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Posted: 8 years ago
Iam so sorry keerthu
Can't be regular...got stuck with some work...from today will be regular...missed delicate love story badly...so happy after reading it
Awesome updates... manan's moments were amazing... Beautifully written... dhruv and nandini's Bond was adorable... nandini's surprises for manik were mindblowing... loved it... manan's uno game was superb...well written... manan's bond was beautifully shown... interesting... thanks for pms... excited to read further
Keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Cute manan

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey dear!
I love you!! Hahaha now listen why i said this.. You know what i just read your update and after reading this i said those words to you!
Yaar kaise likh leti hu aise updates yaar.. I love your every update!
I liked that part in which nandini asked him to make love and how manik obliged to her wants..
Keep writing like this! Keep it up dear!
Thank you for pm!
Continue soon! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love the ff
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Posted: 8 years ago



Part-32

Nandini opened her eyes and saw Manik missing on her side.She then checked the surroundings and understood that she is in the bedroom.She sat on the bed and saw she was wearing Manik's shirt and smiled understanding who did all these.Then came Manik after freshening up.

Ma-Good morning Nandu...

He said and sat beside her.

Nan-Morning Manik..

She said and hugged him.

Soon she got freshen up and they both explored the city's romantic places and ended the day with another passionate erotic journey.

The next morning,Manik woke up when his phone was constantly buzzing.

He opened his eyes properly and attended the call,pacing around the room.Feeling his absence,she woke up and saw Manik being on phone.

"Yeah..ok...I'll be there.."He said and Nandini understood something serious.

She slolwly went and back hugged him while he was still on call.He hasn't responded to her promixity and was busy with the call.So she waited for him to end it and then he turned her towards him.

Nan-Kahi jaana hai...??

Ma-Wapas jaana hai...Mumbai..

He said slowly.

Nan-But Manik...

Ma-I know jaan...we haven't enjoyed our honeymoon yet..But..plz try to understand..It's about my dream and I have to be there...But I promise,we'll definitely come again...

Nan-It's ok Manik...I can understand...

Ma-I'm sorry..

Nan-Plzz don't be...

She said and hugged him.

They boarded the flight and headed towards Mumbai.

For one month,Manik got busy with the new dream project and was having a very hectic schedule.Nandini,too got busy with her exams and they both haven't got any proper time.

One month later,

Nandini's exams got over and Manik too came back to his regular schedule.

They planned for a proper day out and went for dinner.

They made love after a very long time and was resting in each others arms.

In the morning,Nandini's phone rang and before Manik gets disturbed,she attended the call and it was Amms.

Nan-Good Morning Amms...

Amms-Good morning beta...kaisi ho..??

Nan-I'm fine Amms...Aap kaise ho..??aur ghar par sab..??

Amms-Sab theek hai beta...Nandu...Actually I called to discuss about very important matter...Agar Manik beta permit karenge toh can u plz come..??

Nan-Jii Amms...I'll come...

Amms-And ha..Ho sake toh Manik ko bhi bulaao beta...

Nan-Jii Amms..I'll tell him..But I can't be sure ki wo aayenge...I mean he is very busy these days...I'll try...

They both hung the call and Nandini again went into Manik's embrace.

But Manik woke up immediately and said "Good Morning jaan.."

"Good Morning Manik...Aap uth gaye..??"She said and sat on bed.

He was about to go to jog and she called him "Manik.."

Ma-Haa

Nan-Amms ne call kiya...

Ma-Oh..kya kaha..??

Nan-She asked me to come if u permit...Can I go..??

Ma-Ha jaao na...Isme poochne wali baath kya hai...It's ur house...

Nan-Manik...Will u come with me..??Amms aap ko bhi bulaya hai..

Ma-Sorry Nandu...I have a meeting...U go na...I'll drop u and come in the evening to pick u..Then I'll meet them..Ok..??

Nan-ok..

They got ready and Manik went to office after dropping Nandini at her house.

Murthy's residency

Nandini wished everyone and after all the casual talk,they settled in the living area.

Amms-Nandu...Do u know the reason why I called u here..??

Nan-No Amms...Kuch important hai..??

Amms-Haa Important hai...It's about ur bhai..

Nan-Bhai..???

She looked at Harshad.

Amms-Do u know about his relation with Mukthi..??

