Originally posted by: jamunamanik
Awsmmm
Superrr
Awsmmm manan moment
Nandu will regret for her behaviour
Thanks for the pm
Coun sooon
Thanks J! I'm free now so will definitely read your story too :)
Thank you so much for the constant supper :') xx
Originally posted by: jamunamanik
Awsmmm
Superrr
Awsmmm manan moment
Nandu will regret for her behaviour
Thanks for the pm
Coun sooon
Originally posted by: ky2manan
I am spellbound
This chapter was so beautiful
So heart touching
Your story always sends me in mananland
And I feel all this is actually happening
Nandini is so cute
I just love drunk nandu
Though she hurt them by her words
But the way she said sorry was so sweet
Loved how you mend her mistake
She was being so stubborn
Loved cabir part so much
He was so sure that she can never hurt him
Manik was having a tough time handling her
She wanted to gaze the stars ❤️ ⭐️
The star and fireflies talk is one of my favourite scene
And the way you portrayed it was beyond beautiful
The situation was reversed
Nandini was talking about her love for stars and he was talking about his love for fireflies
They are always about each other
Her fireflies became his and his stars hers 😳 ❤️
Hats off to you for this scene
This has become my favourite chapter till now
She was going to tell her mom's theory but she stopped
I feel so bad for her
She's hurt beyond repair
'Tareef karo meri' aww
That was so adorable
The way Manik praised her ...aww
The last part was a bit emotional
She thinks she is a loser that's why he left her
She spoke her heart out about Manik and Manik didn't even know that she's talking about him 🥺
Manik was hurt by the fact that she loves someone
She said he is in her heart 😭
I thing i love of most about Manik is that he never takes advantage of her
This update was too special
Please don't end it soon
Just go with the flow
I don't want this story to end abruptly
It has so potential and want things to unfold step by step
Moreover I want him to confess his love for her not because he remembered everything
But because he fell for her genuinely
Update soon
Originally posted by: rockstarlover
<font size="2">awesome update
drunk nandu was adorable
how cutely she apologised 2 everyone
navya is a sweetheart
she was saying sorry 4 her best friend
she was only worried about her friend😃
loved how she was forcing manik 2 praise her
and loved how he praised her from his heart
he was heart broken hearing she had a bf
cont soon
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Awesome update
Nandu is soo sweet usne sorry bolaVo kesi ko heart nahi kar saktiManik ko jaldi se sab yaad aa jaye
Originally posted by: shalini16gupta
Awesome update.
Loved drunk nandu.
I thought by mistake nandu will everything to manik but Bach gaye
Continue soon
awww...
super duper awesome gallove it to core!!!!!!!its was the sweetest of allmix emotions were therein one side was happy coz they living the same phase of pastandone side bengto close alsoone is bound to keep her self quitewer as othr cant remb the thingaww...he dont want to take advantage of hertats y i like this guy awwshe is really strong to let him goand to stand infront of himthoughshe hv to pretend to be stranger n alldont end it😭but u can if story demandsbut stillhehetqq so mch for pmand lovely fftcxoxo
Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92
Awww such a adorable nd cute update...
I so wanted manan to gt back together...
Manan heart to heart tok dats was so beautiful...
Plzzz update new part soon
Originally posted by: shaan...
Excellent update...
Drunk nandini is better...At least she xprsses her feelings...Manan's moments were cute...Luved it...Plz continue soon...Waiting eagerly...Take care...Stay blessed...
that was amazing update
drunk nandu was bliss
she was abt to spill the bean but at the end time she came back to her all time protectiveness for the manik
loved d update
tmrw morning must be hell shocking for her
update soon.
Originally posted by: gtilwani45
m shoo happiee.Update is quite fast ha Thankss for this. Update was so so amazing. Itss actually made me Feel sho happy.Wow..Vaise its emotional too.But I just love ur This story..It always gives me Happiness...Vaisee Nandu is so sweet Na.Even in drunk state She knows ahe hurt themBy her words.Ohh how cutely she said Sorry to them..Cabir ka part was awesome. I really love it.I reall liked the factKi You gave importanceTo all characters...Ohhh hahaha.Manik ko kitnaTough time de rahi h naNandu..Hehe..Drunk nandu is dammCutee n Sweet...Aww uski harkteShos ho nice.Wow.Ye to exchange ho gya.Now she wants ki vo baitthkeStars dekhe..Their talk is seriouslyBeautifully penned.He wanna talk aboutHis love for fireflies& She wanna talk aboutHer love for stars.This scene is amazing. Ohh..Nandu is sho sad na..Bss vo bs bol hi deti .But phir ruk gyi..Ohhh she is so innocent. She miss his love..She thinks ki because voEk looser h that's why vo Aaj akeli h..Or idhar Manik k dil Me pain hua.He thinks she love someoneElse..Ohh but he feels some pain.Use kya pata..Ki nandini kiske bare meBat kr rahi h..Aww.BUT amazing update. I just love whole update. ** Aree don't think aboutEnd this story. I'm happie the way story is Proceeding. Plsss me nhi chahti itniJaldi itni beautiful story endHo.Take ur time.N aaram se likhna.But no end !!!!! Stay blessed !!!! KEEP SMILING !!
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