#THREAD 3 Humsafar...CHECK PG 49 - Page 15

lovePANI

@lovePANI

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

It was beautifully written
How u wrote their feelings..
It was vulnerable state..

But happy they met each other

How cute she remember everthing n dress up herself in that way

Thank u
Keep smiling

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

Hi dear...

Awesum update n vry vry sry 4 nt able 2 commnt 4 last prt..

Update was really so emotional n fantastic yaar..

U perfectly penned down d feelings n emotions of manan..

Well done dear..👏👏👏 really luvd it 2 core..

N vry vry thnks dear 4 d pm...

Cumin 2 d update it was mindblowing..

Finally d most awaited manan meet...so emotional n dramatic.

Nandu s vry much nervous on meetin mr malhotra n manik .

Nandu's pov was so emotional... She reminiscing d momnts vid manik in london..flashbck scenes ws so fantastic ...

Naughty manik..hahaha...suprb..

Unintentionally itslf nandu got ready in all d accessories which manik likes..she wanna b presentable 4 manik...

Jaan bhujkr nahi shi..she madly wanna b vid him...

Lvd d way mr malhotra comforted nandu n make her confident.

4 him she s his daughtr..lvd their bonding so much...

Den d most awaited manan meet..nandu knws she will meet him.. Bt 4 manik it s surprising...omg!! Dat ws so dramatic..

Both r seein each othr aftr mnths...both r subsudin their pain if separation in demselves..nandu crying in washroom n manik hearing it was so emotional.

Manik s feelin guilty on makin cry n pale..

Manik's pov on meetin nandu was mindblowin..

U penned well his mental state n emotional state damn perfectly

Manan in conference room..manik admirin nandu...

Nandu tryin 2 b strng infrnt of everyone ..fabulous...

Lvd d reactn of manik wen he cme 2 knw abt nandu's fathers decision..omg!!! Suprb..he bcme out of d wrld .

Manik tryin 2 talk vid nandu...bt kya kre..??

Voh bhi teek he apni jaga...she need sum tym 2 adjust all dis...

Waiting 4 manan milan. Lvd d last prt..nandu in manik's arms..

Fantastic eagerly waiting 4 nxt prt..do continue dear...

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: etuu
Res !!! :D

Unres bhi kar do Etuu... eagerly waiting...😃...

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

Rocker

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Tbh I m quite disappointed with manik's decision.no not the one where he decided that he would wait till nandini's parents agrees for their relationship.in fact that made me like him more.

But the decision of cutting all connections with her.that was not right in any way imo.

I m still very much pissed with Manik.so I really don't know what to say.

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rimi

@elsaanna

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

hey,ankita...thanks for this beautiful update..

nandu's anger is justified..

she suffered a lot..

it's emotional but nicely done by you..

waiting for the next...

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yashikalily

@yashikalily

Explorer

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

WOW
WHAT A BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER...
TOO EMOTIONAL...
NANDANI N MANIK'S CONDITION...
MAN...I WAS CRYING...SEEING MY MANAN
IN SO MUCH PAIN...
DAM EMOTIONAL...
YET BEAUTIFUL...
FINALLY THEY MEET ...
AFTER SO LONG...
WELL LETS HOPE EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE N
WILL B SAME..AS BEFORE...
FINGERS CROSSED...

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yashikalily

@yashikalily

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Posted: 8 years ago

#147

N YA PLZ CONTINUE...D STORY...
IT IS REALLY AMAZING...

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Awesome update.malhotra and nandini's convo was amazing. Manan's meet was mindblowing.manan's pov was fabulous. Both were badly hurt especially nandini. Nandini's painful moments were well penned. Nandini didn't saw Manik.eagerly waiting for manik's manofy session for nandini because she got badly hurt.manik and his parents convo was blissful. super excited to read further. Continue soon.

Don't end this ff.it's amazing

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Hi,

I know many of you want both Manik and Nandini to be together soon, yet it made me feel glad that you understood the character of Manik and Nandini well and their emotional turmoil. So, i wanted to tell everyone that the next chapter will be the closure of the current track.

I hope you all would be able relate and understand the emotions of characters coming up in next chapter and the closure that i have planned. After, this chapter we'll have a new track coming up which would be short.

I decided for the short track only for the readers of this story who have supported me and this new track would be my way of saying you all THANKS from my side. So, keep tuned for the next chapter and the track after that.

Please, do leave your precious comments.

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#150

Waiting waiting waiting di...

Update soon...

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