MANAN FF DESTINED LOVE STORY #2 last part pg 146 updated - Page 83

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Posted: 8 years ago


thanks for the pm...

opening of the update was cutest... chachi n manik in one team against nandu n teasing her...heheee


loved the way manik accepted the challenge though nandu didn't challenge him...hehee


he looked so cute holding her mangalsutra... n then their haldi applying romance in the bedroom was awesome..

abhi n mukti scene was exceptionally good...whether its abhiz stubbornness to apply haldi on her indirectly making her agreeing for wedding... n then suddenly his proposal...all this happened so quickly that she didn't get any time to realize it...

manik ab revenge lena mukti se...now its her punishment tym...

liked the way everyone made relation with manik n became his family...

omg harshad n nyeonika are laapta ...now what r they gonna do...???
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kehna bahut khuch chati hun update k baarein mein but next three months I hv very important competitive exams...that's why I couldn't comment in detail...
n that's why I took so much of time to complete reading it as I read in parts whenever n wherever i get time...

May be in upcoming months I won't be very regular online but yeah whenever I will get time I will read it if not then surely after exams but never think of it I left in between...!!

in this chapter also I wanted to say so many things n wants to comment on very dialogue but copying n pasting n then editing the fonts of dialogues takes more tym so that's why this comment is not in my typical style...

i hope u won't mind it...


n yeah u r most welcome...attires were pretty... but I don't know why I couldn't see any attire except nandini's... i think in my cell I can't see any pic from "blogspot" website... *sighs*
tk care
byee
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Posted: 8 years ago

Unress... on pg 127...
Do have a look... please...
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Take care...
I love you...
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Posted: 8 years ago
HEY CRYSTAL ...
THKS FOR THE PM DEAR ...

VERY SORRYYY ..
KAAN PAKAD KE DOING SIT UPS ...SORRY
I KNOW U WILL EXCUSE ME ...

THE UPDATE WAS EXCELLENT...

AWESOME ...

MARVELLOUS...

U R SO PERFECT IN GIVING US THE UPDATE IN SO MUCH DETAIL AND ALWAYS A VERY LAMBAAA WALA CHP.

ALLL THE PICS WERE AWESOME AND SUPERB ...


CHACHI IS ALWAYS IN FUN MOOD... LOVE HER
AND SHE IS ALWAYS READY TO TEASE MANAN GIVEN A CHANCE ...HEHEHEHHE

MANIK KE DIMAAG MAIN HUMESHA NAUGHTY IDEAS HI AATE HAI ... NANDU KO AUR SATANE MAIN ...

HALDI RASAM OF MANAN IN THEIR BEDROOM WAS SO SENSUAL AND HOT...
SIRF HALDI LAGANE MAIN BHI NANDU MANIK KE TOUCH MAIN KHO GAYE ...HAYE YEH DIL ...

HALDI FUNCTION WENT SO SMOOTHLY ...
EVERYONE ENJOYING THE MOMENT ...
LOVED ABHI'S MOVE TO APPLY HALDI ON MUKTI ...
FINALLY HE PROPOSED HER AND MUKTI ACCEPTED ...

MANIK KE SIDE KHADA HONE KELEYE SABH READY HOGAYE ...THAT PART WAS EMOTIONAL BUT SUPERB

BEST PART WAS SURPRISE GIVEN BY MR. MALHOTRA , MANIK WAS SO HAPPY TO SEE HIM ...

YAAR YEH MANIK KE DAD NE ITNI SHOCKING NEWS DEDI
ABH DAAR LAG RAHA HAI KI WOH DONO NEYONICA AUR HARSHAD KAHI MANAN KO HURT NA KARE
ALREADY MANAN WERE SEPARATED FRO EIGHT LONG YEARS AND NOW IF ANYTHING THESE TWO JERKS DO THEN HOW WILL THE OTHER SURVIVE ...

CRYSTAL MERI JAAAN MANAN PAR THODA REHAM KARNA


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hello

I'm so sorry for not commenting

I will not tell you the reason as it's going to be lame

But I will comment now

It's a very nice update as usual.

Chachi is so fun lovingly and understanding

She always favors manik

Manik finds his ways to go near Nandini

After all he can't live without her

Now what is harshad planning

I hope it's not to separate our MANAN

You never fail to give us such amazing and long updates

We should be thankful to you as your readers

Because even though you don't get the response you suppose to get still you give the amazing updates

Thank you very much for entertaining us with your stories

I thank you on behalf of all the readers

Thanks
Take care
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Posted: 7 years ago




Promo


Part 23



"Manik..." she rest her head on his shoulder.
"Hmm..."
"Meri Ek aur wish hai... Kya tum puri karoge..." she asked very innocently.
"Bolo... agar mere bas mein hoga tou zaroor puri karunga.." he said giving a kiss on her hair.

