Manan- Second Wife(ch.44 on page no.58)(28-4-2017) - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
#71
Wow wat an amazing story it is...
Nandini falling for manik...
Manan closeness...

Nd dis nisha i so want her to be oit of the house soon

Plzzz update new part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
I read ur story in one go and i loved it . I would love to read further . Eagerly waiting for nxt chapy update soon and PM me.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER-13

Next day at Murthy Mansion-

Nandini got up early and saw Navya still sleeping.
She went to freshen up .

After having a shower,she came out and saw Navya still sleeping.

Nandini smiled and went near her to wake her up.

She got a wicked idea to wake up Navya.

Nandini took a jug full of water and was about to throw water on Navya when Navya said with closed eyes- Stop it Nandu. Tumhe Manik ki kasam.

Nandini on hearing this immediately stopped in midway.

Navya opened her eyes and smiled.

Nandini- Navvu this is not fair. You can't tease me like this.

She made a cute pout.

Navya- Oh my God. Just look at you.

Manik ka naam sunte hi ruk gayi.

Nandini- Navvu stop it na. Please.

Navya- Acha Baba theek hai.

Nandini- Jao jaldi ready hojao. Warna college ke liye late hojayenge.

Navya- OK.

Saying this she went to washroom and Nandini went downstairs .

After sometime Navya got ready and came down.

Nandini- Navvu lets finish our breakfast first then college ke liye nikalte hai.

They both had breakfast.

Navya- Nandu Dadaji kaha hai.

Nandini- Wo to kab ka office chale gaye.

Navya- OK. To chale college.

They both left to college.

Vishnu had appointed a driver for them for her safety and instructed him to keep an eye on Nandini.

Nandini and Navya reached college and attended all the lectures.

It was almost evening.

They were sitting in the canteen when Navya spoke.

Navya- Nandu waise tumne Manik ko thanks abhi tak nahi bola na.

Nandini nodded her head in a no and said- Kaise bolti thanks. Thanks bolne ke liye mujhe usse milna hoga na.

Navya - Hmm... Baat toh sahi hai. Toh chale.

Nandini- Kahan.

Navya- Arey budhu office ko Manik se milne aur kaha...

Nandini- Nai Navvu . Wahan Dadu honge.

Navya- Haan toh. Wo kaunsa tumhe khajayenge. Tum Chalo to sahi.

Nandini- Par...

Navya- Par var kuch nahi. Tum Chalo mere sath.

Saying this she dragged Nandini to the car and they asked the driver to take them to their office.

They reached the office and went inside.

The receptionist knew Nandini very well as she was Vishnu Murthy's granddaughter. She welcomed Nandini with a warm smile and said- Yes Mam how may I help you.

Nandini- Dadu hai kya apne cabin me.

Receptionist- Mam wo conference hall me hai in a meeting.

Navya slapped her forehead and whispered to Nandini- Pagal ladki tum Dadu se milne aayi ho ya Manik se. Manik ke baare me pucho. Tumse nahi hoga mai hi puch leti hu.

Navya- Actually mujhe ... I mean hame Manik se milna tha. Could you show us the way to his cabin.

Receptionist- Sure Ma'am. Go straight and take a right turn . It's the third cabin beside the staircase that leads down to the store room.

Navya thanked her and went in the direction with Nandini.

They both reached the cabin and knocked it.

There was no answer.

Navya opened the door and found the cabin empty.

She asked the peon who was passing by as to where Manik was.

Peon told them that he was in the storeroom downstairs.

Navya thanked him and he went away.

Navya turned to Nandini and said- To hamara kaam khatam hua. Ab tum jao Manik se milne , hum canteen me wait karte hai.

Nandini- Navya tum bhi Chalo na sath me.

Navya- Mai kya karungi waha tum dono ke beech. Tum jao. Saying this she left from there.

Nandini- Navya suno toh...

But Navya had already left.

Nandini sighed and went downstairs to the storeroom.

Meanwhile in the store room -

Manik was going through some documents and taking notes from it.

He heard footsteps and looked up to find Nandini.

Manik- Nandini tum yahan...

Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#74
Nice update
Loved it cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#75
I sooo wish uss room ka door lock hooo jayee Manan ko tym spend karne k mill jaye n humee Manan wala chap v mill jayegaa...


