MaNan FF: Falling For My Soulmate // Imp NOTE pg 121, please read! - Page 23

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Posted: 8 years ago
hello again..
so i quickly checked few songs and i m here with few suggestions..;!!
a) Manchala..its from hasi toh fasi...
this song is all about how one falls in love even if he runs from it but he cant control his heart and eventually fall in love..

b) hasi bangaye...
(i just love this song..)

c) MAR JAYIYAN...from vicky donor
(i dont know if u can include it or not cause MANAN have already sang in the show..but u can use it if u wanna trigger his memory..)

d) AGAR TUM SATH HO...TAMASHA..!!

e) SAIYAARA...FROM EK THA TIGER..

f) BOLNA..from kapoor &sons.
my personal fav but i dont think it suits their situation..

sorry for so many suggestions and confusing u more..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
my ans are...
1) take little more time for manik's memory,,tabi to interest aayega,itni jaldi manik ki memory wapas nai aani chahiye...

2)want manan moment but friendship is also important,,,so i suggest ki manik ki memory wapas lane me nandu k sath feb4 ko b involve hona chahiye...bcoz of that we will get manan scene n also feb4 scene...

3)take ur time but holi seq. is must for me...bcoz holi is always sepesial for manan as well as for manan fans...

4)yar songs k mamle me to thodi kamjor hu...but i will suggest "SANAM RE " song...i know ki female wordings nai hai but ...😕


i hope u like my suggestion...reply me
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Posted: 8 years ago
the last chapter was so good...the mud fight was similar to the original..i wonder why nandu doesn;t remember that they had done that before:)...manik seems to be falling more and more for nandu and not liking the fact either:)
nandini's reason for not accepting manik is something i really want to know...like cabit said its not right that she doesn't accept him nor let him go...

the last shower scene was really good..i don;t blame manik for being angry at nandu..and its nothing to do with the punch!

in answer to you questions..i really liked your idea of making manik fall for nandini all over again even without the memory of them together...also i want nandu to accept the fact that she too can't live without him whatever the problems and not just cos manik is pursuing her..so i would rather both of them accept each other all over again before maniks' memory returns:)

fab update!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Plz bring manik's memory soon...
Focus on manan but write about others as well...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 8 years ago
I want manik to remember a few things
But he should regain his memory after falling for her

I want you to focus on manan only

You can't write holi sequence later. I have no issue

I want soch na sake from airlift or bolna
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Poushi

aap jasa chahiya ussae kijiya...manik ki memory bapas jaldi aye ya bade mae it depends on u...
mujhe all couples chahiya manan ka saath...but cavya kasa hogi???navya toe ranbir ki saath ha...right???
hoil sequence jab chahiya aap dijiya...
Mr.kapoor & sons movie ki "bolna" song ki mae manan performance acha hoga...



CavYa won't be a couple.. I meant as in do you want me to focus on their friendship as well or just only focus on Manan :) thank you!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: FateBeChanged

the last chapter was so good...the mud fight was similar to the original..i wonder why nandu doesn;t remember that they had done that before:)...manik seems to be falling more and more for nandu and not liking the fact either:)

nandini's reason for not accepting manik is something i really want to know...like cabit said its not right that she doesn't accept him nor let him go...

the last shower scene was really good..i don;t blame manik for being angry at nandu..and its nothing to do with the punch!

in answer to you questions..i really liked your idea of making manik fall for nandini all over again even without the memory of them together...also i want nandu to accept the fact that she too can't live without him whatever the problems and not just cos manik is pursuing her..so i would rather both of them accept each other all over again before maniks' memory returns:)

fab update!!



Thank you!!! Nandini's reasons will be revealed very soon :)
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: divtan



Ans1) let the whole memory returning process be gradual in flashes

Ans2) focus primarily on manan...other r settled relatively..use them nly if its reqd in the story...cz ur story is falling for my soulmate...

Ans3) I dnt mind...Holi sequence may or may not be there...I this Manik's memory would completely return once he sees nandu in life danger similar to the soha incident and then gud bad both and all memories eventually return...so Holi scene isn't that compulsory...

Ans4) they could perform on hasi ban gaye?



Thank you for always supporting me so much and liking this story!!! :) I will try to update twice a week like you said :D
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello Guys!! Back with another promo! And I know I said I will only update once a week but you guys are so sweet and cute and it really motivates me to write more.. It doesn't take me long to write chapters so I will definitely try to update on Tuesday's and Fridays. Also thank you so much for helping me out with the suggestions, I asked because I want to write things that will make you guys happy, and I want you all to be involved in the story and give your inputs too. Very happy with the suggestions so thank youuu. Also I couldn't reply to all the comments since I'm a 'newbie' and I'm not allowed to post more than 10 posts in 24 hours :( but just know I'm so grateful for you all and very excited for this story.

Promo:

Taking this opportunity FAB 4 left the room to give Manik and Nandini some time alone. 'Manik, still gussa?' Nandini said making a puppy face. Manik ignored her and continued playing his guitar. 'Manik!! Angry?' she asked again, Manik closed his eyes to control his anger and just said 'no' very coldly. 'Then why are you being so rude?' 'Ache se baat karu to problem, rudely baat karu to bhi problem. I don't understand what your God damn problem is' Manik again yelled at her.

Nandini knew she was at fault because she started the fight, but she wanted to end it now so to change the topic she offered a peace offering, 'acha baba I'm sorry.. Look I made a Greek salad for you, I know it's your favourite, take it as a sorry gift' Manik ignored her and continued with his guitar.. 'Manik please na' Nandini continued with her pacifying session.

Even after a lot of pleading Manik didn't pay any attention to her and didn't talk to her or even look at her. Nandini got a bit annoyed and snatched the guitar from Manik, just like Manik snatched her laptop from her. This pushed Manik to his limits, he was already pissed off with everything happening, and now Nandini being stubborn was the last thing he needed. In his anger he snatched the salad from her hand, threw it in the floor and stepped on it. Nandini was shocked at his act, 'what the hell Manik? I made that especially for you, kab se I'm saying sorry.. Why aren't you listening to me. Problem kya ha...' Her sentence was left incomplete when Manik brutally grabbed her arm and pinned her to a wall and yelled 'SHUT UP OR ELSE I WILL...' and with this he bought his lips extremely close to hers. Nandini's eyes widened in shock and for a minute she almost forgot to breathe, they were once again very close to each other.


Also I'm thinking of writing another FF MaNan in Romeo and Juliet style so if you like the idea let me know :D and hope you're having a great day so far <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hii
Read it all in one fo its awesome nd the way u r recreating manan moments its beautiful
With each nw chappy i liked ur ff its really going vry nice like monster manik nd stubborn nandu r back
Vry nice
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