Manan- friendship or more(ch.76 on page no.64)(15-1-2018)

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Prologue-
Nandini was lost in the thoughts of Manik. Suddenly 2 women barged into her room and started taunting her. She couldn't hear the taunts and broke down. The women asked Nandini to forget Manik as he didn't want to see her face anymore. They asked her to leave the house immediately . Nandini wanted to see Manik once but they didn't allow and threw her out of the house.
Who were these women?
Where was Manik?
Where will Nandini go?

Stay tuned to find out...

INDEX
Prologue- page no. 1
Character sketch - page no.1
Chapter 1- page 2
Chapter 2- page 2
Chapter 3- page 3
Chapter-4- page 3
Chapter-5- page 3
Chapter-6- page 4
Chapter-7- page 4
Chapter-8- page 5
Chapter-9- page 5
Chapter-10-page 5
Chapter-11-page 6
Chapter-12-page 8
Chapter-13-page 9
Chapter-14-page 9
Chapter-15- page10
Chapter -16-page 11
Chapter -17-page13
Chapter -18-page14
Chapter -19-page15
Chapter -20-page 16
Chapter -21-page 17
Chapter -22- page 17
Chapter -23-page 18
Chapter -24-page 19
Chapter -25-page 21
Chapter -26-page 22
Chapter -27-page 23
Chapter -28-page 24
Chapter -29-page 26
Chapter -30-page 26
Chapter -31-page 27
Chapter -32-page 28
Chapter -33-page 29
Chapter -34-page 30
Chapter -35-page 31
Chapter -36-page 31
Chapter -37-page 32
Chapter -38-page 33
Chapter -39-page 34
Chapter -40-page 35
Chapter -41-page 36
Chapter -42-page 37
Chapter -43-page 38
Chapter -44-page 39
Chapter -45-page 40
Chapter -46-page 41
Chapter -47-page 43
Chapter -48-page 44
Chapter -49-page 45
Chapter -50-page 46
Chapter -51-page 47
Chapter -52-page 49
Chapter -53-page 49
Chapter -54-page 50
Chapter -55-page 51
Chapter -56-page 51
Chapter -57-page 53
Chapter -58-page 53
Chapter -59-page 54
Chapter -60-page 54
Chapter -61-page 55
Chapter -62-page 56
Chapter -63-page 56
Chapter -64-page 57
Chapter -65-page 57
Chapter -66-page 58
Chapter -67-page 59
Chapter -68-page 59
Chapter -69-page 60
Chapter -70-page 61
Chapter -71-page 62
Chapter-72-page 62
Chapter-73-page 63
Chapter-74-page 63
Chapter-75-page 63
Chapter-76-page 64
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Character sketch-
Nandini Malhotra- 22 year old simple , innocent girl. Widow of Vivek Malhotra. Lives in her in-laws house.
Manik Malhotra- 25 year old hot, handsome and sexy guy. A photographer by profession or rather it's his passion. Son of Raj and Nyonika Malhotra. Loves his parents a lot. Has a crush on Aliya Saxena(top model).
Raj and Nyonika Malhotra- Parents of Vivek and Manik. Both of them handle the Malhotra empire.

Nyonika hates Nandini and holds her responsible for her elder sons death.

Vivek Malhotra- Elder son of Malhotras. Died in an accident within few months of his marriage with Nandini.

Aliya Saxena- 23 year old fashion diva. One of the top models of India. Sweet girl. Likes Manik and enjoys all the attention she gets from him.

Soha khurana- 25 year old , wicked ,manipulative girl. Stays at Malhotra Mansion. Always stays with Nyonika as her mother(Nyonika's friend) stays abroad with her father for business reasons. Hates nandini .

Rest of the characters will be introduced as the story progresses.

So guys is the C.S. interesting enough to hold ur attention. Please reply and give your valuable suggestions.

Edited by Sarahpeyton - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting prologue...
Wanna know more...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very nice you are bringing new concept curious to know more
Who the hell were these two? Ahh where ia manik
Please continues soon
Or i should say please continue 3no new ff as soon as possible
Cant wait more 😊
Stay blessed
Keep writing 😉
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Hey guys I m very disappointed with the poor response m getting for this story. Didn't u guys like it. Should I end it here itself?
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Chapter 1-
A girl woke up early morning due to the constant buzzing of alarm and rushed to freshen up. She took a bath wore her clothes and came out . She combed her long hair and tied it together , covered her head with a dupatta and went out of her small room.


