MANAN 'ISHQ...EK ANOKHA EHSAAS...!!!!' PART 11 ON PG 40 - Page 29

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PART 13 :


MAA : pari bas beta...aithe rothe nahi...papa are hain...papa ayenge aur phir pari ko apne godh mai lenge aur phir

MANIK : pariii...!!!

DAI MAA : agaya tu...le isse...!!!

"Pari...kya hua bache...kyu rore ho aise...!!!" and manik utters taking her into his arms while pari goes and goes on crying kicking him with her tiny hands and legs trying to get away from him..!!!

MANIK : pariii...teek hai...ham...ham bahar jayenge...haa...chelo...!!!

Within few minutes manik tries each and every thing from taking pari to walk to sing a song for her but nothing calms her down and this worries shit out of him...!!!!

KABIR : kya hogaya hain yar normally tho tere gane se pari bilkul chup ho jathi hain

MANIK : wahi tho mujhe samaj nahi ara kabir...pariii...bas beta...aise rothe nahi...!!!

KABIR : fish manik jaldi kuch kar bohuth tez bukar hain isse

Seeing dhruliya,mukbi and rose standing infront him manik grits his teeth and "tum log kade hoke thamasha kya dekh rahe ho...do something for god sake yar...bachi ki jaan jari hain ro roke...!!!"

MUKTHI : tu baap hone ke bavajud usse chup nahi kar para hain tho ham kya kar sakte hain

MANIK : mukthiii

MUKTHI : gussa ara???

KABIR : bas kar mukthi...aur manik tu pehle pari ko chup kara..!!!

DAI MAA : nahi...abi pari ko chup karana shayad ham main se koyi nahi kar saktha...!!!

"sahi kaha aap ne" and aryaman utters coming infront of them along with harshad while manik glares him and "not now"

"hey sweet heart" and ignoring manik arya holds pari's hand and "mere paas na aap ke liye kuch hain"

pari continuous crying but for everyone's shock stares back at arya as if waiting for him to continue whatever he was saying while arya smiling at her slowly takes out his cell and "ye dekho...ye dekho...kon hain...maaa...aapki maa...!!!"

touching the screen with her tiny shaking hand pari pouts letting her tears flow down silently while manik stares her in shock how silently she was looking at her mother's picture...!!!

"yaha aao...ham mumma ki der sari photos dekhenge...hmmm...!!!" and arya takes pari into his arms while she keeps all her concentration on his cell staring at her mother on the screen...!!!

HARSHAD : nandini chahiye usse...apni maa chahiye usse...!!!

ARYAMAN : aur itni choti si bath tumhari badi si dimak main ayi hi nahi...right manik..!!!

clutching the cell pari suddenly starts sobbing hard while aryaman closes his eyes and "nandu tumhe shayad abi pari ke paas ana chahiye...!!!"

MANIK : nandu????

ARYAMAN : nandu...tum ari ho ya main pari ko vaha lao...!!!

"wo ayegi" and navya utters coming out of a tree while nandu silently moving towards navya stares at ground standing beside her surprising manik to core...!!!

ARYAMAN : tumhari beti intezar kari hain yaha

moving her gaze nandu stares at manik who was already staring her while he stands pleading her through his eyes saying her that yes her daughter was waiting for her...their daughter was waiting for her...!!!

Taking slow steps nandu reaches near arya all the time maintaining eye lock with manik while arya swinging pari a little stares her lovingly and "pari ke paas kon aya dekho...mamma...!!!!"

Nodding her head vigorously pari closes her eyes tightly continuing her cry saying him silently that he was lying and nandu understanding her inner voice moves a little closer to her and "pariii...!!!"

opening her eyes even before completion of a nano second pari stares at nandu blinking her eyes again and again while nandu controls her tears and "kya hua meri jaan ko...kyu rori hain meri jaan...hmmm...!!!"

Maaa..!!! and pari jumps on nandu holding her tight while nandu holds her close to her heart and "shhh...bas...bas...mumma agayi na...aise rothe nahi...!!!"

"uhmm...!!!" and pari slowly calms down hugging nandu tightly while arya wraps a hand on nandu shoulder and "chelo...ander chelthe hain...!!!"

