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He he he...nice one...update soon...
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Great update
But what bad news?
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SHOCKING TWIST...
WHAT OMG!!!! NANDINI TO DIE IN THE UPCOMING CHAPTERS...KYA YAHI HOGA MANAN KE CUTE SI LOVE STORY KA THE END...BE READY FOR THE NEW SPOILER...
JUST WAIT AND DEKHTE HAIN KYA HOTA HAI...
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Awesome story..
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Will be waiting for the update...
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CHAPTER -30
After the sangeet its time for mehendi function...
We open up with the decorated hall of the haveli where the ceremony is going to take place...so now we see dadi busy in giving guidelines to the decorated...
Dadi: yeh jo laal phul hai usse upar laga do...samaya ho raha hai...jab guests bhi aa gaye hai ap ceremony suru karne ka time ho gaya hai...aeee...nandini ko bulao re...
After five minutes...
Nandini comes down with her friends...

NANDINI'S MEHENDI ATTIRE




Nandini: dadi mein kaisi lag rahi huin...
Dadi: ek dum pari...kisiki nazar na lage...
See took a little bit of kajal and put in on nandini's neck...
Cholo cholo mehendi lagana suru karo...
Nandini: dadi yeh manik , cabir air dhruv kahi dikhayi nahi de rahe...
Dadi: beti yeh auraton ki rasam hai issme maard nahi hote...
Nandini: woh sab tog thik hai dadi par woh sablog hai kaha par...
Dadi: wahan gaha unka nikal pana muskil hi nahi namumkin hai...
Manik screams...nahi...
Manik: yeh kaha phasa diya dadi ne...
At what we see manik is sitting between a circle made by nandini's sisters and cousions...
Sister no 1: han tog jiju mein pucch rahi thi ki didi ko apne pehele kab dekha...
Sister no 2: jiju ap isse chodiye...pehele mre sawal ka jabab do...apne didi ko kitni bar kiss ki hai...
Sister no 3: jiju ap in dono ko chodo...meri suno...kya ap ke doston ke bicche koi hai gisse mera kuch setting ho sakta hai...
Sister no1 : jiju pehele mera sawal ka jabab denge...
Sister no 2: nahi mera...
Sister no 3: tum dono ko na...woh mujhe denge ans...
And then there we see a cat fight between the ladies...
And manik is pulling his hair out if frustration...
Manik: bhagwan mujhe baccho...kaha aja ka mehendi mein gussne ka plan...aur kaha inn logo ke bicche pakne ka plan...
Scene changes...
We see nandini is already sitted and the designer is ready to start...
Designer: mam koun sa design banaun...
Dadi: kuch aisa bana jisse iska pati iske mehendi se apna naam kabhi na dhundh paye...
Iss rasam mein toh meri nandu ko hi jitna hai...akhir jo jitega ghar mein usiki chalegi...
With a small laughter the designer starts...
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali(nandini saw mehendi on her hand)
Kahe sakhiyaan, ab kaliyaan(she took the mehendi towards her face and had a smell of mehendi)
Haathon mein khilnewaali hain(then she looked at everyone)
Tere mann ko, jeevan ko(someone starts joking and nandu laughs)
Nayi khushiyaan milnewaali hai
Mehndi hai rachnewaali, haathon mein gehri laali

After a couple of time...mehendi is finally over...hmmm. ...
Dadi: ab tera woh hone wale oatimaharaj ko bulati huin woh apna naam ka letter dhundhega...
Nandini looks at her mehendi and got happy...
Dadi walks out...
Here manik hand is on his forhead and he is sitting in his knees...all his hairs r shattered...
Dadi: hey..ladka...kya hua...chi chi...kaisi hai meri nandu ki oasand...ek dum kamjor...
Manik: dadi plz mujhe yaha se lee jayiye...
Dadi: tujhe lene hi toh ayi huin chal...
Manik jumps out from there and goes inside with dadi...
He was just amazed to see nandu and a eyelock...
After some seconds...
Dadi: yeh tukur tukur dekhna band karo dono...
And ofcourse...the eyelock broke...
Nandini: manik tumhe mere mehendi se apna naam dhundhna hoga...
Dadi: han issse pata chalega ki tum nandu se kitna pyaar karte hoi...
Manik: mein toh isske dil mein mera naam dhundh liya hai...ab hatth mein dhundhna koun si badi batt hai...
Manik holds nandini hand and searches for his name...
Manik: kaha gaya...isse wale haath pe toh nahi hai...nandini dusra hatth dikhwo...
Nandini raises her right hand...she looks like tensed...
Manik: isse haath mein bhi nahi hai...
Nandini: kya manik ek letter nahi dhund sakte...mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karni...jao...
Nandini started moving...
Manik: ek minute...maine kaha dono hatthon mein nahi hai ...lekin...
Manik brings nandini's both the hand closer to him and joined them...
And we got the letter M...