"I want to go to the famous church in Goa. I want to visit there before I take vows with you..." hearing her wish Manik stayed still in his place.

He didn't want Nandini to think that he can't fulfill any of her wishes. That too this small one. But how...
'How am I gonna fulfill your wish Nandini, dad has strictly ordered me not to go out of the house, that no one should leave the premises of the villa. How will I explain you...' Manik thought with so much of resentment.
"Manik Kya soch rahe ho..." she shook him by his shoulders.

"Hmm...Kuch nahi..." he answered thoughtfully.


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"Nandiniii" he screamed going in circles. But she was not there.
He was going berserk. He was running around inside the church searching for her like maniac.. Climbing the stairs skipping two steps at a time.
"Nandiniii" he yelled again.

"Maniiik.." he heard Cabir's voice echoing from the entrance of the church.
"Manik...what happened..." Cabir called him.
"Nandini..." ran down the stairs again skipping two steps at a time.
"Nandini ko dekha hai..." he asked him holding his shoulders.
"Woh Abhi Abhi mere saamne pray kar rahi thi..." he was at a verge of crying.
"But very next second he disappeared Cabir... she is gone... pata nahi kahan gaayab ho gayi..." he said pulling his hair back. His senses were almost giving up. He couldn't keep up his calm anymore. His face gone pale drained out of blood.

"Where can she be gone.. she was right here... oh God... oh God... no... nooo..." he screamed and sank on his knees with a thud covering his face with his palms.
"Don't do this to me... don't please... not now... we already have been through a lot... please..." he was feeling so helpless and also mad. He couldn't take enough care of her, he just wasn't careful enough to protect her.
Cabir grabbed him forcefully by his shoulder and hugged him.
"Manik... woh kahin nahi gayi hogi... yahin kahin hogi..." Cabir is making a very lame try to explain him when he too knows she couldn't be here because he was right outside and he didn't saw her come out or leave.
"Tu Pehle apne aap ko sambhal Manik... aise kaise kahin jaayegi woh... just relax ok... calm down..." Cabir is trying hard to make him stand.
"How can I calm down Cabir... how can I..." he yelled his lungs out.
"When I knew that something like this was bound to happen, I still took the biggest risk of bringing her here... how do you think I should calm myself... I'm responsible for this irresponsibility... this happens because of me..." he stared crying in Cabir's arm.

"Ok... this is not the time to break down... get up get up... we have to think where can she be..." Cabir patted his back.
"What do you mean... you still asking where she can be... when you know who is after this" Manik was exhausted by the disappearance of Nandini.

"Yes... I know..." it was Cabir's turn to yell now. " you want me to give up and accept the defeat... no Manik I will not... and I won't let you give up too... not now at least... we have to find Nandini...before he took her too far from us...let us inform uncle Malhotra and commissioner uncle... before it's too late..." but before Cabir makes a call, Manik's phone started ringing.



Hello people

Here's the new promo
Shocking right???

I know I felt shocked too
But this was how the story supposed to go

So how many of you will guess
Which church they would have been gone

Anyone who is from Goa here
Can you help me with the famous churches in that place

And I think all of you are well aware of
Who is after Nandini's disappearance

So the story is coming to its climax
This will be the last second chapter

Than I will give a long epilogue.
Till than stay tuned.

Thanks a lot for supporting me throughout
Without your support and encouragement
I wouldn't have come this far

THANK YOU ALL
AND
I LOVE YOU ALL

take care and stay blessed
And always keep smiling

Enjoy




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Posted: 7 years ago
WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE UPDATE!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
Shocking promo
Waiting eagerly for update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Eagerly waiting for update
Why r u stop this story so soon
Plzzz don't stop this story...
I really love ur ff

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Posted: 7 years ago
Heyyy very much exciteddd😛😛
Happy to see u back jlyyy jlyy😊
And abt the promooo
Omggg
Promo is so shockinggg
Waiting for the update
Plzz update soon ...

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Posted: 7 years ago

Shocking ... shocking promo...

OMG Nandini kidnapped ...

It's clear isme harshad and Nyonica hi hai...

Poor Manik... 😭
He can't afford to lose her at any cost...

Harshad and Nyonica ... you guyes are finish for sure... becoz this time Manik is not gonna spare you both...

Let see what will happen next...

About famous goa church tou... It's Church of our lady of Miracles...Bom jesus basilica...St.Alex church chapel of St.Francis Xavier... etc... etc...
Sorry My mind is on strike ... isse zyada kuch yaad nhi aa raha abhi...😆

Anyways...lots of dhamaka it's on the way...
I am quite excited for this track...

Continue soonish...
Take care ...
Be happy...
Love you...




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