MANAN 'ISHQ...EK ANOKHA EHSAAS...!!!!' PART 11 ON PG 40 - Page 21

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Posted: 8 years ago
PART 4 :


knock knock knock...!!!!

uhmmm and navya lazily rolls on her bed hiding her head under the pillow...

navyaa beta...navyaa betaa...and kaka once again knocks the door asking her to wake up...

Kaka sone do na...pleaseee...!!!! and navya shouts pouting...

beta gyara bajre hain...nashtha kab karogi...abi ke liye ut jao...phir nashtha karke so jana...and kaka utters making her get up with a jerk...

gyara...!!! main itni der thak kaise so gayi...!!! and she utters shocked while kaka once again requests her to get up...

Kaka aap ne mujhe pehle kyu nahi utaya...gyara bajre hain...aur aap mujhe ab utare ho...aur ye nandu kaha hain...usne kyu nahi utaya mujhe...kayi bahar akeli tho nahi cheli gayi na... and she continues blabbering opening the door...

beta mujhe laga shayad aap thak gayi hain...isiliye nahi utaya... nandini beta bi abi thak kamre se bahar nahi ayi hain...shayad wo bi sori hain...and kaka replies all her questions calmly...

NAVYA : aaj ho kya raha hain

KAKA : aap thayar hoke ajayiye beta main nandini beta ko bi jaga detha hoon

NAVYA : hmmm teek hain kaka

MUKTHI : yar problem kya hain

ALIA : hamari kal bath huyi thi na

DHRUV : koyi kaam main honge it's fine na guys vaise bi wo ayenge tho yahi gar pe na

KABIR : hmmm aur ham aye bi tho kal hi na so itni jaldi bi kya hain

ALIA : of course jaldi hain kabir

KABIR : haa??

ALIA : we...we can't just waste our days because of one album right...

ABHI : common alia itni serious kyu hori ho bhul gaye kya tum log FAB 5 ho panch songs compose karne main tumhe kitna vakth lagega

ALIA : haan par ham aaj do songs compose karne vale the na tho phir

ROSE : yar alia just chill abi vaise bi ham kuch nahi kar sakthe hain so why to worry

MUKTHI : uumm point vaise manik ye harshad aur aryaman gaye kaha tumhe bathaya nahi kyaa

ABHI : well he seems to be lost

ALIA : manik...!!!

No response

DHRUV : buddyyy...buddyyy

MANIK : haa...haa

MUKTHI : kaha kho gaya tu

MANIK : nahi... kayi nahi bol...

MUKTHI : harshad aur aryaman kaha gaye tujhe kuch patha nahi kya

MANIK : nahi...

ROSE : nandini ya navya ko puchthe hain na unhe patha hoga

ABHI : haan actually not a bad idea

DHRUV : agar wo log busy hain tho ham bi bahar chele jayenge

ROSE : hmmm lekin ye navni hain kaha sube se wo bi nahi dikhe mujhe

DHRUV : ho saktha hain ki wo sab sath main hi bahar

MANIK : kisi ko bi kuch bi puchne ki zarurath nahi hain

KABIR : agar tum sab ko bahar jana hain tho ham jayenge nahi tho nahi

DHRUV : nandini

ABHI : navyaaa

Navni who were walking towards dining hall in opposite ways stop hearing their names and look each other turning their heads...

tu teek hain na and they utter in unison as soon as they get close...

haa and they once again whisper lowly at the same time avoiding their gaze...

DHRUV : navyaaa...nanduuu...

haaa and navni utter reaching near them ignoring manbir gaze

DHRUV : am not sure whether u know or no but aaj ham do songs compose karne vale the

NANDINI : haan patha hain

NAVYA : bathaya tha kal harshman ne

KABIR : tho phir gaye kaha marne... aye kyu nahi abi thak...

