Manan- Second Wife(ch.44 on page no.58)(28-4-2017) - Page 13

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Posted: 8 years ago
Waiting for Manan

abb to essa lagta h Mani Nisha k kuch jyada hi pasand karta h uparsee Nisha ki sachai Neo n Swara ko pata v nehi
and
Manan
Nandu Clg m
and Mani office m dono k millne ka no chance
abb to Mani is married ye jannne k badd vishnu Manan ko eksath nehi hone degaa...milne ko no chance

kass Vishnu ko pata lag jayee that Mani apne wife se divorce lee raha h...

Uparse Mani Nish k bache ko rakhna chahata h jisee sab yahi sochege k wo bacha Mani n Nisha k h jisse sab usse blame karegee...


Of course we luv ur concept thtsy we r here reading ths
but just want Add sab kuch add karne k sath sath Manan interaction v add karooo
jok bilkul add nehi hota..

dur dur tak Manan diikhaii hi nehi dee raha...

Hope dono ka divorce jaldi hooo jayee
Edited by A12609z - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awsm...though waiting for manan...but i guess u must have planned it in a better way...
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Posted: 8 years ago
CHAPTER -19

Vishnu and Navya were shocked to hear that Manik is already married.

They looked at each other and then looked at Manik.

Navya selfthought-

Hey Bhagwaan ab kya hoga.

Agar Nandini ko pata chalega ki Manik shadi shuda hai to kya beetegi uspe.

Wo to toot hi jayegi bilkul.

Manik aise kaise karsakta hai Nandini ke sath.

Navya was about to say something to Manik but Vishnu held her hand and made her to sit back.

Vishnu asked Navya not to create any scene here.

Navya sighed and sat down.

Nyonika and Swara got tea for them and Vishnu and Navya drank it.

Vishnu - Acha Manik Beta hum chalte hai.

Nyonika - Arey aise kaise ,ablog khana khakar jaiye na. Khana tayyar hai.

Navya- Nai Aunty it's Ok. Hum fir kabhi aayenge. Ab Hume chalna chahiye. Der horahi hai.

Vishnu - Haan hum to bas yaha se guzar rahe the to socha ki Manik ki family se milte chale.

Nyonika - Oh Acha. Theek hai . Par kam se kam sweet to khakar jaiye.

Navya- Sweet kis Khushi me.

Nyonika- Wo actually hamari Nisha Maa banne wali hai.

This came as a big shock to both Vishnu and Navya.

They half-heartedly ate the sweets.

Navya - Ji Aunty. Ab hum chalte hai.

Nyonika - Manik Beta inhe bahar tak drop karke aaja.

Manik - Ji Maa.

Manik came out with Vishnu and Navya.

Manik hesitatingly asked - Sir wo Nandini kaisi hai. Wo nahi aayi aap logo ke sath.

Navya controlling her anger- Kyu tum Nandini ke baare me kyu puch rahe ho.

Manik - Mai to bas aise hi puch raha tha. Tum naraz kyu horahi ho.

Vishnu - Arey Manik Beta . Aaj iska mood off hai . Subah se aise hi behave kar rahi hai. Mujhe bhi daant diya isne aaj. And Nandini bilkul theek hai. Ghar pe hai wo

Manik - Oh... Ok.

Vishnu - Beta tum jao andar tumhari family wait kar rahi hogi. Hum log chale jayenge.

Manik - Ji sir.

Saying this he went inside and Vishnu and Navya sat in the car and drove away.

In the car-

Navya- Dadaji aapne mujhe roka kyu . Mai us Manik ka Muh Tod deti for doing this to Nandini. I mean wo married hai aur uski wife pregnant hai fir bhi Nandini se...

Vishnu - Navya shaant hojao. Gusse me pata bhi hai kya bole jarahi ho. Manik ne kabhi nahi kaha ke he likes Nandini. Aur usne Kuch jhoot bhi nahi bola. Ab usey kaise pata hoga ki Nandini ke dil me kya hai. We can't blame him Beta.

Navya- But Dadaji...

Vishnu - Ye sab baatein chodo Beta. Hume yeh sochna chahiye ki hum Nandini ko kaise samjhayenge.

