#6 Devil's Bride Manan Ff epilogue on page 62 - Page 29

welcome bak dear
it's ok...i can understand your situation very well..as i have many cousins who keep visiting us on daily basis😉
life with them will be totally fun filled...so taking out time for our work is a difficult task

coming to the update
this was amazing..
and much needed convo between manan and her dad
never thought that manik will confess his sins so easily
confessing one's mistake is a hell task
nandini's father was shattered..he felt that he was unable to protect her daughter
somewhere he was right...but it was nandini who didn't wanted to see her appa in pain..
both were right at their places
but good thing is that he forgives nandini and aliya😃
parents can never remain angry with their children for long time
loved their bond


but i missed avni 😛
pls bring her in next update

Awesome

you wrote with so much maturity dude!!!!! u expressed the entire emotion like a pro!!! take a bow girl!!!! it was awesome!!! u always amaze me.. seriously... many writers at first say that it's going to be a dark story, but after a while they just deviate there way in order to make things look normal, like things r falling back to places... but here u r... it was, & it continued like what u said earlier... u never made things look white just for the sake of the audience... u have reasoned every thing, every damn thing that sometimes seemed odd... we always say that "taali kabhi bhi ek haat se nahi bajti"... & u showed that... even I was seeing nandini as the victim only, ofcourse manik has suffered equally.. the way u turned the card to show us the another side, it was awesome... & now this, nandini's father's situation!!!! damn, it was so apt!!! at this age, writing a situation like this with this much maturity!!!! I'm really out of words... I know I have already written many words, but still I think I couldn't expresse how I really felt... I can't find the proper words, that can make a sensible complement for your work!!! u r awesome!! the update was awesome!!! I don't know what to say more...

Awesome update amazing story can't believe this story going to end. I like manik confession emotional update love it thanks 👏

Yaar I just love him,
I mean accepting your each and every fault bigger or smaller needs guts and with which honesty he has done it has increased the love and respect I have for him,
awesome update dear,
Mindblowing.

Originally posted by: Raka_bd

you wrote with so much maturity dude!!!!! u expressed the entire emotion like a pro!!! take a bow girl!!!! it was awesome!!! u always amaze me.. seriously... many writers at first say that it's going to be a dark story, but after a while they just deviate there way in order to make things look normal, like things r falling back to places... but here u r... it was, & it continued like what u said earlier... u never made things look white just for the sake of the audience... u have reasoned every thing, every damn thing that sometimes seemed odd... we always say that "taali kabhi bhi ek haat se nahi bajti"... & u showed that... even I was seeing nandini as the victim only, ofcourse manik has suffered equally.. the way u turned the card to show us the another side, it was awesome... & now this, nandini's father's situation!!!! damn, it was so apt!!! at this age, writing a situation like this with this much maturity!!!! I'm really out of words... I know I have already written many words, but still I think I couldn't expresse how I really felt... I can't find the proper words, that can make a sensible complement for your work!!! u r awesome!! the update was awesome!!! I don't know what to say more...

Thank you so much feeling overwhelmed by your comment really meant a lot for me 😊

Oh god I don't know where to hide my tears 😭 😭 really parents are such a bless to have.. it's an inspiration for the readers yaar..
Even i hope not to hurt my parents in future..

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Oh god I don't know where to hide my tears 😭 😭 really parents are such a bless to have.. it's an inspiration for the readers yaar..
Even i hope not to hurt my parents in future..

Yeah true that they are and even i want the same never want to hurt my parents any ways thanks for the comment 😊

Originally posted by: Aashna_chawla

Yeah true that they are and even i want the same never want to hurt my parents any ways thanks for the comment 😊

Hehe exams khatam toh aagayi.. well comment k liye v thankyou? Anyways I'll read your other stories in wattpad from today onwards.. except this one..
Love you..