#4 * IT'S COMPLICATED * MaNan ff (UPDATED PART 54)Pg54 16/6/17 CMPLTD - Page 34

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Posted: 7 years ago
hey where r u??
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Intaha ho gai, intazaar ki
Aai na kuchh khabar, AYESHA ki
Ye hamen hai yaqeen, bevafa vo nahin
Phir vajah kya hui, intazaar ki...???
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PART 54



Shutting the world behind, Manik carried his newly re-wedded wife to Their room. The desperation was visible on both of them.

The desperation of togetherness.

The desperation of putting an end to all separation.

They had their enough of complications. They had their enough of complicated relationship.

And now it was the time to welcome happiness.

Manik made her sit on the bed and closed the door of the room. While doing so he could hear the giggling behind of his family and friends. And it made him feel proud and satisfied and little shy too.. After all the hazards, finally his life is on plain track. Possibly !!!!!

Nandini just kept watching her re-wedded husband.

The husband she had once due to circumstances.

The husband she had neglected.

The husband she had disrespected.

And now the Husband she had fallen in love and immense respect.

Her own karma had made her so cheap that she couldn't able to look at his eyes. Her own vision was getting blurred with the forming tears she had suppressed for so long.

she wanted to say a lot.

she wanted to beg for a last chance .though she had asked for forgiveness but she knew he deserved more. more than just a

forgiveness. she had disrespected their relationship. their friendship. she had broken his heart.. his trust. and she wanted to beg for a chance of her lifetime to make their life blissful forever.

And it was not she wanted only to do that. But the fact was he Deserved to be happy and an explanation from her side.

After securing the room door , Manik slowly turned towards Nandini. He wasn't sure what would be his next step or what would be her reaction.

Already such dramatic chaos had happened and there was no energy left in him to tackle more . After all it was about his life for cry out loud.

Hesitating he walked towards her with baby unsure steps and before his mind could come with any suitable topic to start a talk he heard her... soft whisper.

" Maaanik!!! "

Hearing her angelic pleading prayer he stared at his wife...just to get welcomed with overwhelmed emotions.

" Manik I..." he heard her again but before she could dip herself into that guilt trip again he stopped her with uttermost care and love and settled himself beside her petite fragile frame.

But she was not stoppable that vulnerable moment. So she softly re-started sushing him caging his alluring hand.

" Please Manik don't stop me.. Bolne do mujhe.. Hear me out please. I know what I have done... have destroyed our lives. Our family. But believe me I was completely in spell of protecting you. But to Protect something very important, I actually have been supporting something unreal and drastic. I know I deserve punishment. Deserve your hatred. But please don't hate me but punish. It's true that you have no grudges on me but I know I deserve that. I deserve every bit of your hatered. "

She stopped for a fraction of second and then continued after kissing his palm with her few Perl drops.

"Manik I am begging for forgiveness and chance to rectify my mistakes. Please give me one last chance. "



With a pleading sob Nandini stopped and gazed at Manik with the uttermost hope. But what she found confused her. She blinked twice, thrice tried to retrieve the meaning of his blank yet strong gaze.

" Maaanik " her uncertain lips murmured then uttered with difficulty "say something.. Kuch bolo "


Manik sighed deeply then said " Are you done now? Ho gaya yah kuch aur bhi bolna baki hai? Have you completed or left with more? "

Nandini gaped at him with surprised heart. ' what does he meant? '

Manik gulped her confusions and uttered " If you are done with your pleading speech then now listen to me. And listen very carefully Mrs Malhotra "

He then caged her both arms between his strong grip and looked straight into her big teary full of guilt eyes.

" First of all.. Yes I was upset. I was f**king upset with you as you haven't thought of me for a mere second before taking such destructive decision. You haven't even consider my presence...my happiness... nothing before taking the stupid decision to walk out of my life... From our lives. What did you actually think Nandini? Kya socha tha tumne?? Tht it was a very kind of you to opt for such bullshit things over our happiness..!!! "

" Manik I..." she tried to make her point but Manik lovingly cut her off

" Nandini... I know. Janta hu main.. The reasons...those f**king majburi of yours.. Those conflicts.. But why the hell you couldn't understand that I am nothing without you.. I would have simply died if you left me. My existence is with you. It's as simple as this. I. LOVE. YOU. "

He halted, looked at his bewildered wife n continued


"When you have decided to leave me.. I have died billions of deaths and then thought to go with your foolishness in ego but then I thought I should fight for our love because I know you need me as much I need you. And I have promised you to never leave your side. So I had to do those dramas to put some brain into your pea size dimag Ms-i-am-so-smart. U r mine understand."

He teased n a chuckle left from her mouth with few happy amused tears.

