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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

CHAPTER 10

Nandini in the bus stand..

Nandini: tupphy kya kare him...kaha jaye ...

Tupphy: bhau bhau...

Nandini: are pata hai meine sir ko inform nahi kiya ...abhi karti huin..

Nandini take out her phone ..and started calling manik...

Nandini: oh set...network nahi hai...

Cholo abhi bus mein jate hai...

Bus came nandini was going to enter...while manik calls her...

Manik: nandini namdini ...ruko ...

Nandini: stop frm entering ...sir ap yahan...

Manik: kaha ja rahi ho...

Nandini: woh mera ghar...

Manik: pata hai...tumhe kahin jane ki jarurat nahi...

Nandini : phir mein kaha rahuin

Manik: jab tak tumhare liye ghara thik nahi hota tum mere sath rahogi...

Nandini: ap ke satth...

Manik: kuin kuch problem hai..

Nandini: nahi sir kuch nahi...

Manik: cholo..

Manik and nadini worked to manik's house...

WHAT INCIDENTS ARE GOING TO HAPPEN IN MANIK'S HOUSE...

WAIT FOR MY UPDATES...

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angellovemanan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Continue soon

Nice update

Amazing

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nanoNikki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Interesting plz continue soon waiting eagerly for next update take care

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

CHAPTER 11

In manik's house...

Nandini: sir ap ki ghara ki halat itne kharap kuin hai...

Manik: kharap!!!!oolta aka kitna tik hair barns...

Nandini is staring at manik ...

Manik: kya hua ...why are u staring at me as if I am a alien...

Nandini: no no sir ase hi...

Manik: OK..mein abhi meeting ke liye ja RHA huin...

Nandini: OK sir...

Manik went out of the house..

Nandini: kaisa kabad banake rakha hai ghar ko...hmmm.muje hi much karna yoga...chal nandu lag ja kam pe..

Nandini is seen doing household work...

Manik is back from the meeting and when he opens the door he is shocked to see nandini praying...

Nandini: on bhur bhuba shauha...tashya bhitur bare niyam...

Manik: what the hell is this...

And avry funny tuning is played in the background...

Manik: nandini kya kar rahi ho tum...

Nandini chanting the mantras started moving the bell circularly towards the face of manik...

Ting ting ting ting...

Manik: stop it...yeah Sab kya hair...

Nandini: sir subha shubha bhagwan ka naam Lena acha hota hai...

Manik: seriously mein in sab mein nahi manta...air abhi subha nahi hai

Nandini(started thinking) isiliye toh itne khadoos hai..

Manik: kya boli...

Nandini: much nahi sir...bhagwan ko toh kabhi bhi yaad kar sakte gain...

Manik is looking and nandini very angrily...

Nandini: (shouted) sir...

Manik:(got scared) kya hua ...

Nandini: let's have our lunch...

THIS WAS THE FAST INCIDENT...JUST IMARGINE THIS SITUATION IN UR MIND AND STAY TUNED WITH MY NEW UPDATES...

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

CHAPTER 12

Manik's colony frnds with their wives and some old members arrive to manik's house where they get to see manik and nandini both...

Mrs sharma: yeh to bahut buri gal hai manik puttar...tune saddhi bhi kar le aur hame bataya nahi...

Manik: what saddi ...u mean to say marriage...nahi bilkul bhi nahi..

Mrs sharma: kuin jhut bol raja hair..tumhare ghare mein ek ladki hai woh unmarried toh nahi hogi...

Nandini was felling embaressed... Seeing nandini manik replied...

Manik: saddi ...ha ha ...saddi...saddi toh hui hai...

Nandi is shocked...

Mrs sharma started pulling maniks chicks...

Mrs dharma: badmash Hume bataye Nina hi Saadi...chal this hai...bahu ekdam sunder hai...aja hamare colony mein function he tum dono ko ana hoga...

Manik: acha jarur ayenge ...wese kya hoga USS function mein...

Mrs dharma: beta naya joda hai swagaat toh banta hai...jo bhi hoga raat ko pata chal jayega...

All of them left the house...

Nandini: sir mein apki wife thodi na huin..

Manik: are par mein kya karta yeh log achanak aa gaye...kuch toh bolta...

Nandini: ab pata nahi ye hamse kya karwayenge...

SHE WHAT HAPPENS TO MANIK AND NANDINI IN MY NEW UPDATES...

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Nidhibansod

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Amazing update dear, continue soon

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

CHAPTER 13

In the function...

Anchor: gud evening every one ...aja iss colony ka ek khas din hai...ag hame in dono ko dekhkar 2 states ki yad ayegi...

Jyada der na kar re bulate hai hamare age ke stars ko...

Manik malhotra and nandini murty...

Maniks and nandini entry...

Nandini( very slowly) sir sambhal kar ... Ag kuch bhi ho sakta hai...

Manik: philhal toh tum muje darana band karo...

Anchor: oa manik bhaiya aur nandini bhabi ...apko abhi hamare gane par dance karna hoga...

Manik and nandini ( together) dance...no...

Mrs sharma : oye manik putar tu gana banata hai toh kya ussi gane par tumke nahi laga sakta...

Chal suru ho ja...

And the song is played...

MERE HAATH MEIN TERA HAATH HO...(BOTH STARTED DANCING VRY ROMANTICALLY)

SARI JANATEIN MERE SATTH HO...

TU JO PAAS HEY ...PHIR KYA YEH JAHAN ...

TERE PYAAR MEIN HO JAUIN FANAA...

MERE HAATH MEIN TERA HAAT HO...