NANDINI : kabirrr

KABIR : nandini agar wo busy hain tho atleast hame batha sakthe hain na ham kuch aur plan kar lethe the

ABHI : tujhe achanak kya hogaya abi thak tho bohuth cool tha na

DHRUV : haan tu achanak navya ko dekhe aise ajeeb kyu behave karra

KABIR : nandini harshman kaha hain

NANDINI : kabir koyi emergency hogi varna wo log aise bina bathaye nahi jayenge

MANIK : why are you guys even wasting time...haaa...bath unse karni chahiye jo bath karne ke layek ho...

manikkk and cavya utter in unison glaring him...

getting a call nandu excuses herself ignoring manik words while he stands staring her getting disappointed watching her not getting affected with his words...

NANDINI : navyaa

NAVYA : hmmm

NANDINI : karan ka call hain hame abi nikalna hoga

NAVYA : teek hain

NANDINI : kaka...kaka...

Nashtha thayar hain beta bas lagara hoon and kaka answers from the kitchen...

NANDINI : kaka suniye tho

haa beta and he utters coming out

NANDINI : harshman ne nashtha kiya kya

KAKA : nahi beta

NAVYA : kya hua aapka chehra kyu aisa hain

KAKA : kuch nahi hua beta

NANDINI : acha teek hain ham dono bahar jare hain...do teen ganto main lout jayenge...harshman ayenge tho batha dena...

KAKA : teek hain beta main nashtha

NAVYA : nashtha nahi kaka jab thak ham loutenge harshman bi ajayenge tho unke sath milke direct lunch hi kar lenge

KAKA : par beta

NANDINI : in mehmano ka khayal ache se rakiye kaka

NAVYA : aur thoda dyan se ha kaafi thede log hain ye

KABIR : tum

NAVYA : chel nandu

NANDINI : haa

KABIR : iskiii

ABHI : shhh chup

MUKTHI : acha guys bahar chelthe hain na

ROSE : haan na chelthe hain

DHRUV : bahar chel sakthe hain lekin please shopping math kehna

ALIA : kyuuu bahar jayenge tho shopping karni padegi na

ABHI : jee nahi

DHRUV : aisa koyi rule nahi hain

ROSE : ek minute ek minute kya ham pehle breakfast karle mujhe bohuth bhuk lagri

MUKTHI : actually bhook ka naam sunke mujhe bi bhook lagri

ABHI : heehe acha chelo pehle ka lethe hain

ALIA : manik aur main vaha baitenge

MANIK : nahiii...alia maine thodi der pehle hi ka li tum kalo...

ALIA : kab

MANIK : wooo

KABIR : usne mere sath ka liya tha alia

MUKTHI : tum dono ne milke breakfast kiya

KABIR : hmmm

MANIK : mujhe kaam hain main aatha hoon

ALIA : breakfast katham hothe hi mai msg kardungi aa jana

MANIK : nahi I guess I will take some time

ALIA : haan tho

MANIK : you guys can go out mere liye intezar math karna

MUKTHI : tu jaa kaha raha hain

ABHI : kabir ke sath shayad

KABIR : haa??

ABHI : tu hamare sath bahar aara kya

KABIR : nahi wo mujhe

ABHI : haa haa patha hain manik ke sath jara na

KABIR : ummm

DHRUV : teek hain so you guys can leave

MANBIR : byy

ABHI : suno

MANBIR : haaa

ABHI : zyada stress math lo sab jaldi hi teek hoga

MUKTHI : what are you exactly talking about

ABHI : kuch nahi byy guys

NIGHT 9 PM :

ROSE : aaahhh am so tireddd

ALIA : even me

DHRUV : kisne kaha itni shopping karne

ABHI : hehe

MUKTHI : chup oyee and guys tum dono gar kab aaye aur gaye kaha the

KABIR : thodi der pehle hi aye

MUKTHI : aur?

KABIR : aur kya

ALIA : gaye kaha the

MANIK : kaam tha kuch

ALIA : aisa kyaa kaam tha jo

NAVYA : harshaddd... harshaddd...!!!!

NANDINI : aryaman...aryaman...!!!!

ALIA : goddd just stop shouting girls

NANDINI : harshaddd

NAVYA : aryamannn

DHRUV : nandini...navya...kya hua...

