I PLOMISH :P/ CHAPTER 10-PAGE 33 / 11 April - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: navla

beautiful update...
all room is too gud...
loved d update...
waiting for next update...



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

beautiful update
loved it
cont soon



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bawaswift

Awesome n very cute update Eku...⭐️👏

So the love birds have got the opposite rooms...😳
And what rooms...👏Beautiful decor... n loved the color combinations... !⭐️⭐️
Now waiting for the trance coming back to the two n romance starts...
Loving the update... God bless you dear... !!!



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Lovely update Ekta👏👏

I loved the bond everyone shares, so cute and loving !
The lovers have met and the eyelocks were magicalNandini and Manik are in a trance and...😳
Room decors are so beautiful⭐️⭐️
I must say their home is a paradise !
Waiting for more, thanks dear so so much🤗
Loves❤️



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Swatishubh

The most friendly bond i loved it so much!

Beautiful update Eku dear❤️🤗
Loved the bond they all share plus, the way they all talk. I mean they are meeting after a long time and this can be seen in their meeting and talks.
I liked the decors of the house. Very Royal Touch!
Now the lovers have met and Nandini left hastily. I know Manik will be following her downstairs to come back upstairs to their respective rooms😉
Luv ya sweetie, awesome write up!⭐️



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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan01

manikn nandini met

amazing part





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Originally posted by: ArSha_ManNan

Superb update
Wow everyone meeting after a long tym
Hehe Naina n Manik
Nyc rooms
Thnkz 4 the pm



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After Nandini left ... Manik too came down ...

All were sitting and enjoying the snacks and coffee with their lots of masti...!!

Manik was staring at Nandini for the corner of his eyes without being noticed by anyone ...

All were busy in talking ...so busy that they didn't even realise the time ...

It was almost dinner time...

They had their dinner and all went to their room ...as they all were tired of travelling and all ...

Manik went upstairs in his room and changed while Nandini was still downstairs busy in some work ...

Manik laid down in his bed ...

Manik's thought ...

After so many days I saw her ... she is still the same ... beautiful ... (and a smile appeared on his face ) but why didn't she talk to me...After all it was all her wish ..
Sweetie why you didn't talk to me ..

His chains of thought was broken by the sound that came from his opposite room as his room's door wasn't lock so he could listen the sound ...

He got up from his bed and sneaked from his room door to see ...

And what he saw made him smile ...
Actually he saw that Nandini had came in her room...

He made his mind and went near her room . He knocked at her door and said ," Sweetie !!"

Nandini back was facing him .. she turned around hearing his voice ...only to meet his eyes ..
Again their eyes met and both got lost in each other...

But soon Nandini's eyes were full of tears which caused his trance broke up ...
Nandini turned around to stop the tears which were now breaking all records ..

Manik saw this and moved to her...

Manik came towards and softly cupped her face and made her face him while Nandini's eyes were still flowing and her eyes were looking down ..

Manik : Sweetie! Look at me ! ( he said softly )

Nandini nodded in negative ...

Manik : Plz Sweetie !

Nandini slowly looked at him ...still with teary eyes ...

Manik nodded in negative saying not to weep and rubbed her tears ...

Manik : Sweetie ! You only wanted this na ... you only said na ki let's leave everything on destiny ...

Nandini nodded ...

Manik : then why crying ...

Nandini again nodded cutely in negative indicating that she is not crying ...

Manik : yes , yes I can see...

Nandini pouted .

Manik : you won't talk to me ??

Nandini instantly hugged him tightly and again cried ...
She said while hugging ," I missed you...I missed you baht baht baht jayadaaa...!"

Manik smiled at her and said ," I missed you more sweetie!

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A man was sitting on chair in his study room and was remembering all these with tears in his eyes ...

The man said to his own ," where are you sweetie!" And a drop of tear fell from his eyes ...

Suddenly someone came inside the room ..

"Mamu! Mamu...kaha ho ap ..." said a lil boy around 5 years old .

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The girl kept crying in that room..don't know till when ... and kept looking at the picture hanging on the wall ...

She wiped her tears away ...and turn to left the room ...before leaving she once again glanced at the picture and left ...
She locked the room ...

She took the keys from the table and moved out locking the home ...

She reached her restaurant ...

She was busy in her work when her phone rang ...

She picked it : haa bolo Naina...

Person from the other end : maasi...mamma nai mai bol rahi hu...

She smiled : haa Pari beta ...bolo kya baat h ...

