MaNan FF - Temptation to make you mine #Note on pg 29 - Page 6

Originally posted by: KYYian

hey I jst forget to say...

CONGRATULATIONS GIRLY FOR SUPER SUCCESS

pointer 8.2 is ssly awesome n managing this wid writing stories..hats off to u ssly

aur parents ko kaun samzaye? they b like..yeh dil manage more ...hahaha n its kahani ghar ghar ki..

but I wish next time u ll get pointer beyond 9...way to go girl..achieve d heights of success...

but but but jst keep ur mobile wallpaper away from u.. its serious kind of distraction ..hahaha

keep studying & keep updatin...

love ur stories...

Thanks Dear😊
You're right about Parents Unka dil hamesha more hi mangta hai😉
Ha Yaar I think I need to change my wallpaper ..It's serious type of distraction .and top of that his wink hayyy😳

Alya is nandini's roommate maybe

Loved the update dear...OMG...baby girl n her brown eye guy...i'm really enjoying it...seriously... Will be waiting fr next... Cont. Soon...

Awsmmm


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Awsmmm


Superr manan


Who was that girl


Is she mukti???


Manik is with her teddy


Mr. Jerk was gone


Interstinggg


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😃 😆...fantastic..fabulous...

that was awesome awesome awesome

update was hilariously hilarious... hahaha

more than manik nandini frst class part, i was ROFL while nandini n second class proff encounter..
ssly she has other work than disturbing class... other works like bumping n glaring mr brown eye..

but this day ended with bumping with a girl 😆

n manik is in her room? really? how come authority allowed boys in a grls room?

nandini is ssly trouble inviter girl..new trouble..her own roommate...

poor baby girl

wow this new name is too good... baby girl... i think manik is fighting with her to gain her attention n he is not realy angry on her...

he gave her a very cute name..baby girl..who does that if he is not interested in other person?

n thank u so much really really really longest update... dil khush kar diya...

thank u so much

Awesome update

Originally posted by: elsaanna

😃 😆...fantastic..fabulous...

hilarious..

sach mein nandu ko books seriously likhna chahiye..

ha ha ha..

aapni first day in college ko kitni worse kiya jaye..uske living prove hein nandu the baby girl..

i loved that name given by very own brown eyes..

introduction wali part was hilarious...

he was listening nandu's intro...phir bhi bhao khaya..

huh..

but i loved it when nandu do aur point add ki,off course aapni mind mein..

i just loved her self talk...

she literally bhigo dya usko...ha ha ha.

tht tashan wala part was way too cool..

late and scolding session..poor nandu..

finally jab room mein entry mari tab jhatka...big wali..

ha ha ha..

teddy pe tag lagana chahiye tha.."do not touch" wali..

just loved it..

egarly waiting for the next..coz teddy ko hat lagaya,uparse joke bhi ki..

oho...waiting for tht..

thanks for this superb update...

God bless you..

T y dear and glad that you enjoy the update😊😛
love reading your long reviews⭐️😊

Anna, tum story ko bhool gayi na...😭😭

Nice story...think multi aur May be alya...continue