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PART 7 :


"thud...!!!" and manik closes the door without opening his eyes again while nandu slowly opens her eyes listening to the sound only to close them again biting her lower lip hardly...!!!!

"ayyappaaa...!!!!" and nandu mutters blushing hard while pari starts giggling in her lap as if she was enjoying her mother's state making her open her eyes only to nod her head blushing even more than before...!!!!

"Bas ab...so jao...badmash...!!!!" and nandu fakes anger hugging pari close to her heart swinging to and fro a little trying to make her sleep while she too sleeps in no time without troubling nandu making her sigh smiling...!!!!

Hearing a knock nandu gulps nervously without replying but then sighs relaxing herself seeing the person at door..!!!

"Andar a sakthi hoon..!!!"

NANDINI : haan dai maa ayiye na

DAI MAA : so gayi kya rani sahiba

Jee...abi...!!! and nandu utters staring at pari and smiling..!!!

DAI MAA : tho sab teek hain

NANDINI : haan

DAI MAA : aur

NANDINI : kuch nahi aap bathayiye aap kaise hain

DAI MAA : Kyu...janke kya karegi...!!!

NANDINI : daiii maaa

DAI MAA : math bula mujhe dai maa...jab manthi hi nahi tho kyu bekar main...

NANDINI : please...aisa math kahiye...aap janthe hain mai apse kitna pyar karthi hoon...aap janthe hain aap manik ki hi nahi meri bi dadi...!!!

DAI MAA : nahiii...tu mujhse pyar nahi karthi...kyu ki agar karthi na tho bina bathaye gar se bas aise hi cheli nahi jathi...!!!

NANDINI : maa...am sryyy...!!!

"Nandu jaldi aao navya aur" and aryaman stops entering into room while nandu crings her brows and "kya hua..!!!"

ARYAMAN : kya ham neche jaa sakthe hain

NANDINI : haa...maa main abi ayi...!!!

DAI MAA : teek hain

NANDINI : kya hua kuch tho bolo

ARYAMAN : harshad gussa hain

NANDINI : lekin

ARYAMAN : chelo jaldi sab khud hi samaj jaogi

"Harshad meri bath tho suno...!!!" and navya utters having tears in her eyes while harshad was fisting his hands staring at ground blankly trying to calm himself..!!!

NANDINI : ye log garden main

ARYAMAN : listen agar harshad gusse main kuch kahe tho please bath ko aage math badne de

NANDINI : teek hain

"Bath nahi karni thi tho rukne ko kaha hi kyu navya...!!!" and harshad utters closing his eyes while nandu moves close to him and "harshad... kya bath hain...!!!"

"Ek sawal puchu...!!!" and harshad utters staring at navni

NANDINI : haan

HARSHAD : kya tum dono hame apna manthe ho...!!!

"Tum ye" and navni utter in unison while harshad raises his hand and "haa ya na"

NANDINI : haan...ofcourse haan...!!!

NAVYA : kya tum janthe nahi ho tum dono hamare liye kya ho

HARSHAD : nahi...!!!

NANDINI : harshad

NAVYA : am sry harshad main kaam ki vajah se gayi aur

HARSHAD : mere bare main bhul gayi...like always...!!!

NAVYA : harshad...!!!

NANDINI : navya ek second...harshad...jo bi dil main hain use sab bahar nikalo...kaho jo kehna hain...!!!

HARSHAD : ham log tumhari fikar karthe hain ye bath kab samjoge tum dono

Navni stare them without replying while harshad holds his head and "ham log tumhe hurt nahi dekh sakthe ye bath kab samjoge tum dono..!!!"

"Navni hame tum logo ki past se problem nahi hain...wo past ake aaj tum logo ko hurt karra hain uss bath se problem hain..!!!" and aryaman who was silent since long utters making navni feel blessed for having them in their life..!!!

