Originally posted by: miss_writer
AWESOME... FANTABULOUS UPDATEThough a newbie but I have read ur ff ... ur awesome dear... keep writing..MADDY's tricks were hilarious and our cabira he is the best
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Manan was the 1st one to reach there but on enterence... Manik stopped for a moment ... All the bad time... nyonika's behavior and his suffering ... all came infront of his eyes only 1 mint...
He closed his eyes tightly to get his focus back...
Nandini 1st didn't notice this change in him but when his hold on her hand tightened then Nandini looked at him...
She in worry cupped his face with her 1 hand and asked in concern: Manik tum thek ho...
And her worry filled voice,her magical soft touch and her concern for him brought him back to present...
He without looking at her replied in broken words : ya... I am ... fine...you don't worry...
Nandini looked at his face and then bring his face down on her level and gave an assuring kiss on his forehead and then on his eyes one by one...
Manik after receiving this love looked in her eyes and said: I am fine ...wo bus Nyonika...
Nandini placed her plam on his lips and then said: Shhh Manik... Don't remember her... I know yahan ki har aik cheez tumhe os time ko yaad dile gi... but Manik tum os k bare mein nahi socho...(to change his mood and to divert his attention she said) remember yahan hamari bhi to kuch beautiful memories haan... and her statement did that work...
Manik when heard what she said his mind travelled to the time of their jamming session and a very cute smirk came on his face...
He looked at Nandini's face,lowered his head and then while staring in her eyes said:I think you are right... in that case I only prefer to think about our best memory here...
Nandini when heard this a smile came on her lips as she thought that sha was successful in diverting his mind but on next moment Manik pulled her by her waist near him and while removing hair strands from her face asked very lovingly...
Manik: U know what is our best memory in this mansion ?
Nandini with confused face: Manik merey liye to tumhare sath bitaya hoa har pal best hai...
Manik: Hmmm but for me the best moment... our best memory is...
Nandini in curiousity looked in his eyes:...is?
Manik:Actually I think I have a better idea... (he whisper in her ear) as u can see abhi tak yahan koi aya nahi so ... I think main tumhe wo place dikha deta hoon... Then I am sure u will understand ... what I am talking about?
Nandini with her cute pouty face said: Ok
Manik hold her hand and moved inside...he drag her towards his bedroom and after opening the door , he bring her in...
Nandini when saw his room a lot of happy and sad incidents came in her mind...and she like a innocent soul looked at Manik and asked: but Manik yahan to hamri bht sari memories haan na so... tum... Kis ki...
Manik closed the distance between them , he tilted his head and then whisper in her ear: Remember our jamming session...( a lopsided smile was there on his face when he told her his best memory)
Nandini s eyes became wide when she heard this is the best memory for Manik in this Mansion.
And on next Moment a deep blush creeps on her face and with lowered eyes she started looking here and there.
Now Manik forget all other things and started enjoying Nandini's condidtion...
He pulled her near by her waist with a jerk and encircled his arms around her waist...
He said huskily to tease her further: I really want to relive that memory...
Nandini eyes popped out...she at once looked in his eyes to see if he is serious about it but noticed a naughty glint on his face...
Manik lowered his head while looking in her eyes... and he noticed that she was also not pushing him...instead the red color on her face became deeper and deeper with every inch he covered between them...
And there sweet time got disturbed again with Cabir and Navya's entry...
Cabir was shouting their names from sitting hall...
Cabir: Manikkk ...Manikkk kahan hai yaar tu...
They came towards his room and after opening the door when he saw Manan there he said
Cabir: Aye lo yeh to yahan ate hi shuru ho gaye...
Navya smiles on watching pink face of Nandini while Manik placed his hand on his face like an irritated kid...
Cabir: Kyo beta Majnu Malhotra irade kya haan... party cancel kar di kya...
Manik in whisper tuanted: Cabir teri timing kab sedhi ho gi... jab dekho ghalat time pe entry mar leta hai...
Cabir jokingly asked: Ghalt time... means kuch hot karne wala tha tu ?
Nandini and Navya looked at each other and then at cabir...
Manik now in anger looked at Cabir and said: 1 more word from u and u r gone...
Cabir put his finger on his lips and said: Arey yaar Navya ka kuch to khyal kar ... kyo osey shadi se pahle hi widow banana chahta hai...
Navya with austonished look gazed at cabirs face and then her expression changed to angry one... and at last she threatened him: Cabir Manik ka to pata nahi but agar ab koi bakwas ki na tum ne to main tumhe nahi choro gi... and with this she held Nandini's hand and said: Chalo Nandini chal k dekhte haan baqi sub aye k nahi...
After they left Cabir looked at Manik's face and found him smiling...
Manik tauntingly said: U deserve this type of treatment...saale kameene apni ko to ghusa dila k bhej diya aur wo jate jate meri wali ko bhi sath le geyi...
Cabir: tu tension na le... Main hoon na tere liye and with this cabir started moving towards Manik ...(acting like a pure gay)
Manik pushed him with one hand and said: pagal ho gya hai kya... don't tell me... tu ne apni category phir se change kar li... Bechari navya os ka kya ho ga... Mujhe osey batana pare ga... k apney liye kisi aur ko dhond le... And Manik started shouting Navya's name
Cabir came out of his acting mood and placed his hand on Manik's mouth and said: Pagal hai... marwae ga kya... Navya to mera qatal kar de gi...
Manik removed his hand and then gave a fake punch on his stomach and said: To sale kameene yeh apna bromance start karne se pahle sochna tha na...
Cabir: Sorry but u know na main mazak kar raha tha so tu itna serious kyo le raha hai...
Manik while acting: Serious ... Sale heart attack de k kahta hai serious kyo ho raha hai...
Navya came at this moment and said after knocking the door: Cabir, Manik baqi sub bhi a hi gaye haan so ab agar tum log free ho chuke ho to neechey a jao...
Manik nodded with his and head and then they both also followed Navya ...
Other couples reached there before some time... Mukti on enterence meet Nandini who observed her anger so in concern she asked: Mukti... kahan rah gayi thi tum... itna late kyo hoa? Sub thek hai na.
Mukti who was about to say something quits in anger when she heard Maddy's voice from behind: wo Nandini u wouldn't belive it... Ajj Mukti ne kya kiya...
Nandini in surprise looked at him and asked: What?
Mukti immediately said: Kuch nahi Nandini ajj is ko na verbal motion lage hoe haan so don't listen his bakwas...
A smirk appear on Maddy's face on her attempt to hide herself and Nandini with surprise looked at both.
She hold Mukti's hand in concern and asked: Mukti tum thek ho na?
Mukti: Ya I am fine ... aur kahan hai baqi sub...
Nandini replied: Pool side pe.
Mukti: Ok to chalo .
Nandini :tum chalo main ati hoon.
With this Mukti left from there.Then Nandini gaze shifted towards Maddy.
She gave a questioning look to him.
Maddy on receving this look said: Now what u want miss veena vadini.
Nandini: I want an answer... what was all this Mr Madhayam ?
Maddy with a smile looked at that way from where Mukti left.
Nandini observed this and said in concern: Maddy u know na what r u doing?U know her exact situation and condition... right?
Maddy: O Madam I know all things so abhi chal k party enjoy Karen.
Nandini like complaining face: Maddyyy.
Maddy who knew her very well said: Don't worry ... mujhe pata hai main kya kar raha hoon... and plzzz apney is chote se mind ko sirf Manik bro pe hi concentrate karne do(wink)...And now Lets go.
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