" and I take care what's mine Mrs Malhotra "

They both looked at each other with love and then Manik whispered.
" I have forgiven you. Maaf kar dia main ne tumhe. And even I am sorry for not understanding your dilemmas. But it's enough. This is time for no more sorry secrets heartbreaks. "

He took her hands and kissing her knuckles said

" Promise me. Promise me you will always be with me. You will never ever leave me. And you will share every nook n corner of your heart with me. And obviously No more complications "

Nandini smiled adorably hearing him using that curse yet common catchphrase of their life complicated ' and replied

" I promise Manik. I love you and will always be with you. No matter what. I promise. I am sorry and thanks for granting me back. I love you Manik. I really do."

" I love you too Nandini. Very very much "

And then freed herself on his strong arms. Manik very lovingly hugged his wife and promised to himself to keep her there humesha.



After such heartily discussions forwarded with warmest hug they finally had found their heaven.


It's already half an hour past they were scooped into together. Manik started feeling his wife relaxed and whispered into her ears " Wase Nandini in an actual means and sense tonight is our wedding night"

Fetching his meaning she bathed the scarlet colour and sounding an awesome " hum " she kissed his side of neck.

And the heart got the response of another heart. And one leads to another happened with its own awesomest accord way.

Manik softly pushed Nandini to the bed with his own body hovering over her and then without warning kissed her hard. And she was more than ready to welcome that alluring assaults. She gave in just a fraction of second and kissed him back senseless.

It's their first official kiss after being
" Mr and Mrs complicated insane Malhotra... " again.


When their lips were massaging themselves and their DNA are passing to each other through salivas, their uncontrollable hands reached for other's and started doing their business of undressing eachother impatiently.

As a result Nandini's exquisite Red sharee was roughly pulled whereas her blouse was left for no reuse.. Completely torn.
On the other hand Manik's very much costly jacket was thrown unmercifully followed by his shirt whose buttons were scattered throughout the room like bubbles for the two impatient lover's own bubbles.

Soon he captured her neck for ravishing bite and she dug herself into his shoulder biting hard as a loud and passionate proof of her pleasure and pain.
Both then licked the places they had left their marks on.. smooth yet seductively.

Their touches were taking them to different level of passion that night as that special night was Their Night.. The night of their agony..love..confession...vow..togetherness..for ever.


That night they explored eachother like some hidden treasures mystery and ravished like there was only that thing left for them to do.

They completed each other with immense pleasure and possessiveness...for some uncountable rounds of love making to make their love relationship.


Soon the night of passion faded welcoming a new dawn and the dawn kissed the bright soft morning.. But their need for themselves didn't ceased a bit but grew with every passing moment. And they kept notifying their hearts that Finally they were together and forever.



It was late morning when after few very steamy make out sessions Manik finally entered into her and as a reward earned her loudest moan which he was pretty sure had woken his parents as well as heard by every damn person present at his mansion.
But who cares man!!!!

Manik chuckled at the thought of being teased by his equally naughty mother again and took his wife's lower lip to shh her frantic heartbeats.

" Relax baby hushhh " he whispered before tugging her lower lips with his teeth and then started moving inside her to give each other the most lovable and longing pleasure.

Nandini was feeling like floating in heaven with his every rock and unknowingly she had forwarded her hips towards him to tell her irrevocable need for her dazzling darling husband.

Manik groaned satisfactorily with her sudden movement which was trying to match his and increased his speed of rocking themselves.

They both were in heaven.
They both were in extreme pleasure.
They both were exhausted.

"I love you Manik.." her trembling tired swalon lips whispered cupping his sweaty glowing face.

An overwhelmed in happiness Manik promptly replied kissing her forehead " I love you too Nandini very very much ".

And finally with the confession they called their immense undescribable awesome amazing night slash early morning off by cuming together at the same time pleasuring themselves with uncountable satisfaction.


Manik loosed his exhausted body over an equally tired Nandini to calm his frantic tired abnormal heartbeat rate . And being a good wife Nandini kept softly rubbing his sex-sweaty back with her sweaty palm.

They layed like that for don't know how much time and then finally after getting his breath little composed Manik moved to the other side of the bed taking her sore in pleasure body over him.
Nandini was too tired to react anything. She just kept her head over his heart hugging him as tight as possible with her exhausted grip.


" Sleep love. " Manik murmured caressing her messy with sex hairs and whispered a loving
" I love you " kissing her temple.


Nandini smiled happily and as a reaction of his words kissed his heart snuggling more into him saying " I love you too my monster "

Manik chuckled at her reply and overwhelmingly hugged her with all love.


Finally they bid bye to their all complications welcoming a very lovely life with no complications.



The morning or more precisely the following evening was a real bliss to the newly re wedded couple as they descended down after such steamy tiring sessions just to be welcomed by their naughty parents as well as friends.

They were being teased to death when the ever devil cabir discovered Nandini's neck with few purple love marks and as the universal reason Manik was caught by his mother who shy yet smirkingly caressed his arms which were covered by sharp teeth marks most obviously gifted by his feisty- in-bed wife. Again.


That night the entire family had real fun after such dramatic fortnight. And the following next day as per the court orders the two went to court.