NANDINI : harshaman, hamara past wo khissa hain jo ham yaad bi nahi karna chahthe hain

NAVYA : aur shayad isi vajah se hamne tumhe kabi kuch kaha nahi aur na hi ab kehna chahre hain

NANDINI : hame bas thoda time chahiye

NAVYA : please

HARSHAD : ham kuch nahi kehre hai navya

ARYAMAN : ham bas aap logon ki pareshani se pareshan hain and worst part is that ham kuch kar bi nahi sakthe hain

HARSHAD : kyuki ham kuch janthe bi nahi hain

NANDINI : Tum log sab jaldi jaan jaoge

NAVYA : we promise and nahi is baar ham kisi bi vajah se hurt nahi honge

NANDINI : we promise that too

NAVYA : sryyy...please ab aur gussa math hona...!!!

"Take care...please...!!!" and harshad utters pulling navya close wrapping his hands around her..!!!

"I will" and navya replies smiling while harshad holds nandu hand and "tu kya dekhri tu nahi rakegi apna kayal"

NANDINI : rakungi baba

"Aaa yaha" and harshad pulls her too while navya at same time pulls aryaman completing the group hug...!!!

"Heheh" and navni giggle jerking away harshaman hands as they were tickling them while two pairs of eyes were watching them four secretly fisting their hands ever so tightly..!!!

NAVYA : chelo ab ander

NANDINI : haa patha nahi pari kaisi hai chelo jaldi

"Jee mummaa..!!!" and harshaman nod their heads making navya laugh loud and nandu hit them playfully..!!!

MUKTHI : ye dono baar baar gayab kyu hothe hain

DHRUV : vaise rose tumne kahi dekha kya manik aur kabir ko

ROSE : haan right behind u

MUKTHI : what

ABHI : finallyyy they are here

ROSE : and even they are...awww...!

KABIR : just stop it rose

ROSE : kyu see how cute they are looking

MANIK : ohh please

KABIR : just shut up

MANIK : tum dono kyu chidre ho

"Forget it" and manbir utter rolling their eyes staring at navni with corner of their eyes who were entering into house..!!!

ROSE : I guess unke beech sab teek hogaya

MUKTHI : hmmm acha hain na

ABHI : thank god ki hamari vajah se unke beech koyi misunderstandings nahi huyi

KABIR : un logon ke bare main bath karne hi yaha pe round table conference raka hain aap sabne

ROSE : nahiii

Seeing them all harshaman glance each other and stop in mid blinking their eyes..!!!

HARSHAD : tum dono chelo ham aare hai

NANDINI : kyu kya hua

ARYAMAN : arey kuch nahi thodi bath karni thi hame

NAVYA : haa tho karo na

HARSHAD : offooo tum log hi tho kehre the na pari sori hain uske paas jana hain

NANDINI : ohh haa

NAVYA : teek hain ham jare tum bi ajao phir sath main kelenge uske sath

ARYAMAN : hmm teek hain lekin use neendh se math jagana

NAVYA : haa haa patha hain hame
chel navyaa and navni walk away ignoring manbir gaze..!!!

HARSHAD : ham bi chele

ARYAMAN : yuppp

Seeing harshaman standing infront of them kabir smiles at them and "kuch chahiye tha...aap ka hi gar hain...le sakthe ho...!!!"

HARSHAD : mazak ka mood nahi hain sooo...yaaa...hame actually tumse bath karni thi..!!!

ARYAMAN : nahhh to be specified kuch bathana tha

HARSHAD : pariii...!!!

MANIK : Its surely none of your business...so pleaseee...!!!

HARSHAD : ofcourse its our business

ARYAMAN : pari nandu se judi huyi hain aur nandu hamse

MANIK : listen just

"Bhulna math ki hamara ek contract..!!!" and harshaman utter cutting off manik in between making him hell angry..!!!

"thooo...thooo kya karloge" and kabir utters gritting his teeth moving angrily towards harshaman...!!!

HARSHAD : terms and conditions ki copy bej dunga usse padneke baad bathana thab main bi batonga ki ham kya kar sakthe hain

"Youuu" and manik shouts angrily while dhruv intervene in between and pleaseee..!!!

ABHI : we can talk

ROSE : par no fights please

MUKTHI : aap kya kehna chahthe hain

HARSHAD : pari nandu ke sath rahegi

ARYAMAN : aur usse nandu se koyi dur nahi karega

HARSHAD : aur agar manik tumne kuch ulta seeda kiya na

ARYAMAN : I swear teek nahi hoga...na hi tumhare liye aur na hi tumhari music career ke liye...!!!