Introducing Grace Giridhar as Pari





Pari : maasi dekho na mamma mujhe apke pas nai leke arahi h :(

She : hawww...aisa kyu? Ye toh galat baat h...

Pari : pata nai :( jee. ..haina...

She : hmm...acha mamma ko phone do beta..

Pari gave the cell to Naina...

Naina : haa Nandu bol...!

Nandini : kya Naina tu Pari ko leke kyu nai arahi h ...

Naina : Nandu...tu janti h na abhi abhi main iss wale cafe par aai hu...yaha baht kaam h. ...upar se Shekhar ko bhi time nai h...

Nandini : haa haa janti...tum dono apne kaam ke chakar main meri bachi ko paresan kar rahe ho...

Naina : arey yaar toh tu hi aaja na yaha...pari bhi khush and meri Janu bhi. ..usse bhi khafi dino se nai mili hu...

Nandini :umm...Naina nai...

Naina :nai nai tu arahi h bas...

Nandini : but naina. ..

Naina : no ifs and buts ...you are coming that's it. !

Nandini :hmm. .okay. ..

Naina : acha chal ab rakhti hu main...

Nandini : okay ..bye ...

And she cut the call ..

Nandini said to herself ," hmm...sugar ke aane ka time horaha h. ..ghar jati hu. ..aaj toh shanti tai bhi nai aane wali h. ."

And she talked to her workers ..and left for home ..

She came back home ..
And went to her room ...

Then only ghe door bell rang !!

"Haa aai",said Nandini...

She opened the door ...but found no one ..she was going to close door...but her eyes on the letter that was on the door step ...she picked it up...

It was looking pretty from the outside ...

"Who could send this ?", she thought ..

She took it ... and went inside ...she sat in the living area...thinking that who could send it...when the door bell rang again ..making her frown again ..

"Now who's this?? ", she murmured to herself ...

She opened the door and what she saw made her smile ...

Introducing Harshaali Malhotra as Janvi





There was standing her sugar with a smile ...

Aww...mela sugar aagaya...",said Nandini removing her bag from back ...taking her in her own arms ..

She said ,"Jee mamma." And rested her head on her arm ..

Nandini asked her ,"kya hua meri jaan aaj no gossip ? Batana nai school mai kya hua ? "

"Nai mamma bas hi tired ", replied she ..

"Acha toh mela sugar tired hai...Acha chalo kuch kahte h...uske baad apke liye ek surprise h", said Nandini...

Listening about surprise , her eyes twinkled and she forgot about everything and asked ," surprise ..kaisa surprise mamma??"

Nandini : beta agar mai bata dungi toh surprise kaise rahega...

She frowned while Nandini smiled at her cuteness ...

After that , Nandini made her change ..and they both had lunch ...
And they moved for their destination... and for the surprise of the lil one ...

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He wiped his tears and asked the child ..

"Haa...champ...bolo kya baat h ??",said the man...

Introducing Ricky Patel as Abhi







"Mamu...mamu...ap jante ho ki muku bhua kaha h??? ",said the lil boy ..

"Haa champ woh office gai haina...unhe kuch important kaam tha na issiliye..."said the man...

But unhone toh bola tha aaj mujhe woh bahar lejayengi. ..pari ke pas ,said Abhi

The man : Acha koi baat nai ap chale jana dusre dinn ...

Abhi : nai mujhe aaj hi jana h ...
And he made a crying face :'(

The man : Acha...acha...thik h main le chalta hu okay. ..now don't be sad ..

Abhi: yepieee ..main mummy ko bata kar aata hu...
And he shouted ...

Abhi : mummy mummy. ..

His mother : Haa beta bolo ...

Abhi : maa...mujhe na Manik mamu...le kar jarahe h Pari ke pas. ..
He said happily ...

His mother : okay ..thik h beta ... kisko paresan maat karna. ..

He nodded...

Manik came from back : Navya apna dhyan rakhna and Cabir aaye toh kahna mujhse baat kare. ..baht derr se try kar raha ho. ..phone nai utha raha. ..(yes , Navya is the mother of Abhi.

Navya : okay bhai. ..ap bhi dhyan rakhna. ..

Manik nodded and left with Abhi ...

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I know ...I know ...I made a major change. ..
But this part is mostly after the prologue ...
Thank you for the comments and likes :)
Take care...
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update...
starting manan scene was nice...they love each other...
in between i was confuse from where the kids came...after d end i got it...
manan is separate...navya n naina is married n having kids...
hope manan meets...
loved d update...
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