Manik: yeh raha M...


A big smile spread on nandini's face...she started blushing...
Dadi ji beacmes happy and clap for them...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Seriously...itna bura response...mujhe laga ki ap sab ko yeh story bahut pasand hai...agar iss baar mujhe accha response nahi mila toh mein next jo dhamakedar chapter hei kabhi update nahi karungi...if u all wanna read do vote and comment...
I m waiting...
Continued...
CHAPTER 32
Cabir: bhai bura phase...ab kya kare...
Manik: cabir tera toh pata nahi par mera toh pura halwa banane wala hai...
Dadi: aree...ho... nalayakoin... gumo...idhar idar...
Manik cabir and dhruv slowly turned to dadi with a face filled with fear and anxiety...
Dadi looked at them...
All the three were horrified till now...
And now dadi took out her gun...omg yes...her gun...
Manik totally in shock...
Manik provo: yeh bhagwan...agar ag mein mara na toh upar ja kar tujhe bhi mar dunga...
Dadi came closer to manik...and stretched her hands holding gun towards manik...
Manik's eye closed...
And here dadi shot...
No sound...no dhamaka...kya hua...
Manik opened one of his eyes...and other was still closed...
To his surprise he saw a rose waving out of the gun point...
Dadi's smiling face cleared that that a simple joke...
Manik...bacch gaye...
Dadi: kuin dar gaye na...
Mqnik: arre dadi apne toh mujhe clean bolt kar diya...
Dadi: agar tum nahi ate tub bhi mein tumhe bulati...are dulhe ko bhi toh haldi lagegi...
Dhruv: kya yaar phaltu mein itna problem utha kar andar aye...
Cabir: bhai dhruclv...meine toh final kar diya hai...manik ka naam hum change karke rakhenge... MANIK THE BAWAKUF MALHOTRA...ya phir...MANIK MUSIBATON KA RAJA...
Manik goes on gaping at Cabir's face...
Manik: cabbbir...mere bhai...aisa nahi bolte...
Manik gives a mixed smiling and angry look to cabir...
Cabir: accha...thik hai thik hai...
Scene ends...
Next scene...
Manik and nandini both are sitting on the terrace behind the glowing moon...moon light touching their faces and showing the shades of their love...manik has stored nandini in her arms...and both are looking to the sky and the stars...
Nandini: manik...
Manik: hmm...
Nandini: these stars are so pretty...humse itni dur ho kar bhi they look so magnificent...
Manik looks on to the stars...
Manik: nandini...
Nandini:, hmm...
Manik: kal hamari saadi hone wali hai...
Nandini looks down smiling...
Manik: I want to gift you something...ek second...
Manik getsup...walk out...
Nandini waits for him...
Manik came back with a gift for nandini in his hands which was all covered witha velvet cloth...
Manik: yeh lo...
Nandini holds her gifts...before opening she ask...
Nandini: manik what's this...
Manik: lets see...come on open it...
Nandini slowly and steadily took out the velvet cloth...
Inside the cloth see found a glass jar...
And that jar was filled with many glowing...twinkling ...fireflies...the beautiful gift ever...
A smile spread on nandini's face...
Nandini: manik yeh toh...
Manan tuning on the background...
Both of them looked at each others eyes...
Slowly manik palm touched nandini's palms and they opened the jar cover...and the fireflies got spread in the air...all revolving around this lovely couple...prasing them for their love and affection...lights of these small insects gave manan a night which they can barely forget...
Scene change...
A girl throws all the furnitures ...the decoratives kept in the room...this mentally sick girl is non other than soha...soha's brother harshad...enters the room and looks at the devastation created by his own sister...
Harshad: soha yeh kya kar rahi ho...
Soha still didnot stop...
Harshar applied force and made her quite...
Harshad: wht happened...why is this sudden change in ur behaviour...
Soha: bhai...have a look on this...manik aur nandini ke marriage ka invitation card...
She threw the card away...which fall at some distance away from her...
Soha: how dare he...woh aisa kaise kar skata hai...manik shrif mera hai...woh aur kisi ka nahi ho sakta...mein apne manik ko kisi aur ka hanr nahi dungi...
I am coming manik...tumhare aur uss nandini ke life mein aag lagane...
Just wait and watch ki age kya kya hota hai...a dangerous smile spread on soha's face...

THE NEXT CHAPTER WILL BE INDEED A LENGTHY ONE...AND THE MOST AWAITED CHAPTER FOR THIS STORY...

