVE RIDE ON HORSE...THAT TOO ALL ALONE...
N MADAM AAP MANIK KO AVOID KARKE ACHA NAHI KAR RAHI HAI...HE WILL TAKE REVENGE FOR THIS ALL AVOIDING..


"Thanks Jeej... I love you..." Nandini went and hugged
him. ...jeej ko love you bol diya n jis ko bolna chahiye usse hi nahi bol rahi ho madam...now toh he will become more angrier n stubborn... BEST OF LUCK MADAM👍🏼


Since morning you have been avoiding me, and on top
of that Navya is pissing me off with her teasing... I
wanted to hold you.. I wanted to hug you.., get close to
you... I want to kiss you..." he was blabbering and
Nandini's mouth fell open.
"Yes that's what is wrong... I couldn't just watch you
without touching you..," he cupped her face in his
palms. ...finally he got the chance to be with her all alone... unless n until he feels her, hug her, touch her, kiss her, cuddle to her he can't be calm man...



"Sshh..." he puts a finger on her lips..." don't say
anything... I don't want to force you... whenever you
feel like it, than only say it... not due to my force..." he
stopped her. Her eyes shed a few drops of tears. The
way she was overwhelmed by his love is very cute. ...though he desperately, eagerly wanna from her confession but at the same time doesn't wants to force her...n is ready to wait for it...that's very sweet of him n showed how maturely he thinks...


I think they should stay separate and have a hit and miss
sessions as right now they are not even in a relationship n nandu hasn't even confessed it but this isn't merely reason for their hit miss session... firstly she is in her house with her joint family if by chance somebody catches them they are gonna be in deep trouble...

n moreover to show how much they love each other getting intimate is not only the way... They should spend quality time with each other...should know each other more n their family n all...n for getting intimate they have their long life ahead..

Hey 1st wish u a very happy Diwali ...

Wow amazing update..

Haww!!! Loved this face of manik...
How cute he is when he miss nandu and get her back in his arms
Awesome update dear...
Loved manan a lot n lot..
I really don't want a hit and miss yaar...
Instead make them get intimate na...
Waiting for the next part...
Missing yor story a lot...
Continue soon...
Stay blessed...

Firstly sorry for late commenting. Hell busy bcoz of festive season now got time to read it. Update is awesome. Navya is giving hard time to manik hehe, nandu literally checked his patience level. Manik look so adorable nagging like a baby, when he didn't hug n kiss nandu. Can u pl try to update this ff on wattpad too. As inline comments option is really awesome. Here few things skipped from while typing. Thanx for pm.

Hey writer! Plz update your ffs sooonish...eagerly waiting to read further exciting updates... :)

Pls update... waiting waiting😭