SARI JANAYEIN MERE SATTH HO...and the song ends...

Anchor: bah bah ...manik pra ...nandini bhabi...kya khub kya khub...so guys abhi pira mausoom romantic ho gaya hai...ab age kya hoga iske leiye abko ek choti si break lena hoga...see u all after the break...

Manik ran to the water ...and started drinking one by one glasses of water...

Nandini: are are are sir yeh ap kya kar rahe hai...pani ki bahut kami hai...don't waste water...

Manik: are meri maaa...waste kaha kar raha huin...mein toh pee raha huin...u know I am very dehydrated...

Nandini: yah ...i am also worried...pata nahi agla task kya hoga...

GUYS ...THER IS GOING TO BE A DHAMAKEDAR TASK IN MY STORY...

IF U ALL ARE INTERESTINGLY WAITING FOR MY UPDATES PLZ LET ME KNOW BY UR COMMENTS...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

CHAPTER 14

manik and nandini on the stage...anchor is also present...

Anchor: next him much marriage ki kuch ceremony larne jaa rahe hai...

Manik and nandini are standing in a shock...

Manik: acha kya karna hoga hame...

Anchor: kuch nahi pra bas apko yeh sindoor lena hoga aur nandini bhabi ke mang mein bharna hoga...

Manik and nandini are looking to each other ...a comedy tuning is made in the background...

Manik: kuin...

Anchor: kya hua manik pra kuch problem???

Manik: na...na...na...nahi ...meine toh bola kuin nahi...

Anchor brought the sindoor and asked manik to put the sindoor...

Nandini in her mind : aiyapppa aja bach ligiye...

Manik has taken sindoir in his hand...suddenly...manik stared screaming...

Manik: aya...aya ...mera hath bahut dard kar raha hai...mein nahi laga paunga sindoor..

Mrs sharma: oye puttar lai mein thik kar deti huin tumhara hatth...

Manik: nahi nahi...

All are looking shockingly..

Manik: mere matlab hai ki hatth ke sath saar bhi ghum raha hai...

Nandini: sir ap thik hai...

Nandini in manik ears...

Nandini: thank u sir...thik time mein apne apne acting ki kala ko bahare nikale...but thoda over acting ho raha rhai...

Manik: aah oooh mera haat mere saar...

Mrs sharma: nandini beta isse ghar le ga...

Yeh bimar hai...lagta hai thik se nahi khaya...kuch khila de isse...

Manik in his mind( bach gaye)...

Anchor: aja manik bahiya bimar ho gaye...issiliye hum yeh ceremony bad mein karenge...

Manik and nandini : no...

Nandini: thank god manik sir ...bach gaye aja...chaliye app ghara chaliye...

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

HLW MY FAN FICTION READERS...I WANT TO INFORM U THAT I AM SUFFERING FROM COLD SO I WILL BE UNABLE TO UPDATE...IF U ALL WANT ME TO CONTINUE PLZ LIKE AND COMMENT ...MAY BE AFTER UR WISHES I COULD RECOVER...AND I KNOW IF MY FORUMS FRIEND WILL WISH ME I WILL RECOVER AND WILL PERFORM GUD IN MY EXAMS...

CHAPTER 15

Nandini in the home...

Nandini: sir app kya khayenge...

Manik: are edhire mere sat ghum gaya hair issue project ko complete karne ke liye aur tum muje puch rahe ho ki muje kya khana hai...

Nandini: are usme kya hai layiye mein apki madad kar deti huin..

Manik: ya sure join me...

Nandini: sir isse agar haum ase...karenge...

It is seen that manik is looking mesmorisingly to nandini and background music flows...

HUA HAI AJA PEHELI BAR...

JO ASE MUSKURAYA HUIN...(MANIK STARTED GIVING A CUTE SMILE)

TUMHE DEKHA TO JANE YEH KE KUIN DUNIYA MEIN AYYA HUIN...

YE JAA LE KAR KE JA MERI TERE SAJDE MEIN LAYA HUIN...

MEIN TUMSE ISAQ KARNE KI ISAJAT RAB SE LAYA HUIN...

RAB SE LAYA HUIN...

nandini: sir kya hua??? Are u OK...

Manik: ya yah...ha toh tum kya bol rage ho???...

It was seen that after it was morning... Both manik and nandini are are sleeping in the table...

Nandini( getting up) oh god itna late ho gaya...

Abhi muje jaa me breakfast banana hai...

Nandini goes downstairs ...manik wakes up and goes to the washroom...

Manik(after the bath) nandini khana ho gaya..

Nandini: yes sir ready..

Manik have his breakfast...

Manik: mein jaa raga huin office...

Nandini: yes sir...

Manik works to his office...

Nandini: are aka lunch baane me liye vegetable s toh nahi hai...

Muje ja kar Lana hoga...

Nandini took a bag from the rack and works to the market...

In the market...

Nandini: bhaiya yeah ally Kaiser diye...

Seller: 60 rupee kilo...

Nandini: kya kya kya...60 rupee...yeah toh sarasar dadgiri hai thodi kam kijiye...

Seller: thin hai madam...ap 40 rupee mein le gaiyeye...

Nandini: ye chlega...

Nandini selects some other veges...and buys all of them...

Nandini: kitni bhid hai aka...

Nandini was passing the road and from the other side a car was coming in a high speed...nandini was unaware of the car...

WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO NANDINI...WEATHER SHE WILL BE SAVED OR NOT...

WAIT FOR MY UPDATES ..IF I RECOVER SOON...

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mairaallauddin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#30

Awesome update

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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