MANIK : teri tho main

DHRUV : manik nahiii

MUKTHI : let me tell u guys pari nandu ke sath hi rahegi kyuki ham sab bi vahi chahthe hai

ABHI : and hence there is no point in fighting right now

ARYAMAN : manik seems to be unhappy when pari is with nandu

HARSAD : so we are just saying this to him

KABIR : agar manik unappy hotha tho upar pari ke sath nandu nahi hothi so please just get lost and let us leave in peace

HARSHAD : fine just remember that if u try hurting our girls

ARYAMAN : you will be dead for sure

"Ooohh reallyyy..!!!" and manbir utter raising their eye brows while navni reach there at the same time and "kya hora yaha..!!!"

HARSHAD : Kuch nahi

ARYAMAN : bas bathare hain tum dono kitni important ho hamare liye

NAVYA : achaaa...tho samaj gaye kya ye..!!!

HARSHAD : acha hoga agar samaj jaye

ARYAMAN : nahi tho ham hain hi yaha...samjane..!!!

Manbir give harshaman i-so-wana-kill-u-right-now look while they stand smiling at them entwining their hands with navni simply adding fuel to their fire..!!!




And now the real game begins



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Posted: 7 years ago
good update nandini and dai maa bonding also super pari naughty super continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello...
Afterrr sooo longgg...

Story seems more complicated now...
First it was all abt navni manbir harshman...
Bt pariii...
Thats a new twist...

It twisted d story by 360...
Pari seems cute n lovely kid...
manik n nandini r nt her real parents bt still they r behaving like parents only...

Harshman r very protective abt navni...
N exactly that irritates manbir more n more...

N d way u write all d dialogues making it hell complicated...
Hushhh..

Lets wait for unfolding d mystery...
Edited by manandeeplove - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
amazing update...
pari is too cute...
what is nandini n dai maa relation? their seems every close to each other...
harshaman is very very protective towards navni...manbir is jealous...
loved d update...
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Posted: 7 years ago
PART 8 :


HARSHAD : hey vaise tum dono yaha kya karre ho..!!!

ARYAMAN : pari ke paas gaye the na tum dono

NANDINI : haa wo pari dai maa ke sath sori hain isliye ham neche agaye

HARSHAD : ohh

ARYAMAN : acha chelo tum dono thab thak kuch khalo

NANDINI : arey ha hamne tho kuch kaya hi nahi na

NAVYA : yaad bi nahi hain mujhe tho

HARSHAD : tum logo ko apne bare main sochna yaad rehtha hi kab hain

ARYAMAN : seriously ab chelo

NAVYA : haa haa chelo

HARSHAD : and you two bhulna math haa

ARYAMAN : ache se yaad rakna hamne kya hain

smiling harshaman walk away with navni while manbir close their eyes fisting their hands trying hard to control themselves...!!!

MUKTHI : guys

Opening their eyes manbir walk away in different directions while dhruv sighs and "ye dono na"

ABHI : patha nahi kab sudrenge

ROSE : why is it so complicated yar why can't they just talk and resolve everything

DHRUV : it's not complicated,they are making it complicated... Idiots...!!!

MUKTHI : tho phir ham hi kuch kare

ABHI : don't take me wrong par shayad navni kush hain harshaman ke sath

ROSE : I think the same lekin jab pari ki vajah se manan paas aye I felt that old spark bewteen them tho shayad

DHRUV : try karke dekhe

ABHI : I understand tum log manbir ko kush dekhna chahthe ho par

MUKTHI : par

ABHI : accept it guys jo unke past main hua wo sab manbir ki galthi hain

ROSE : we agree aur isliye hame unhe help karna chahiye

ABHI : u are not getting it manbir yaha regret feel kar hi nahi rahe hain and infact they are trying to hurt navni again

MUKTHI : so let's stop them na...let us make them realise wo sahi nahi hain...!!!

ROSE : haan let's do it na...!!!