NANDINI : harshman hamara call nahi utare thak gaye hain call kar karke isliye gusse main hain hum tho please philal ke liye kuch math kehna

NAVYA : harshaddd... aryamannn...baire ho gaye ho kyaa...neche aao...

MANIK : wo gar par honge thab bahar ayenge na

NAVYA : haa???

KABIR : wo log shayad gar par nahi hain

NANDINI : what...kaka...kaka...!!!!

KAKA : haan beta

NAVYA : harshaman gar pe nahi hain kya

KAKA : woo

NAVYA : boliye kaka hain ya nahi

KAKA : nahi...nahi hain...

NANDINI : do peher main aye the na tho phir ab kaha gaye

KAKA : umm wohh

NANDINI : ek minute kaka apne jhut tho nahi bola na hamse ki wo gar pe the

KAKA : beta wo

NAVYA : nahi...nandu wo dono gar pe aye hi nahi sube se...

NANDINI : kaka aap kya karthe ho bathana chahiye tha na hame patha nahi wo dono kaha hain kaise hain sube se hamara ek call ka jawab thak nahi diya hain aur yaha aap ek hain kiii...tchhh...

KAKA : am sryy betaa

ABHI : tum dono zyada stress math lo

DHRUV : wo log teek hi honge

NAVYA : I just hope the same...I just...!!!

NANDINI : koyi jawab kyu nahi dera...kaha ho sakthe hain...kaha...kaha...ufff...!!!

NAVYA : maine almost sab ko msg kardiya

NANDINI : maine bi par kisiko nahi patha

ROSE : ek baar ache se yaad karo na koyi miss tho nahi hogaya hain tumhare friends ke circle main

NANDINI : nahi almost sab ko contact kiya hamne

NAVYA : hello...jeee...haan tho kayi baagri hoon kya...teek hain aap mera dimak math kayiye bar dungi...

NANDINI : kya hua

NAVYA : credit card ke log hain aaj bill barne ka last date tha

NANDINI : ohh

ek minute and they utter in unison cringing their brows...

date...!!! and exclaiming yet again in unison they stare each other with worried expression...!!!

MUKTHI : they are here

seeing navni staring each other without responding dhruv calls them out loud and wo agaye...!!!

NANDINI : aryaman

NAVYA : harshad

ARYAMAN : hi

HARSHAD : hey

ABHI : guys tum dono ko agar bahar jana hi tha tho kamse kam navni ko bathe ke tho jathe

ROSE : bichare kitne pareshan hogaye

NAVYA : arey nahi

NANDINI : ham zyada pareshan kaha huye

MUKTHI : inhe achanak kya hogaya

ALIA : I know abi thak tho kitna pareshan the un dono ke liye

NAVYA : uhmm dinner??

ARYAMAN : nahi...hamne karliye...

NAVYA : ohh

HARSHAD : tum log

NANDINI : hamne bi kar liya

NAVYA : haan...abi...

DHRUV : lekin

NANDINI : you must be tired na

NAVYA : jao jake so jao

HARSHAMAN : gud nite

NAVNI : gud nite

ABHI : guys tum dono ko achanak kya ho gaya

NAVYA : kuch nahi

NANDINI : I guess hame chelna chahiye

NAVYA : haan

MUKTHI : mujhe kuch samaj nahi ane vala hain tho am leaving too

ALIA : even me

ABHI & DHRUV : same here

ROSE : gud nite guys

TERRACE :

walking silently navni settle beside harshaman who were sitting leaning to wall staring at sky...

with in seconds harshad starts sobbing resting his head on navya shoulder while aryaman too cries silently keeping his head in nandu lap...

NAVYA : shhh

NANDINI : sab teek hain

NAVYA : aunty uncle tho asmaan main hi hain sitara banke

NANDINI : aur aap dono ko dekh bi rahe hain

with utmost silence they lie in same position without uttering a single word while two people let out their tears hiding from each other staring their love with some one else...