She questioned directly which surprised Nandini.

Nan-What...??Mukthi..??

She doesn't know how to react,whether to be happy or shocked.

Amms-Haa...When we asked him about marriage he said that he is in love with her...

Nan-Bhai...Aap ne mujhe batahya kyun nahi...??

Amms-Nandu...U don't know about this..??

Nan-No Amms...

Amms-Hmm...So what do u think we should do..??Mukthi tumhari best friend hai and we too like her...

Nan-Awesome Amms...Mukthi would be really a perfect match for Bhai...

After all the discussions,Nandini and Harshad were in her room.

Nan-Bhai...U haven't even told me na...??

Har-Acha...Did u tell me about Manik..??Nahi na..??

He said and showed his tongue.She playfully hit him and hugged him being very happy for their relation.

"Mukthi ko mein baadh mein dhekh loongi.."She thought.

In the evening,Manik messaged her that he couldn't come and sent his driver to pick her up.

At night,Manik returned home and Nandini was waiting for him to share the happy news about her brother.After his dinner and all,in their bedroom...

Ma-Nandu...Ghar pe sab kaisa hai..??

Nan-Ache hai Manik..Actually...I have to tell u something...

Ma-Ha bolo na...

Nan-Bhai ki shaadi fix ho gayi hai..

She said with widest smile and Manik was shocked listening it.

Ma-What...??Kis ke saath..??And what about Mukthi...??

He asked in shock and now this shocked Nandini.

Nan-Aap ko patha hai...unn dhonon ke baare mein..???

Ma-Nandu...just answer me...with whom did Harshad's marriage got fixed..??

Nan-U answer me first...aap ko patha hai..??

Ma-haa patha hai..and now tell me...

Nan-Patha hai...?? Aur mujhse chupaya..??

She asked in mere shock.

Ma-Nandu...plz..don't drag the matter...U r irritating me...Now for god's sake just tell me...with whom did Harshad's marriage got fixed..??

He asked in a stern way.

Nan-Mein drag kar rahi hu..???Mein...?? U hid this matter...that too about my brother and my best friend...and saying that I'm dragging the matter...waah...patha nahi aur kya kya chupaya mujhse...

She too said in an angry tone.

Ma-Nandu...yaar...don't start it again...and yeh kya mera bhai,mera friend laga rakha tum..??Listen Mukthi is my sister too...samjhii...??and tum kaha ki baath kaha le ja rahi ho...???dhimag toh theek hai na...??

He said in an irritating voice.

Nan-Nahi..I have lost it...

She said raising her voice and turned to leave but he grabbed her holding her arms tightly.

Ma-Don't irritate me even more than this...Aakhiri baar pooch raha hu...Harshad ki shaadi kis se fix hui hai..??

Seeing his anger in his eyes,Nandini understood that she misled the conversation and just answered in a stammering tone "Wo...Mukthi se..."

He immediately left her hands and called Mukthi.

They had a general conversation and Manik slept without seeing Nandini's face because he thought it's better to calm himself down before uttering any word to her.She felt a little sad seeing him like that.

Next morning...

Nandini woke up and Manik has already gone to his jog.Just then her phone rang and it was Mukthi.

After all the general conversation,Nandini spitted out the little fight they had,the previous night.

Muk-What...?? U both fought because of us...?? Are u mad Nandu...?? Why did u argue with him..??

Nan-But...What did I do...?? He hasn't told me about u...

Muk-And why will he say...?? Did ur brother tell u..?? Nahi na...Did I tell u..??Nahi na...Then how could u expect Manik to tell about this...?? Aur waise bhi jab se shaadi hui hai,tab se u guys are busy with ur own problems...How will he say..??Just think Nandu...and moreover,Manik just knew that we feel something about each other..Even he has no idea when we got into relationship...

Nandini kept mum listening her.

Muk-Nandu...say sorry to him..right now...faalthu mein scene ko drag math kar...samjhi..??

Nan-Ok..

She said and cut the call when Manik came back from jog.

"Manik.."She called him but he went to take shower without listening her.She waited for him to come out and as soon as he came out,he was on call,discussing about an important work.

Before he left the room,she tried to talk to him but he left without looking at her,hurting her even more.

She tried to call him twice but he hasn't answered the calls too,being busy with the work.