PRECAP: manan's wedding...manik with his bride both are sitting...
A girl is caught running and coming towards the mandap...
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OK so this is really very nice chapter.Main to dar gayi dadi ko dekh kar..But dadi to cute thi..Mandir scene was awesome..And the fireflies!!Aahh..Kya kahoo main manan aur fireflies ke bareme..They are for manan only..Ab woh vikas apne ky2 s3 main kisi aur couple ke liye fireflies aur star ko use karne wala hain..Any way back to the topic,yeh soha kabhi nehi sudhar ne wali aur na hi harshaad..Precap was good..Updae soon and thank you for the PM..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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continue soon manan wedding kya hua
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CHAPTER 33...MANAN'S WEDDING
The next morning...and of course the most awaited morning...the day for manan's marriage...this morning is found to be full withdesires...love...affection...happiness...
Preparation for the glamorous night has already started...all , busy with their works have no time to take a long breath also...this time cabir is also busy in its truest sense...lights , flowers, decorations...wow...
Dadi seems to be totally busy with the work...she is now choosing the wedding name plate...
Dadi: arre yeh nahi...kuch dhang ka dikhaw...warna goli mar denge...arre meri nandu ki saadi hai...sab kuch khandani hona chahiye ...thoda sa modern bhi hona chahiye...
Now cabir...walking with a basket full of flowers...basket is totally leaning on cabir's face and I know he could see nothing...and due to this he bashes with dadi...dhuddd...dadi fell down with the basket...cabir still standing in a shock...
Dadi: yeh ladke...kya kiya tumne...mujhe gira diya...utha mujhe...aja toh teri kher nahi...
Cabir provo: kya karun...uthaya toh mujhe swarg jana hoga...cabir kat le...sorry nandini maff karna...tumhari dadi ko aise chod ke ja raha huin...lekin agar inhe uthaya toh ye mujhe utha denge...
And deciding what to cabir...cabir walked away...dadi still laying on the ground...
Dadi: mujhe koi uthau...
Navya came to see dadi's condition like this...she ran and picked her up from the ground...
Navya: arre dadi...utheiye uthiye...dheere dheere...( hoding dadi's arm and taking her up)
Dadi: uss nalayak cabir ki wajah se sab ho raha hai...
Navya gave a fainted smile ...which remains unnoticed by dadi...
And here comes the saree dealer...
Dealer: namaste dadi...
Dadi: arre ap...aiye aiye...
Dadi greeted him...and made him sit on the couch...
Dadi: nandini ...beti nandini...
Nandini comes down...with a happi wala mood...with a big smile...
Dadi: aja meri bacchi...tera jooda( bridal wear)pasand kar le...
Nandini comes down to dadi...and stands beside her...the dealer shows one by one best items and advised him to put it on nandini and see ...dadi liked the idea...
Nandini was provied with sareee...
She was standing in front of the mirror to see manik's reflection on the mirror who is standing at some distance from her...
She started trying the sarees one by one...
Dadi: yeh lo nandu...yeh dekho...
Mann yeh saahib ji
Jaane hai sab ji
Phir bhi banaye bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji
Dekhe hain sab ji
Phir bhi na samjhe ishaare
Mann yeh saahib ji haan karta bahaane
Naina nawaabi ji na samjhe ishaare
(na samjhe ishaare)