MORNING 10 AM :

HARSHAMAN : guddd mrnnn

NAVNI : gud mrn

HARSHAD : kya bath hain yar aaj koyi kuch zyada hi sundar lagra nahi

ARYAMAN : haan yar ek tho kaafi cute lagri hain aur ek kaafi pyari

NAVYA : ho gaya

NANDINI : aur bi kuch baki hain

HARSHAD : navya

ARYAMAN : nandini

NAVNI : haan

HARSHMAN : thank you

smiling navni blink their eyes while harshaman smile back at them feeling blessed to have them in their lives...

HARSHAD : ye awaz

NANDINI : main dekthi hoon

manik...manikkk...manikkk...!!!!!

reaching near hall nandu stands all frozed witnessing the sight in front of her not being able to move an inch...

manikkk...manikkk...!!!

MANIK : dai maa aap

DAI MAA : sry beta bina bathaye agayi par

MANIK : arey arey kya hua jaan...mujhe missi kiya...!!!!

DAI MAA : do din se patha nahi kya hogaya hain isse mujse tho bilkul bi sambala nahi jara

MANIK : kya karri ho meri jaan kaha bagne ki koshish karri ho hmmm

cringing his brows manik suddenly turns back and witnessing nandu staring him turns his head back and dai maa cheliye...!!!

DAI MAA : nandini...!!!!

MANIK : cheliye daa ma

DAI MAA : par

MANIK : cheliye

nandu..!!! and navya calls her holding her shoulder bringing her into senses...!!!

DAI MAA : manik ek minute meri bath sun...manikk please... manikkk...!!!

maa...!!!! and manik frozes at spot not being able to move...!!!

pari...!!!! and nandu mutters almost in a whisper while tears flow down from her eyes like a never ending river...!!!

maaa...!!!! and listening to his one year old princess tone manik looks towards her slowly not being able to believe his eyes...!!!!

maaa...!!!!! and finally hearing his princess shout manik looks towards nandini while she without thinking runs towards them like a manic smiling and crying at the same time...!!!!

pariii...!!!! and before nandu could take her in her arms manik backs off showing his finger staring her with utmost anger...!!!

reaching in hall harshaman cring their brows not being able to understand anything while FAB 5 stand watching the scenario not knowing what to say and how to react...!!!!

maa...!!!! and pari's sweet whisper brings manan into senses making nandu once again try reaching her and manik yet again moving away from her...!!!

MANIK : don't

manikk..!!! and nandu utters begging him through eyes...!!!

not caring he simply starts walking away from her breaking her heart into zillion pieces while pari goes on jumping in his arms trying to reach her mother...!!!!!

PARI : maaa...maaa...maaa...!!!!!

pa...ri...pa...rii...pa..riii...!!!! and nandu finally falls on her knees crying out loud palming her face completely shattered bringing tears in every ones eyes present over there...!!!!!




Kaisa laga...bolo...bolo...am waiting...!!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing.
please I want to know their past.
kya hua tha that they git separated please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
But last part emotional tha...
Manan and cavya both four love each other...but don't know what stop them...
What exactly happened in past with them that they become this...
Manan are parents...OMG...
Why Manik doesn't let her touch her daughter Pari...
Please continue soon...
Eagerly waiting...
Curiosity is killing me...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the PM!
Lovely update!
Hmmm so interesting!
I wanna know what happened in the past!!!
So the pieces can fit together!
Awww last part was emotional! Why is Manik doing this!
Continue soon!:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oh my god!! This was totally unexpected.. manan have a daughter? Plz update next part soon!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
shocking update...

manan has an one year old princess...omgg...
thats was totally unexpected...
that means mananr married? hope they arent divorced...

cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
Waiting for their past to reveal
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update..
As usual.. an unusual story line ..
Loveing the concept n how the story is progressing

Thanxx for the pm

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

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Posted: 8 years ago
It's awesome
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazingggh awesomeee update
Manan ki beti hai toh fir aliya manik ki kya hai ab...plzzz manan cavya jldi se mil jaye...lovd it
Continue soon
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