Hi congratulations dear for ur new threadπππ
Coming to d story well now ur story has really taken a new turn n iam totally loving it n eagerly waiting to know how nandini is going to get maniks parents back ...
N one request dear I really wanna see cabini so if u could involve cabir in nandini's mission if possible so I know u may ur story ready in ur mind but I just thought if cabir is involved it will more fun n interesting ... Just a thought that's it ...
N ha story ke bare me bolna her bloogayi,OK let me start last 3/4 chapter was really amazing been his friends coming to his place n spoiling his dinner u have penned it really very good like it was hilarious of manik acting all weird ,I was laughing like anything.
N next d late night date n place u described it was so beautiful n abt not crossing his limits talk was nice I really liked it..
N then nyonika n nandini talk was penned really very well n trust me it was much needed closure has to y nyonika was being good with nandini n we got it d closure b/w maniks parents was much needed n d way u penning it is really worth reading n u have nailed it expressing each n Every emotion brilliantly be it nyonika's talk or nandini's confusion or mani dad truth n his talk with nandini really I was really amazed after reading u have not let anything get apart l mean each n every side of individual person's pov of described perfectly dearππ
N how can I forget manan maniks restlessness n nandini dilemma was very good n love d fact u give our manan der time n like der romance ( though I need more manan romance) ππ but OK ...
N proposing part was very very very good n liked everything abt it nandini's possiveness n her bold step n maniks teasing π³π³ n vedio on and,his friends calling u have not anything like anything n last my favorite chachi was so much fun to seeπππ
Overall I love ur ffπππ thank u for giving our manan back in form of ur ff'sβοΈβοΈ thank u for all d writer for so much of effort n love towards our fav couple MANAN...love u all...
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