At night,

Manik came from office after a tiresome day and Nyonika was waiting for him.

Nyo-Manik...

Ma-Jii Mom...

Nyo-Go fresh and come...Dinner ready hai...

Ma-Yeah Mom...

Nyo-Manik...

She again called.

Nyo-Is everything ok between u and Nandu..??

Manik made a confused face and said "Yeah Mom..everything is fine...Kyun..?? Kya hua...??

Nyo-wahi toh mein pooch rahi hu...She hasn't ate anything since morning...and was in her room only...

Ma-What...??? Mom..Didn't u call her for dinner...??

Nyo-I called beta...But she said she'll have it after u come...

Manik gritted his teeth and was about to leave.

Nyo-Manik..I don't know what happened...But plz zara dheere se samjhaana usko...gussa math ho...bachi hai wo...

Ma-Mom..itni bhi choti bachi nahi hai wo jo apna khyaal khud na rakh sake...

He said in anger.

Nyo-Manik...plz...

She almost tried to calm him down and he just nodded his head saying "Don't worry..I'll handle her.."

He went to his room and saw Nandini resting her head on the bed post,sleeping in the sitting position itself,placing her one hand on her stomach.

His anger increased seeing her like that.He silently got freshen up and Nandini opened her eyes when he was about to leave the room.

She was about to call him but he went off closing the door with a thud.

She was thinking about him and then he came back after 5 mins holding a plate.

He silently went up to her and sat beside her,forwarding the spoon of rice.

She looked at him blankly just to read the expression on his face,but couldn't.

"Sorry" She mumbled without eating.

He gritted his teeth and his nose flared with anger but didn't react to her sorry.She already had her tears in her eyes but she said again "Manik...I'm sorry...Plzz...baath kariye mujhse..."

He looked at her and kept the plate aside and held her arms pulling her towards him.

"What do u think of urself ha...?? Kya zaroorat thi yeh sab karne ki..??? Have u lost it...?? Subah se kuch nahi khayi..???"He bursted out.

"Sorry Manik...aapse baath kiye bina..."She said slowly in his arms.

"Are u mad...?? I was busy...I thought of talking to u in the evening aur mein busy ho gaya tha...iss mein itna scene create karne ki kya zaroorat hai...??"He said.

"Aap gussa nahi ho..??"She asked while her tears trickled down.

"Gussa...?? Nahi...I thought I should calm down before talking to u...I just don't wanna hurt u in anger...That's it..."He explained.

"Manik...if u are angry na..just daatiye mujhe...chillayiye mujhpe...chahe toh haath bhi uthayiye...aap ka poora haq hai..but plz khaamosh math rahiye...That silence of urs just kills me from inside...I can tolerate everything but aap ke dhooriyan nahi...mein mar.."She said and Manik placed his finger on her lips and interrupted her saying "Uss se pehle mein mar jaunga Nandu..."

She just hugged him tightly showing all the love she has hidden from morning.He responded to her and mentally scolded himself for making her cry and starve.

He gently placed his lips on hers and said "I'm sorry jaan..."

"I'm sorry Manik.."She said cupping his face.

He immediately took the plate and forwarded the spoon.

"Pehle aap.."She said and fed him.

And they both fed each other clearing the misunderstandings and gave peace to their DELICATE hearts.

Done...

Sorry...little busy but managed to write this since last 5 days...

This one is for u @Panimanan123

Thank u all the supporters and commenters...

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Edited by keerthupranu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing part
please continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh thank you so much dee.ithna busy me update kardhiya .me pure update nehi padliya coment karne kibath padunka. Thank yousomuch deee.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awww superrr


Sooo cute

Mukbi hehe superrr


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Posted: 8 years ago
Yeh nandini aur manik ki fight to baseless thi..totally immatureness..

but more than that one thing hurt me so much..Yeh murthys kitne double standard aur 2 faced ppl hai..Harshad and mukti ke liye kitne easily maan gaye..aur nandini pe to duniya bhar ki restrictns..she doing love marriage was not tolerable then why Harshad?

and maniks behaviour was soo wrong..he ignored her and then got angry on her..wow..simply egoistic

still u wrote it all beautifully

I liked d update
Edited by KYYian - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hot Awesome update
Thx for pm
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