" so Mr and Mrs Manik Malhotra are you two are really ready for the divorce? Do you guys want to think about it again or it's your final decision? " The family judge asked them astounded as both of them were looking red in love but not red in anger to take divorce.

His old eyes were confused as most of the couple came for divorce with teary sad agony frustrated faces. But it was the first time of his 19 years career he was witnessing such couple to as per the record came for a divorce hearing but with entwined arms, happy lovable faces.

He again took a deep look to the two sitting in front of him to be most probably get separated with inseparable arms mingled.




" Yes... We want to"

The judge was brought back to reality when he heard Manik uttered those words in disbelief as he was still not sure of their intention who actually couldn't able to take their hands off eachother. And their family members were too relaxed too be digested in that situation.

" hhhuuuhh????? " he gave a questioning look to the couple for confirmation because he himself was not confirmed.

" yes sir we want divorce but for that you have to wait for another six months as we just got re married eachother the last day. So I guess as per the rules we have to wait for another half of the year. Isn't it? "

Manik smirked seeing the old poor man kept looking at him with sear disbelief written on hiss face in Bold letters.

Nandini on the other hand was feeling immense guilty for dragging them to that court for her impulsive take on but face palmed hearing her naughty childish husband.

" Manikkk !!!! " Maan Malhotra 's warning tone reached to them and all chuckled.

"Mr Malhotra.. Mrs Malhotra.. Divorce is gonna happen or not? Divorce chahiye ya nehi aap dono ko? " that poor confused like hell judge uttered.


" No. Not for now. But who knows the future.. So you better be ready. May be after 30 years.. There is no guarantee over fate.. What say Mrs Malhotra ??? "


Manik winked at Nandini and received a commotion of
" Maaanik" and all they started laughing seeing his scared face.


The judge too could not hold himself to laugh at the most lovable young happy in love couple and signed on " Divorce cancelled " document very much happily.


All of them returned to Malhotra Mansion and Niyonika suggested for a grand celebration for her kid's birthdays and the reunion. And they gifted to the couple a week of honeymoon package in none other than to MACAO.


Manik glowed in Happiness where Nandini was glaring at her husband.

" I don't want to go there " she announced out of Blue confusing the entire mansion.

"but why " Manik asked perplexed.

" bcz last time you have left me alone here and went. That could be our first honeymoon. " she snapped back crossing her arms.

The other witnesses were then grabbed virtual popcorns to witness another hot yet passionate entertaining argument.


" but you only denied our first night.. So what could I do? I was upset. " his reply was prompt yet composed.

" achchaa?? Toh you could have been manofying me. You should. Tume mujhe manana tha. But no.. you just fled away. Huh.. You monster " she argued back.

Manic understood his stubborn wife and her tantrums and thought to chill her mood.

" I am sorry baby. "

" don't baby me you Malhotra." she whined.

" areee then whom I will baby other than you??? " he sarcastically stated earning joyful hoots from others and a shyfull glare from his cute wife.

" Maaanik " she pounded over him embarrassed and he took her in his embrace.


"so it's time for honeymoon " all cheered while Manik and Nandini hugged with happiness forgoing all the irritating complications.

Our ever so cutie pie Almighty grabbed another tissue to wipe his happy tears and closed the book he was reading titled as " IT'S COMPLICATED " and waved a blissful blesses to the main impulsive-complicated-yet-inseparable characters whom he had started adoring the most...

Though the book is indicating the end of complications..but his ever so cute yet naughty heart knew

" it's not the end but start of something very interesting and more complicating-ly exciting. After all It's not the end till it's End.."



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ohhh freak... finally...like really wala finally ...I hv updated n completed the much awaited complications.. 😆😆

bear me mistakes.. and thanks a zillion for the support u lovelies have showered to this ffs n all my works..
THANKS N STAY BLESSED.😳😳

adios amigos...😊😊

Edited by musicialtie - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
I can't believe u actually updated
Finally a happy ending for our manan
Will miss ur story
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Posted: 7 years ago
Yepiee finally like finally u updated.. So no more complications as of now... poor Almighty he still not rest since the complications is going to not end..
What just happened with that court room it was very fun to read that... oh honeymoon .. just enjoying reading the full book... from 1 till this end everything was real fun to read...

Thanks for giving us one of our fav books on MaNan...


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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesomeee amazinggg prt
Happy endingg...lovd it...poor judge ko kch smj nhi aayea...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks dear for completing this story...loved this story...
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Posted: 7 years ago
Like really you updated!!
Thanks a lot dear,
Finally humare complicated babies can live happily ever after,
Hayee my babies,
Love them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
amazing part
amazing and beautiful story
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Posted: 7 years ago
a happy ending of complicated love
story of manan .l can't believe u
completed this story

thnx dear for giving us this
beautiful journey of manan

stay happy
keep smiling.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Thanks fr d update..
Super duper update.. a fully happy one without any complications.. thanks alot
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