Dheere dheere, nainon ko dheere dheere
Jiya ko dheere dheere, bhaayo re Saibo
Dheere dheere, begaana dheere dheere
Apna sa dheere dheere, laage re Saibo
DESCRIPTION DURING THE SONG (Nandini took the saree and she just wrapped it around and had a look on the mirror...where manik uttered a simple no...
Nandini: nahi dadi...accha nahi hai...kuch aur...
Dadi: accha thik hai rukh...
Accha yeh dekh...
Again the same...nandu wrapped it around and again lookedfor manik...lekin hamare manik bhai ko kuch pasand nahi aa raha hai...
Trying this 3 to 4 times...at last manik ko ek saree pasand ayi...and he noded as a yes...)
Nandini: dadi yeh final...
Dadi: thik hai bhai...isse acche se pack karke bhijwa do...
Manik smiles there standing...nandini blushes ...
Scene ends...
Most awaited night...
The marriage...
After so much of struggle...our manan iss together...and abhi unhr koi alag nahi kar sakta...
The palace is brightened with all the lights decorations...the mandap has beacame the center of attraction and is properly ready to fulfill manan's happiness...manik is seen peeping from his balcony to nandini's balcony...
And we hear a sound...coming from down...
Nahi dikhegi...
Manik shockingly looks down...its non other than dadi...
Dadi: tayar ho rahi hai...nahi dikhegi...
Manik: woo..woh dadi mein toh bas dekh raha tha ki saadi ki tayariyan kaise hai...mein nandini ko thodi na dekh raha tha...
Kya mast tayari hai...
Dadi: hmm..accha bacchu...mujhe sab pata hai...yeh mat sochna ki paida hi buddhi hui thi...are mein bhi kabhi jawan thi...sab pata hai mujhr...
Manik donates a fake smile...and ran inside the room...
Dadi: arre cabir...khane ka intazam thik thak hai na...
Cabir: han dadi...ap bas batayiye ki ap chicken khayenge yah mutton yah phir prawn yah phir crab...
Dadi: chi chi...ram ram ram ram...(touching both her ears with her hands)
Cabir little bit confused...
Dadi: naam mat lena...tumhe jo khana hai khaw...mein suddha sakahari huin...
Cabir proves: dekho toh...kabhi bhi gun nikal leti hai kisko marne ke liye or keheti hai ki suddha sakahari huin...(in a funny tune)
Dadi: kya bola...
Cabir: kuu...kuch nahi...
Cabir ran away...
Dadi (shouting): man mein kya bolta hai...samne bol...
Dadi looked at dhruv who was standing there and arranging things...
Dadi: dhruv beta...pandit ji aa gaye hai...ja kar manik ko le awo...subha muhurat suru ho gaya hai...
Dhruv nodes and leaves...
Manik in his roon revolving here and there...
Dhruv enters...and founds manik bitting his nails...
Dhruv: arrr...re ...re...re...hamara dulha itna tensed kuin hai...
Manik: dhruv...aja meri saadi thik se ho gayega na...
Dhruv: bhai saadi toh tab hoga jab tume nicche jayoge...pandit ji bula rahe hai...
Cholo...
Manik: han chal...
Both of them came down...and manik took his place in the mandap...
Pandit ji is all prepared...and starts chanting holy mantras...
Aghorchakshur apatighniedhi shiva pashubhyah sumanAh suvarchAh.
Virasur devakAmA syenA sham na bhava dvipade sham chatuspade.

Pandit ji gived manik some rice seeds to put in to fire followed by manik...
Pandit: kanya ko bulaya jaye...
Dadi: arre nandini ko layo...
Bride comes down with a bid ghunghat on her face followed by navya aliya and mukti..
All dressed ...looking like a fairy...
And look at our manik totally memorized...
Manik takes the bride to the altar and both sit down. Pandit ji recounts the marriage of Soma with Surya...
SatyenottabhitA bhumih suryenottabhitA dyuoh.
RitenAdityAs tishthanti divi somo adhi shritah
Somam manyate papivan yat sampishanti oshadhim.
Somam yam brahmAno vidurna tasyAshnAti kaschana.
Mantras were chanted...with the presence of the blessing of all gods the marriage continued...
Manik looks at nandini...but nandini seems to be totally quite...not looking at manik...nothing...
Pandit ji stopped the mantra...
Pandit ji: ab ap badhu ko magalsutra pehenaye...
Dadi handed over the nupital chain to manik...and manik crossed it in his bride's neck...
Still no movement in nandini...
Manik seems to be little tensed by nandini's behaivour...
Time came for vermilion...
Pandit ji: ab sindoor se badhu ki maang bjariye...
Manik is given a small box full of red pure vermilion...

Tadeva Lagnam Sudinam Tadeva, Tara-Balam Chandra-Balam Tadeva
Vidya-Balam Daiva-Balam Tadeva, Lakshmipateramghri-Yugam Smarami(3 times)

Manik dips the coin inside the vermilion...he brings the coin nearer and nearer to her bride...
A girl is seen running and coming towards the mandap...pushing scattering the guest..she uas wore the same bridal wear as nandini has wore...her legs are constantly moving and not stopping for a while
Manik slowly moves his hands towards his brides hair parting...
When suddenly this girl throws the vermilion from manik's hand...
Silences spreads...everyone is shocked...
The box falls down and the vermilion spilts on the ground...
Manik: what the hell...
And when manik looks up to see this girl...he was driven in to a big shock...he couldn't move...his mind stop functioning.not only he...all were in the same condition as that girl was non other than NANDINI!!!!
Yes nandini...manik's bride...she was in a devastated condition...her forehead wadwas hurt and blood jas spread on her face...tears have crowded her eyes...
Manik could speak nothing...

The ques here is how is nandini in this brutal condition...
If nandini is here who is sitting with manik in the mandap...
Nandini ab tak kaha thi...
Ab kya manan ek ho payenge...
Yah their destiny has something else stored for them...
What you all think...comment and let me know...

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