Navya- Pata nahi Dadaji Nandu to Manik ke sapne sajaye baitho hai.
Hum to nahi dekh payenge uska udaas chehra.

Vishnu - Par Beta usey batana to padega na isse Pehle ki der hojaye.

Navya and Vishnu reached Murthy Mansion and saw that Nandini had already slept.

Navya- Dadaji hum morning me aate hai. Aap bhi sojaiye.

Vishnu - Ok Beta. Bye. Good night.

Navya- Good Night Dadaji.

With this Navya left to her house and Vishnu went to his room and slept.

Next morning, Nandini woke up and went to Vishnu's room.

Nandini - Dadu ... kaha ho aap.

Vishnu - Nandu Beta tu uth gayi. Mai yahan study me hu. Andar aaja.

Nandini went inside and saw Vishnu standing in front of her parents photo hanging on the wall.

Nandini - Dadu ap Mom Dad ko miss kar rahe ho na.

Vishnu - Haan Beta aur mai janta hu ki tu bhi apne Mom Dad ko miss karti hai. But kabhi batati nahi hai.

Nandini didn't say anything.

Vishnu - Nandini tu janti hai tere dad bahut strong the. Kitni bhi problem aajaye Par kabhi haar nahi maante the .

Nandini - Hmm...

Vishnu - Mai tujhe Kuch batana chahta hu Beta. But promise kar mujhe ki tu weak nahi padegi wo baat sunkar.

Nandini smiled and said- I promise Dadu .Mai Dad ki tarah strong hu. I won't fall weak.

Vishnu - Nandu tu Manik ko bhool ja.

Nandini's smile vanished hearing this.

Nandini - But kyu Dadu. Hua kya hai. Aap aise kyu bol rahe ho.

Navya entered the study room and heard everything .

Vishnu - Beta wo Manik...

Nandini - Kya Manik. Aage boliye na.

Vishnu - Manik...

Navya - Manik shadi shuda hai and his wife is pregnant with his child.

Nandini - Navvu tu mazak kar rahi hai na. Mujhe chidhane ke liye.

Navya - Nai Nandini mai mazak nai kar rahi. It's the truth.

Nandini - But how is it possible? Manik ne to aisa kuch nahi bataya mujhe .

Vishnu - Beta Ab bhul ja use.

Nandini didn't say anything and walked out of the study and went straight to her room and closed the door.

Navya was about to follow her when Vishnu stopped her and said-

Jane de Navya usey. Ro lene de. Mann halka hojayega uska.

Navya- But Dadaji kya hum Kuch nai kar sakte.

Vishnu - Nahi Navya. Hum usey duniya ki har Khushi de sakte hai. But Manik uske kismat me hai hi nahi. Tum fikr mat karo. Wo samajh jayegi. Bas thoda time do usey.

Navya - Shayad aap sahi keh rahe ho.

In Nandini's room- Nandini fell on the bed and cried her heart out.

She looked at Manik's pic in her mobile and cried a lot.


Done with another update.

Hope You guys like it.

In the next update I am planning to bring a 3 month leap in the story.

After the leap there will be more and more of Manan.

So I would like to know how many of you want the leap.

Please give your comments.

The leap will take place only if atleast 15 readers agree to it by commenting their views.

Till then no update.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Ya go ahead with the leap.
Lived the update.
Worried about nandu how she is gonna take care of herself after knowing the truth.
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Nandu is heart but esme Manik ki bi koi galti nahi hai
I want leap and want manan
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update...
Feeling sad for nandu.
you go ahead with leap. waiting to see more manan scenes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb n wud love to see d leap
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Posted: 8 years ago
Desperatellyyy waiting for next part 3months leap n Manan
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Feeling sad for manan
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Posted: 8 years ago
interesting concept
nandini is cute and innocent
and princess of her grandpa
but her life is in danger😔
manik is her prince in shining armor...he always saved her
and she started liking him😊
but this prince is already married
though he and his wife never shared relation of husband and wife..but for world they are married
manik's wife is so cunning...she takes manik's kindness for granted
only 3 months and they will be divorced

waiting for the leap
continue soon



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