Eagerrllyy waittiing plzzz plzzz


Update AsAP jaldi plzzz


add more Manan


jaldi dono ka shadi kawaa doo plzzz
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Posted: 8 years ago
#76
Okayyy i know m very late i coudnt read your updates last few day as m a little busy kherrr this so very amazing awww nandini love manik but she doesnt know abt him being married.. 😭 manik now everythng in your hand do somthing before her little heart break 😛 ummm i just read it all in one go n yes i hate manik wife + saas + mom because they are barrrier btw our lovebirds 😊
Keeep writing do continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#77
Wow...nice update dear...👏.
Waiting to read the scene between MaNan...😳.
Cont soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
I luvvv uuu yaar ur such a awsmmm writer wht a story...
Just cmpltly flln in luv wid ur amazing skills bt
I cant send u buddy rqst so plz send me by ur side plzzz
Read ur story in a go nd find it interesting nd fantastic
Thnx fr gving us such a awsm story.

Luv uuu muaaahhhj''''''
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Posted: 8 years ago
#79
Awesome.. Eagerly waiting for there first proper encounter (alone)
N loving the story
Thank u for the update
:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER -14

As soon as Manik saw Nandini, he got up and said- Nandini... tum yahan?

Nandini was a bit nervous as to what she will tell him. She was cursing Navya for sending her alone to talk to Manik.

She was lost in her thoughts when Manik spoke.

Manik - Nandini...

Nandini- Huh...

Manik - Kya hua. Any problem. Sir we milne aayi ho. But wo to meeting me hai.

Nandini - Nai wo mai aapse milne aayi thi. Apko thanks kehna tha.

She said all this in one breath.

Manik didn't understand a single word said by her.

Manik - Sorry kuch kaha tumne. Maine suna nahi.

Nandini made an innocent face and said- Mai aapse milne aayi thi.

Manik (confused) - Mujhse... Par kyu.

Nandini - Wo mai...

Manik saw Nandini's nervousness and to make her feel comfortable he said-
Acha Ok Pehle baitho yaha pe.

He pointed towards a chair.

Nandini sat down on the chair.

Manik - Ab batao. Mujhse kuch kaam tha kya.

Nandini - Haan. Main apko thanks bolne aayi thi. Apne us din mujhe kidnap hone se bachaya tha. Aur kal bhi...

Manik - Nandini it's OK. Thanks bolne ki zarurat nahi hai.

Nandini - Ok.

Manik - Waise tum yahan tak aagayi sirf ek thanks bolne ke liye.

Nandini - Haan wahi to . Maine bhi Navya se yahi kaha tha. Ek thanks bolne ke liye office tak aane ki kya zarurat hai.

She said all this without realising what she was talking.

Then she realised what she said and bit her tongue.

Manik smiled seeing her cute antics.

He thought to himself - How can someone be so cute and innocent.

Nandini - Manik aap yahan kya kar rahe the. Meeting me nahi gaye Dadu ke sath.

Manik - Haan. Actually this work was equally important and sir couldn't trust anyone else with this. So he assigned me this task.

Nandini - Aap yaha kab SE kaam kar rahe the.

Manik - Dopahar se.

Nandini - iska MATLAB apne lunch nai kiya .

Manik - Had some snacks.

Nandini - This is very bad. Dadu kehte hai ki kitna bhi kaam kyu na ho kabhi khane me compromise nahi karna chahiye.

Manik - Hmm. Right.

Nandini - To chaliye canteen kuch khalijiye. Navya bhi wahi hai.

Manik didn't want to say no to her innocent request. So he said- Ok Chalo.

Nandini climbed the steps and tried to open the door but couldn't open it.

Nandini - Ye to khul hi nahi raha hai.

Manik - Let me try.

Nandini stepped aside and Manik also tried to open it but in vain.

Manik - Lagta hai kisine lock kardiya hai bahar se.

Nandini - What? Par hum to andar hai koi kyu lock karega.

Nandini started to panic .

Manik - Nandini relax. It's just that office timings are over so may be the peon locked it.

Nandini - Mai Navya ko call karti hu.

Nandini took out her phone and was about to dial the number when her battery went dead.

Nandini asked Manik- Mera phone to band hogaya. Aap apna phone dijiye mai Dadu ko call karti hu.

Manik searched for his phone in his pocket but didn't find it.

Then he realized that he had kept his mobile in his cabin.

Manik - Mera mobile to cabin me hi reh gaya.

Nandini - Kya. Ab kya hoga . Hum bahar kaise niklenge.

Manik - Don't worry Nandini . Mai kuch karta hu. Tum relax karo.

But Nandini was too scared.

Meanwhile outside the storeroom-

The entire office was empty as everyone had already left.

Someone was standing outside the door. He couldn't hear the conversation of Manik and Nandini but he knew that Nandini was inside.

He smiled evilly and switched off the storeroom lights.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

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