I PLOMISH :P/ CHAPTER 10-PAGE 33 / 11 April - Page 9

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Posted: 8 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Cooki

It's awesome story dear...
Seems very interesting...
Nandini is chef..
That's something new...
What surprise she was talking about!??
Manik was in deep thought..
But what!?
Thnxxx for the pm...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further parts...


Thank you so much dear ... you will get all your answers soon ..:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: Snehasn

<font color="#3333FF"><font size="3">hi babu... yeh kya ho rahe hai??
why i'm feeling ki aap kuch toh khichri pakaaoingg types πŸ˜†
matlab first SUGAR... phir bhaai and bhaabi... haww... don't say what i'm thinking it's the same 😲😲

Manik...is so loving...
Navuu is his sissy.. haww... mukku too 😲😲
kya ho rahe hai yahaan par???
Cabir is as usual dramebaaz πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Nandu ok.. Naina koun hai???
uff.. so confusing...

continue soonish..
thanks for the PM
take care

love you πŸ€—
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Koi khichri nai pak rahi h. ..anz I don't know what are you thinking;)
All your confusion will be soon cleared ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: navla


Awsum update...


Nandini is chef...


Manik n navya bonding is too gud...


Nandini n naina r best friend n I think
chutki is navya...loved their phone conversation...


Loved d update...




Let's see if you are right or not :) ...
Thank you :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Good start Eku...β­οΈπŸ‘


The chilly evening gave the nice feeling for the Indians 😳... The kitchen scene... n Naina got scold... nice thing why to darao in the kitchen... πŸ˜›The expert cook is right ...anything can happen na... But liked the convo of the Restaurant owner... Nice one.. !Naina n Nandini...

Cabir, Maanik n Navya... n Mukti...
Liked this convo... so they have planned something... n the sala jeeu talks were amusing enough to know how they are bonded together strongly.. .! Liked this.. !

So Navya is chutki... ??/ n she has not yet informed Naina n Nandini about the surprise... That has to be awaited till they reach home..

Nice opening Eku... I Liked the way story started n the characters got introduced/... very fine way of yours...πŸ‘

So the surprise in the next.. ??/ Will be waiting...
Sorry for the late review.. you know the reasons..😳
Thankuuu... God bless...


Well surprise ke liye thoda time h. ...loved your review bhaiya. ... Thank you sooo much ...ap take care ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#85

CHAPTER 2


They reached home ...
Nandini rang the bell ...
Shruti opened the door with smile ...!!!
They both entered ... Nandini crashed on the sofa and said ," Bhabhi. .baht takh gai hu. ..aur bhook bhi lagi h. ..kuch khila dona. .."
At which Shruti smiled ...!!!
She said ," jee jarur..."
,
Naina also sat on the sofa ...
Naina said ," Nandini!!"

At which she just hmmed with closed eyes

"Tujhe kya lagta hai, chutki kaisa surprise dene wali hain? ??? " said Naina. ..

Till then Shruti also came with food for them ... !!!

She said ,"Kaisa surprise. .??? kiski baat chal rahi h? ?"

Naina said to Shruti, " Bhabhi apko pata aaj thode derr phale chutki ka call aaya tha ... ussne kaha ki koi surprise hai toh mai ussi baare mai bol rahi the ..."

Shruti said while serving them ," ohh acha! !! magar kaisa surprise ??? "

Now nandini said while making faces ," pata nai bhabhi woh kuch batati hi ni..."

"Nandu tu zayada na such mai pata toh lage ke rahungi ki iss chutki ke dimag mai chal kya raha h. .."said Naina with a smirk ...

While they both nodded in disbelief. ...as they how Naina was ... !!!

Shruti was feeding Nandini on which Naina said ," Bhabhi not fair isse feeding but not me !!!", with a pout ...

On which Nandini giggled ..

"Aww!! mela bacha. ..aise kaise come here I will feed you also !!!" said shruti. .. on which naina smiled to the fullest and nandini too. ..

"waise koun kahega ki tum dono chefs ho. ..hmm?? ...inne bade chefs ko toh kudh ke banaye khane khana hota hi nai. ...khana toh bhabhi ke hath ka hi khana h ...mujhe toh samjh hi nai aata akhir mere khane mai hai kya? ???"said Shruti. ..

On which both shouted ," apka pyar. .."and laughed. ...


and then they finished eating ...


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Mumbai :

Manik was lying on his bed ... thinking something !!!!" so my sweetu I am coming soon ... pata ni yaad bhi honga ya nahi main tumhe ... I have waited for this day from shooo long ... finally like finally I am gonna meet you ... uff ... I will make sure this time you will fall for me ... not matter what ...sweety I am coming baby!!!!! "said manik to himself with a smirk ...



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Shimla :

Nandini tossing on her bed ,"Kya yaar aaj neend kyu nai arahi h ..why am I feeling something is gonna happen ??? something new ??? uff ... so many new feeling ... bhagwan jee sab I hope kuch galat nai ho. ..."

As she was not getting sleep she got up and sat on her study table and opened her dairy ...

She started writing on it :

Aaj bhi kahi ho ap un yaado main...
Aaj bhi kahi ho ap dil ke kisi kone main...
Bas jarurat hai kisi chij ki toh dundne ki...

Kash aajaye woh pal wapas se...
Bitaye the jo apke baahon mai...

Aaj bhi ap utna hi yaad aate ho... kash maine ek baar apse puch liya hota koun ho ap... nai janti thi ki apki ek mulakat bhi hamari sans hamse chin legi... nai jante the ki apko kudh se durr kar kar rahe the hum sabse badi galati... nai jante the ki bachpan ka pyar aise tadpayega... kash aap wapas aajaye... kash hum ek hojaye...kash na durr kiya hota apko kudh se...kash...kash...

