Originally posted by: ky2manan
Beautiful update
The way you describe the scenes is something else
Manik is falling more and more for Nandini
He thinks she's perfect and only a fool can leave her ...aww
The jealousy he felt after he came to know the she loves someone
So cute
Manju Manik is returning π π³
Aryaman and mukti scene was so poignant
No one can replace abhi in her life
The bond you potrayed between aryaman and mukti was so good
Manik's dos and don'ts lecture ...haha
Everyone was just nodding
Manik's care for nNandini β€οΈ
Cabir's plan to push Manik towards Nandini ... awesome
If Nandini will not take a step ahead then let Manik do this
Our cupid Cabir
Manik started teasing her about 'last night'
Nandini remembered everything she said and was apologetic
Manik's teasing was failed
Because she trusts him ...
That trust talk on the staircase
One of my favourite scenes from the show
I am really glad that you used that scene in your story
Trust was the building block of their relationship
As for them love meant trust
Manik had a flashback
He is so confused that why he is getting flashbacks of him and her
Nandini was so worried when Manik was in pain
And then aryaman came
Poor guy didn't know that is impossible for him to meet Nandini when Manik is around
And hug is ais far fetched dream for him
Manik came in between the hug
Super possessive Manik
His drama .uff'f
'Dost', 'friend' and with that some punches π€£
Aryaman's dialogue after that was too funny
Others came and started teasing Nandini
Manik throwing angry glares at them
His lecture and all the instructions went into dustbin π
Nandini was guilt sticken
And started her apology mode and crying
She calmed down when everyone said that they were joking
Aryaman's second attempt to hug her
Now Manik started his nautanki
Sir dard
Nandini was hell worried
Cabir also but he understood his drama
Nandini's care for Manik π³
Stars and them βοΈ
She is still not clear but knows that they are for ever
The weather was so romantic β€οΈ
Rain and so many beautiful memories which she remembers and he doesn't
Manik was just star in her when she was making coffee
He can't get her out of his head
The thunder and they were so close
At such crucial situation and romantic weather you ended the chapter
Very bad
But chalo it's fine
Let's see what this night has in store for them
I want mainly manan
You can focus on others also but not too much
And about aryaman and mukti it's upto you
Update soon
Your comments always make me smile :')
So grateful for readers like you, sooo glad hou like it! Sorry for ending it on such a note but promise to make up for it in the next update :D
I will definitely focus on more characters too, but like you said mainly Manan ;)
Thank you sooo much for the support <3 xx
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