"haan...!!!" and nandu walks inside with arya followed by navshad and dai maa while manbir stand staring them not blinking their eyes for once...!!!

MUKTHI : sab katham hone ke baad kade hoke dekhne se kya hoga

MANBIR : haaa???

ROSE : uhhh we have to get inside i guess

ABHI : yeaaa

ALIA : why did they both return... chele gaye the ne gar se...!!!

DHRUV : ye unhi logon ka gar hain alia

MUKTHI : and if u don't want them to kick us out please behave

ALIA : what do you mean mukthi

ROSE : alia...personal issues ko alag rake let us just complete the music album...mukthi bas yehi kehna chahthi hain...!!!

ALIA : I know what to do and what not so please

MUKTHI : yea yea ofcourse

ABHI : mukthi...let's get inside...!!!

ROSE : right...chelo...!!!

HARSHAD : nandu tum pari ke sath kamre main jao usse sirf tumhari zarurath hain

ARYAMAN : aur vaise bi ham sabka ek kamre main hona pari ke liye teek nahi hain

NAVYA : chel main athi hoon tumhare sath

"teek hain...!!!" and nandu without looking anyone walks upstairs to her room while arya turns towards dai maa and "aap please aram kijiye ab nandini agayi hain tho wo pari ko sambal legi..!!!"

DAI MAA : teek hain beta

DHRUV : I guess hame bi apne kamre main jana chahiye

ALIA : lekin

ROSE : pari needs rest along with peace so hame chup chap sona chahiye

MUKTHI : I agree and am leaving

DHRUV : byy guys

ROSE : byy

KABIR : manik...chel...!!

HARSHAD : tum log kaha jare ho

KABIR : upar

MANIK : pari ke paas

ARYAMAN : kyu

MANIK : meri beti ke paas jane ke liye mujhe tumhari permission ki zarurath nahi hain

ARYAMAN : lekin nandu ke paas jane ke liye zarur chahiye

KABIR : let's just not create a scene for once...pari ko jitna nandini ki zarurath hain utna hi manik ki bi hain so please...!!!

HARSHAD : finally got your brain back haa

KABIR : listen

HARSHAD : chel arya let them go navya hain upar so we don't have to worry

ARYAMAN : koyi galthi math karna

MANIK : get lost

ARYAMAN : youuu

HARSHAD : relax...we will deal this later...!!

KABIR : chel manik...!!!

"bukar agaya tho pari baby sabko pareshan karri thi...haaa...!!!" and navya smiles seeing nandu talking to pari sitting on bed while manbir enter into room at the same time turning navni attention towards them...!!!

ignoring them nandu turns her gaze towards navya and "neche se zara garam pani la dona please...!!!"

NAVYA : main kisiko bol dethi hoon

NANDINI : navya...it's okay...tum jao...!!!

"main jaldi athi hoon" and navya glaring manbir walks out of the room while kabir moves closer to pari and "mamma ke godh main kya pohunch gayi rona dona sab bandh...huhh...badmash...!!!"

NANDINI : baito kabir...loge kya isse...!!!

KABIR : nahi baba nahi...tumhari beti phirse gar ko apne upar utalegi...wo aise hi achi hain...tumhare paas...!!!

NANDINI : hawww...tum mere samne meri beti ki burayi karre ho...!!!

KABIR : arey nahi...main burayi kaha karra tha...main tho bas ye kehra tha ki tumhari beti itni strong hain itni strong hain ki bas apne awaz se hi sab ko hila dethi hain...dara dethi hain...!!!

NANDINI : achaaa

KABIR : hmmm

manik silently stands staring at nandu while navya enters into room and "ye le nandu"

KABIR : nandini pari ko bhuk bi lagri hogi shayad...!!!

Meeting each other's eyes at the same time manan share an eyelock while nandu quickly lowering her gaze licks her dry lips and "main dai maa ke paas hoke athi hoon...!!!"

"nahiii...!!!" and manik shouts instantly making her look him and "tum...tum pari ke paas raho...usne kaafi der se kuch nahi kaya...!!!"

NANDINI : nahi main

MANIK : ham chelthe hain...chel kabir...!!!