And she closed it having tears in her eyes ...

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Both the innocent soul slept thinking ... without knowing what future holds for them ...

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NEXT MORNING , SHIMLA :

"Naina... Naina... arey... uth...ja kinna soyegi... !!!" said Nandu ..

"Arey sone do na Nandu ...thode derr aur ..", said Naina pulling the blanket over her again ...

"Agar nai uthi toh jo hoga...don't blame me for that ... okay ... !!!" said Nandu with a smirk ...

On which Naina get up with a jerk and went inside the washroom with an angry face ...


While Nandini and Shruti laughed loudly ...

Then suddenly the telephone rang ...

Shruti said while laughing ," wait .. main dekhti hu. .."

Nandini : nai nai bhabhi ap ruko main dekh rahi hu...


And then Nandini came to the hall and picked up the phone ...

Nandini :Hello ...

The person at the other end : kaisa hai mera bacha ????

Nandini : Bhaiya. ..ap. ...main bilkul tikh nai! !!

Rahul : Kyu mera bacha. ..kya hua. .tu tikh toh haina. ... teri tabyat karab hai kya...

He was cut by Nandini ...

Nandini : Bhaiya mujhe kuch nai hua h ..but ap nai hona toh how can I be good ????

Rahul : aww. ..mera bacha tu janti h na main aise tum teeno ko chod kar nai jata but jaruri kaam h toh jana pad gaya. ...sorry ...

Nandini : arey mere pyare bhaiya I understand ...main toh bas aise hi bol rahi the ... ab chalo smile. ..biggie biggie wala. ...!!:)


Rahul : I have the best sister of the world !!! :) .. aacha Shruti and Naina kaisi hain???? All good na ???

Nandini : jee bhaiya sab goody goody ...they are also good. ... and bhabhi ye le ap baat karo. ...

(With that Nandini called Shruti. ... " Bhabhi. ..bhabhi. ..bhaiya ka call h. ..." and she came ..." ye lo karlo ap apne patidev se baat " , said Nandini winking her πŸ˜‰ )


And Nandini left the love birds to spend their time ...


Nandini came to see Naina if she is ready or not ...

Nandini : Naina tu ready hogai????

Naina : haan nandu bas ho hi gai...chal. ...

They had their breakfast and they left for their restaurant. ...




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Mumbai :


Manik was as usual busy in sleeping ...
When he woke up with jerk by feeling water on himself ...

Manik : What the !!!

Cabir : tujhe kab se utha raha hu uth hi nai raha. ..khumbkaran kahika ... yaha teri bahene jane ko full ready aur tu hai ki. ...

Manik still in shock because Cabir had thrown full bucket of water on him ...

Manik : oye toh ye tarika h kisiko jagane ka! !! (angrily)

Cabir : toh kya karta teri behan ne meko bheja tujhe jagane aur aur tu uth hi nai raha tha. ... aur waise agar kuch yaad ho toh ghadi ki taraf nazar dal le. ...

Manik : ohh shit! !!! Kya yaar tu mujhe paresan kar raha h ...ab ja yaha se mujhe ready hona h. ...

While Cabir was shocked ...

Cabir :Huh !!! Bhalai ka toh jamana hi nai rahi... huh...!!!

Manik : ab tu band kar apna drama aur mujhe ready hone de. ...

Cabir : haan haan jaraha hu. ... 20 minutes main aaja warna Navya ne tujhe kah jana h. ..!!! And he left saying this ...

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After 30 minutes or so ... Manik came down ... While both Mukti and Navya were very angry ... and were ready to burst out ...

While Manik with cool attitude came towards them ..

Manik : Good Morning my sisters ...With a smile ..

Navya : Good morning bhai ( with a scaram ) don't you think it's too early to say good morning ... and Mukti nodded in agreement
While Manik smiled sheepishly ...

Manik : umm sorry ... said with a very cute face holding his ear ...

And who will not forgive on this cute wale yet angry hulk ke smile par. ..right ...

So Navya and Mukti smiled and they both hugged him ..!!!

And cabir after seeing them smiled to the fullest ..and prayed to god to keep them like this always ...till them Manik dragged I'm him in the hug. ..

Then they had their breakfast ...!!!!


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Hello guys ... I know I am really very late ...but what to do ...was stuck really bad ...well here is the part 2... any suggestions you wanna you can give ... Thank for the previous reviews ...
See ya ...
Lots of love ..
Ekta ...
Edited by manan_eku - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#86
Thanks for the update... will be back with the review... !!!


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Posted: 8 years ago
#87
awsum update...
nandini naina n bhabhi bonding is beautiful...
poem was nice...
manan like each other...
loved d update...
waiting for next part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#88
Wow update...
Waiting for Manan to meet...
Bonds r really beautiful...
Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#89
Hey Eku... πŸ˜ƒ

Issse kehte hain... der se toh aaye per durust aaye... πŸ˜‰

I liked the update... β­οΈπŸ‘
Where there is still a suspense of surprise surrounding the three... Nandini n manik are sailing in a same boat n are unknown to the fact destiny is having for them...
The bhaiya is always special for sisters... loved the bond they have with his both sis... N the way his sisters value their bhabhi is too much liked... ⭐️
Manik was pleasantly woken up by Cabir πŸ˜† I liked this way... but take care of the shortage of water plzz... πŸ˜›
Now all is going well.. seeming well... n has to be good.. ! Will wait for the next one to know the reactions to the surprise unfolding... !!!
Thanks dear... n God bless... !!! πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
#90
It's wonderful update dear...
Very interesting..
The bond Nandini,naina & bhabhi r sharing is heavenly cute...
Manik is thinking about someone so as Nandini..
Morning rambles on both the sides..
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read the further parts..
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