DHRUV : wow rose tum tho apne bf ko hi kisi aur ke sath hook up karri ho

ABHI : aur mukthi tum...alia ko bhul gayi kya...she is manik gf yar...tumhari bestie...bichari pe kya bethegi when manik goes back to nandu...!!!

Ohhh please shut up...!!! and rose & mukthi utter in unison rolling their eyes..!!!

ROSE : u know that kabir is not serious and can never be with anyone except navya

DHRUV : hmmm

MUKTHI : aur manik bi sirf nandu ke sath kush reh saktha hain so alia has to understand that and let go him

ABHI : what are u waiting for then jao na use kaho ye bath

MUKTHI : very funny

ROSE : okay so all are in

ABHI : Yeaaa...I guess...!!!

MUKTHI : well ek second I have an idea

DHRUV : already

ABHI : u forgot who she is

MUKTHI : shut up and listen...jaha thak hame patha hain even kabir wants manan back right

ROSE : haan I guess ham sab se bi zyada

MUKTHI : anddd manik too wants navni back right

ABHI : yaaa...sooo...!!!

MUKTHI : sooo

DHRUV : sooo what

ABHI : ohh wow

DHRUV : ahaa ek teer do nishan

MUKTHI : exactly

ROSE : grt

ABHI : kab kya karna hain phir decide karthe hain

DHRUV : okayyy

ROSE : let's get to our rooms

MUKTHI : haa chelo

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NAVYA : ye pari itni der kyu sori

HARSHAD : main vahi puchne vala tha

NANDINI : are bachi hain

ARYAMAN : sone do sone do bade hone ke baad vaise bi koyi sone nahi dega use

NAVYA : hehehe haa

HARSHAD : vaise jaldi main kaya tum dono ne teek se kaya ya nahi

NANDINI : teek se hi kaya tension math lo

ARYAMAN : vaise nandu main tumse puchna chahtha tha

NANDINI : haa

ARYAMAN : kya tum mere sath...date pe chelogi..!!!

NAVYA : what

ARYAMAN : main nandu se puchra hoon

HARSHAD : ofcourse kyuki navya mere sath ayegi

NAVYA : kaha

HARSHAD : date pe

NAVYA : pagal ho gaye ho

ARYAMAN : tum dono time leke bathana haa

NANDINI : navya chel ye dono ko patha nahi kya ho gaya

NAVYA : ha yar chel mujhe bi dar lagra

HARSHAD : sochna zarur haa

Navni run horrified while harshman burst into laughter closing their eyes tightly...!!!!

Pagal..!!! and navni utter entering into their respective rooms wanting to freshen up..!!!

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Manikkk...!!! and nandu widens her eyes as soon as she steps out of washroom after freshening up while he stands staring her without blinking his eyes leaning back on wall...!!!

Lowering her gaze nandu licks her lips nervously and tum...yaha...!!!

MANIK : ek sawal puchna tha

kyaa...!! and she whispers in mere audible tone while he walks deathly closer to her and "meri beti ko apna dudh kyu deri ho...!!!"

closing her eyes tightly nandu gulps down hardly while he ends his sentence making her shot open her eyes staring him with shock expression...!!!

"Kaho...tum jaise...cheap...kamini aurath banane ke liye...use apna dudh deri ho..!!!" and he repeats each and every single word staring right into her eyes making them filled with tears...!!!

"kya hua...bura lagra...lekin kyu... galath kaha kehra hoon main... pehle mere sath...ab aryaman ke sath...rehri ho na tum...ek sath...tho phir ab tumhe bura kyu lagra meri bathon se...hoon tho tum ek bohuth kubsoorath kamini hi na...!!!" and he utters seeing her not replying him while she stands rooted to ground not knowing how to react...!!!

"vaise us idiot ko patha hain na ki tum aisi ho...I mean...bahar se achi aur ander se character less...!!!! and he utters raising his eyebrows while she stands letting her tears flow still not knowing whether to believe her eyes or not...!!!

"are...are...aise rothe nahi... character less ko character less hi kahenge na...tho phir ye rona kyu...!!! and he utters wiping her tears while she steps back pressing her lips inside not to break down then and there..!!!