She performed pooja and then went to kitchen to prepare breakfast for her family members.
She had to be extra careful while preparing the food. She knew that one mistake and she would have to listen to the taunts of her mother in law.

That girl was Nandini . She was a widow and was living with her in-laws since 2 years . After her husbands death she didn't got the respect she deserved from her in-laws. Her mil(mother in law- Nyonika) used to taunt her as she considered Nandini to be the reason of her son's death.

Coming back to the story.

She prepared the food with perfection and went out of the kitchen for setting the table. As soon as she left someone entered and added a lot of chilli powder in the curry and smiled wickedly.

Everyone came down and Nandini served the food. As soon as they ate it they spit it out. Nyonika started her taunting session about her carelessness. Nandini was confused as to what she has done now so she innocently asked
Nandini- kya hua mummyji khana theek se nahi bana hai kya.

Nyonika- lo ab aise pretend mat karo jaise tumhe much pata hi nai. Kahi tum ne ye jaan bujh kar to nahi kiya . ye soch karke ki hamara muh jal jaye itni zyada mirch se.

Nandini- Nahi mummyji mai aisa kyu karungi. Mai ne to sab theek se check kiya tha cook karne ke baad. Pata nai ye kaise hogaya.

Nyonika- Acha to tum ye kehna chahti ho ki kisi aur ne ye kiya. Tum...

Raj (cut her in between)- offo kabhi is ghar me sukoon se khane milega ya nahi. Roz roz wahi tamasha. Saying this he got up and left.

Nyonika again started taunting Nandini .

Soha was all this while enjoying it.

Yes it was Soha who added chilli powder in the food.

Nandini couldn't take it any longer and ran to her room.

She cried her heart out. Someone saw Nandini crying and felt really bad.
That person came inside the room and sat near Nandini.

He wiped her tears and asked her not to cry.

She stopped crying and hugged him.

So here is the first chapter. How's it?

Any guesses who was that person who consoled Nandini... Keep guessing till the next update.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!! New story!!

Nice concept

Continue soon dear
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CHAPTER- 2

Nandini hugged that person for a long time and the person kept patting her head. Nandini felt a little relieved and broke the hug.
The person then asked Nandini to relax and have some food as she didn't have food last night also and that she will fall weak if she keeps skipping meals just for the sake of such mean people.

At first Nandini refused and then after a lot of insistence from that person she had a little food.

That person asked Nandini not to take too much stress about such things and said that god cannot be so harsh upon her and that soon she will be relieved of all these tortures and will be able to lead a happy life.

That person was her Vivek's aunt( bua) Shanti. She was a widow as well and stayed at her brother's (Raj Malhotra) house. Raj loved his sister a lot but Nyonika didn't like her a bit as she always had an upper hand over Nyonika regarding the family matters.

Shanti liked Nandini a lot and always stood by her in everything.

Coming back to the story ,

After eating Nandini went to the terrace to get some fresh air and sat there for a long time thinking of how her life changed so quickly.

FLASHBACK:

A peak into Nandini's past-
She was a fun loving, care free girl who used to live life to the fullest .
Though she was not rich but still her mother fulfilled all her wishes even before she said it .


Her mother was a school teacher and they lived in a small bungalow which her father had left for them before dying.
Though her mother was a single parent , yet she never made her realize her father's absence.
Both of them were each other's world.

One day Shanti spotted Nandini at a temple and liked her instantly.
Shanti meet Nandini's mother and asked Nandini's hand for Vivek .
Her mother met Vivek and liked him instantly so she said yes.

Shanti on the other hand convinced Raj and even he said yes as he had full confidence on his sister's choice. And about Vivek he was bowled over by Nandini's beauty and innocence.
But Nyonika was against this marriage as she felt that Nandini's family status doesn't match to their status and she cannot be an ideal daugter in law to the Malhotra's.
But Raj and Vivek didn't agree to this. So she had to give in to their demand.

Nandini and Vivek got married eventually but Nyonika didn't accept Nandini wholeheartedly.

Nyonika tried every trick to keep Nandini away from Vivek.
On the wedding night she pretended to fall sick and Vivek being a good obedient son took care of his mother.
The next day she sent Vivek to London by saying that their company would suffer great loss if he doesn't go and fix the problem there.
Vivek half-heartedly agreed. He wanted to take Nandini along with him but Nyonika made some excuse and didn't allow that to happen.