KABIR : lekin

MANIK : kabirrr...chel...!!!

KABIR : okay...byy princess...byyy nandini...!!!

without turning back manbir walk out of the room while navya settles beside nandu and "pari ko bhuk lagri hain...pari dudhi piyegi... haa...haaa...!!!"

NANDINI : navya

NAVYA : haa

NANDINI : kuch nahi

NAVYA : ham na baad main bath karenge abi pari ko dudh de

NANDINI : wo

NAVYA : soch kya rahi hain...jaldi kar...!!!

NANDINI : hmmm

NAVYA : main na yaha let jathi hoon tujhe aur kuch chahiye

NANDINI : tu apne kamre main soja navya...pari rath bar nahi soyegi tho phir tujhe bekar main pareshani hogi...!!!

NAVYA : nahi uski zarurath nahi hain

NANDINI : lekin

NAVYA : shhh

After feeding pari for good few minutes nandu makes her lie on bed and taking a cotton cloth places it on pari forehead soaking it in warm water while pari lies staring at nandu controlling her sleep afraid that she might get disappear again...!!!

NAVYA : pari sojao beta apko neendh ari hain

Hearing the knob sound navni looks towards door while manik slowly peeps his head inside the room and "main...wo...!!!"

NAVYA : darwaze thak agaye ho tho ander bi ajao

entering inside manik stares at nandu and "bukar kam hua..!!"

seeing nandu ignoring him navya sighs getting up from bed and "abi nahi...lekin thoda kam hain...!!"

MANIK : ohh

NAVYA : nandu main thak gayi hoon thodi der kamre main soke athi hoon

NANDINI : par

"kuch zaruri ho tho call kar" and navya uttering walks out before nandu could say anything while manik after standing for few seconds slowly walks towards bed and settles on another side smiling at pari..!!!

MANIK : kaafi der hogayi hain apko ninni nahi ari

Pouting pari stares at manik blinking her eyes again and again while nandini continuous her work by wetting the cloth and placing it on pari forehead...!!!

MANIK : acha papa ke paas aoge

nodding her head as no pari quickly turns towards nandini while she taking her in her arms makes her sleep on her lap making manik sigh sadly...!!!

"teek hain...main jatha hoon...!!!" and manik utters caresessing pari cheek but before he could take back his hand pari holds his index finger making him smile huge in-turn...!!!

MANIK : kya hua...ruk jao...!!!

ignoring him pari turns her gaze towards nandu while manik nodding his head spreads himself on bed resting his head on his another hand taking his elbow support...!!!

Placing pari beside manik on bed nandu slowly tries to get down from bed only to stop in mid as pari holds her index finger with her another hand staring at her with puppy eyes...!!!

Glancing at manik nandu silently sits beside pari muttering sweet things in her ear asking her to sleep while manik lies staring at mother-daughter duo having a smile on his face...!!!

seeing pari drift into sleep nandu slowly tries to free her hand only to fail everytime as her grip remains tighter on her hand while manik quickly closes his eyes pretending to be sleep not wanting her to walk away seeing him awake...!!!

Biting her lower lip nandu notices manik sleeping and sighing in relief slowly lays down beside pari having no other option left while she suddenly pulls her hands together on her chest making manan hands touch each other...!!!

After staring manik for what seems to be an eternity nandu slowly closes her eyes feeling sleepy while manik at the same time opens his eyes making sure that she was fast asleep only to close his eyes again same like her after watching and admiring her for god knows how much time...!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb update finally nandini to come to home pari was amazing to joint the manan awsum pari wanted maa and paa together beautiful way and alia so irrated kuch do karo this dumb ko
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Heya hiii...

first of all
Wishing u a very very very happy bday...
May ur days b filled with sugary dashing moments,delicious chocolte adventure n marshmallow gooey sweet memories!!!!!!

now coming to updates..
story is hell complicated mishtee..

nandini n manik..
navya n kabir...
all r just playing push n pull game all d time...
confused souls dnt knw their own feelings at all n they r trying to sort out frnd's relationship...

pari is cute baby...
she is d reason manan came close agn..hopefully this time they will sort misunderstandings between them...

keep smiling...
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Edited by manandeeplove - 7 years ago
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