"Nandu wo date ke bare main...!!" and aryaman stops seeing nandu cringing his eyebrows but soon fists his hand seeing manik infront of her boiling with anger...!!!

"you bloddy...!!!" and arya punches manik nose reaching near him in no time while manik instantly throws back another punch on him shouting out loud angrily...!!!!

"tu mujhe marega...haa...mujhe...!!!" and manik punches arya left and right while nandu closes her eyes and "nahiii..!!!"

Looking towards nandu manik hits his head on arya with force while kabir enters inside the room at the same time followed by navshad...!!!

"manikkk" and harshad quickly runs to them while manik holds arya collar tightly staring him angry with his blood shot eyes...!!!

HARSHAD : manik chodo

Not caring manik once again hits arya's head with his while kabir jumps in between and "manik chod usse...!!!"

NAVYA : manik please...!!!

FAB 4 with abhi & rose enter the room and widen their eyes with shock while kabir pulls away manik with difficulty only to regret later as arya instantly punches manik back on his stomach...!!!

"aryaman...!!!" and manik shouts moving close to him all ready to break his bones while nandu at the same time pulls back arya hugging him tight and "chelo yaha se...please...!!!"

Breathing hard manik remains in the same position having his hand raised in air while arya walks out holding nandu close to him giving manik i-will-see-u-later look...!!!!

HARSHAD : what is wrong with u manikkk

KABIR : what is wrong with you two scico people...!!!

NAVYA : manik tumne kya kiya

KABIR : andhi hogayi ho...deka nahi kaise mar ra tha tumhara dosth manik ko...!!!

HARSHAD : manik ki galthi hogi

NAVYA : aur manik ne bi kam nahi mara aryaman ko

Closing his eyes and taking a deep breath manik walks out with in a blink while alia too quickly runs behind him trying to take advantage of the situation as usual...!!!

kabir here turns towards navya angrily and "listen just shut up...tumhe...!!!"

HARSHAD : mind your tongue kabir

KABIR : aisi aurath ke sath aise hi bath karthe hain

MUKTHI : kabirrr

HARSHAD : kya bolra tu...kya matlab hain tera..!!!

KABIR : kyu...bathaya nahi isne tujhe...!!!

DHRUV : kabir nahi

HARSHAD : tamez se bath kar kabirrr

KABIR : kya navya tumne bathaya nahi harshad ko ki tum kitni besharam ho...!!!

"Kabirrr...!!!!" and harshad punches him while he immediately starts kicking him back giving him no time to attack back..!!!

NAVYA : harshaddd

seeing the fight getting worst mukbi intervene along with dhruv and seperate kabir from harshad while navya instantly walks out holding harshad not letting him kick back kabir...!!!

Jerking away mukbi hands kabir storms out closing the door with a thud while mukbi sigh staring each other and then dhruv & rose...!!!

"phirse in dono ne sab kuch bigad diya...kuch bi shuru hone se pehle...!!!" and they all close their eyes having the same thought in their minds...!!!!




done...kaisa tha action episode feel free to say...am waiting... tata...smile and make people smile...!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update but what the problem in manan and kavay to understand difficult but abi,dhurv ,mukti ,rose in four people wanted again in manan and kavay is superb pls this misunderstand clear kar do asap and what the relation between harshad and aryman in nandini and navya don't make nandini and aryman i know aryman like nandini but don't want nandini also like aryman and continue soon
this aliya so stupid
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow its getting interesting and fun to read

You know when is the right time to reveal the truth about their misunderstanding which leads them to separate

They are so jealous when they see their love ladies with other man so close

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Wow!! Finely got a good story to read...It's an amazing ff... different story line... I just loved it...plz continue righting... nd update next part soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks for the update and PM
Waiting to know what happened in the past... oh Manik he speaks all rubbish when he is in monster mode.. poor NavNi
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Posted: 7 years ago
Cant believe Manik uttered such hurtful words for Nandini 💔
Hope confusion is cleared soon
Cant see Manan and Cavya in so much turmoil 😭
Nice update
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