Guys i will finish Rest of the flashback in another update .

Please do tell me if you liked this part. I don't know what crap I have written. Plz bear with it.

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Hello guys sorry for the delay.
Hopefully you will get the update by evening.
I m almost done with this part. So stay tuned...
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CHAPTER-3

Continuation of flashback-

Vivek came to Nandini and informed her that he had to leave for some important business work to London.

Nandini felt sad but Vivek assured that he would return soon and pecked her forehead and left.

Nyonika smiled seeing this as now her mission was accomplished.

Vivek used to talk to Nandini on phone regularly.

And Nandini used to wait eagerly for his calls.

Nyonika couldn't tolerate even this so she used to give loads of house work to Nandini so that she won't be able to talk to Vivek.

Few months passed by in the same fashion and finally the day arrived when Vivek was to return to India.

He didn't inform Nandini about his return as he wanted to surprise her.

He came and met his parents first and then went to Nandini.

Nandini was sitting in the room near the window. He came from behind and placed his hands on her eyes.

Nandini recognised him and removed his hands and faked anger.

Nandini- Aap bahut bure ho . apne bataya bhi nahi ke aap aaj arahe ho. Mai naraaz hu aapse. Jao mai nahi baat karti aapse.

Saying this she turned to other side.

Vivek smiled seeing his wife's cuteness.
He came in front of her and held his ears and said-

My dear wifey I am really sorry. I know that you are angry with me but don't worry aaj raat tumhari saari naraazgi dur kar dunga mai.
I have planned a surprise for you.

Nandini got excited and said- Surprise. What is it ? Bolo na.

Vivek- Have patience my dear u will get all your answers tonight.

Saying this he hugged her.

They talked for sometime and he went out to plan his surprise.

It was 6 in the evening when he called Nandini and asked her to be ready as he was coming to pick her up in half an hour.

Nandini got ready in a red saree , left her hair open and did some make up.

She waited for almost one hour but Vivek didn't come.
She called him several times but he didn't pick up.
Then after 15 min he got a call from Vivek's number.

Nandini picked up and said- kaha hai aap . hum kab se wait kar rahe hai aapka.

But it was not Vivek who answered her .
That person said that Vivek had net with an accident and is admitted in city hospital.

Hearing this the phone slipped from her hands and she collapsed on the ground.

Nyonika was passing by and observed Nandini sitting lifelessly on the ground .
He came and saw her phone and picked it up and the person on other other side informed her about Vivek.

Nyonika rushed to the hospital after informing Shanti and asked her to inform Raj.

Shanti informed Raj and took Nandini with her to the hospital.

Vivek had severe injuries and lost lot of blood. He was in very critical condition.

Nyonika saw this and her heart shattered to see her son in such condition.

Meanwhile Raj also reached there with Shanti and Nandini.

Nandini was still not responding to anything. She was like a lifeless body.

Vivek asked everyone to give him some alone time with Nandini.

Shanti made her sit on a stool near Vivek's bed and everyone went out.

Vivek- Nandini. Look at me .
(Nandini looked at her)

I wanted to confess this now as i don't have enough time.

I love you Nandini. I really do.
But I couldn't fulfill my promise to always be there with you.
Promise me one thing that you will not cry for me after I m gone.
You have to be strong. You will never fall weak. You will move ahead in life.

Nandini please promise me.

Nandini was crying her heart out hearing all these.

Vivek wiped her tears .

Nandini kept her head on his chest and promised him that she won't fall weak and she won't cry.

Nandini- Please don't leave me and go.
Please.

Vivek smiled hearing this and pecked her forehead.

In the meantime everyone came.

Vivek's eyes were getting heavy. His eyes were searching for one person.

Raj saw this and understood that Vivek was searching for his little brother.

Raj- I have informed him and he will be here any moment.

Just then the door opened and a 6 ft guy entered .
He came near Vivek and sat there .

He asked that guy to take care of everyone .
That guy was in tears seeing his elder brother in such condition.

Vivek saw everyone for the last time and then his eyes shut.


Done with another chapter.

It was a bit emotional for me.
Hope you guys like it.

Guys please leave long comments and silent readers plz give ur views.

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