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pdiyar193

@pdiyar193

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

I'm liking this ff!
Lovely start and well written!!
Can't wait to read more about Manan!!!
Love Manan moments!!!!<3
Continue soon!:)

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priyasmiley

@priyasmiley

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

welcome to kyy family

nice story

continue soon

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saumya

@saumi55

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Pls continue forum dear

Waiting fr update

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

CHAPTER 6
Manik's entry in the office and every one say gud mrng...but nandini is as usual late...
Nandini(running):gud...mrng ...sir
manik: training mein late anna is not allowed...
Nandini: i m sry sir...wo khana nahi kaha raha tha usse khilakar ayi huin ...
Manik: kaun???
Nandini: sir uska naam hai tupphy...
Manik: kaun tupphy???
Nandini: sir app tuppy ko nahi jante..
Manik: nahi toh...
Nandini: are wohi toh hai mera doggy ...i m vry concern about him
manik: a doggy ...seriously
nandini: yes sir pet is vry necessary in life...
Manik in his thounght
kaisi ladki hai ye...difficult to handle
manik works into his cabin...
Now it is shown at the lunch time in office...
Navya: aj mere maa ne mere liye dal chawal banaya hai..mil kar khayenge... Nandini ek kam karo isse gas par garam kar ke lay aao
Nandini: thik hai lati huin...
Manik is coming frm that side busy in phone and nandini frm the opposite side with food ...accidentaly nandini lehs slipped and the tiffen thrown in the air falls on manik head...
Manik: what the hell is this!!!
Cabir: bhai tune kab se apne balo ko khana nahi khialaya ...bichare bahut bhuke hai...
Meine dekha hai ki insaan muhh se khata hai..par lagta hai tere system mein kuch karabi hai...
Manik: shut up cabir ...aur tum ...ye sab kya hai...
Nandini: sry sir galti se gir gaya...
Manik: kya galti se gir gaya...meine kal hi itne sundar hairstyle karwai thi..sara kharab ho gaya
Cabir: ha ha ha ha...
Manik: sale hans kuin raha hai...
Cabir: tere hair style ke bare mein soch kar...kitne ajib the...aisa lag raha tha ki kisne 440 volt ka current laga dia ho...sab khade ho gaye the koi baethene ke liye tayar nahi tha...
Manik: this is called styling...
Cabir: tum apna style apne pas rakho ...cholo nandini apna apna kam karte hai...

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

CHAPTER 7

Manik is busy in tuning guitar ...suddenly mukti aliya and cabir entered

Aliya mukti cabir(Sab ek sath) : manik...

Manik: kya hua guys .., tum log itne gusse mein kuin lag rage ho???

Multi: manik...in dono benenji me mil kar hamare rocking company ko sastriya sangit company bans diya hair

Cabir: ha year...muje bhi game nahi diya...mere ander Jo latamageskar hai unhe koi jagne nahi deta...

Manik: seriously cabir...latamageskar female singer hair...

Cabir: so what...I can sing both male and female song...

Manik: just leave it...kya ho raha hai company mein

Multi:tum khud chal me dekh lo...

All of them works towards the instruments room.,nandini and navya were playing tanpura an singing classical song

Nandini and navya: aa AAA AAA OE OE OE bana rasiya...

Rang mein bhangiya rang mein bhang banarasiya...AAA OE OE OE ...

Manik enters: stop this nonsense ...navya tumhe apna kam nahi karn a to leave this place immidiately air tum...manik started looking at nandini and nandini too started looking at him...man an tuining flows in the background...main couldn't say anything to nandini...

Manik: jaldi practice suru karo nandini

Manik leaves..

Multi: what happened to manik now...

Aliya: pata nahi is office mein San pagal bhare hua gain...

Cholo guys concert able hafte hone wala hai name team ko ready karna...

All of them leave...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Amazing storyline...

Read all d updates in 1 go...& must say all r just superb...

Luved it...

Plz continue soon...

Waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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Natashaaaaa

@Natashaaaaa

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

update soon ...waiting 4 nxt part

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

CHAPTER 8

manik in the practice room ...practice is going on for consert...

Manik: kisi chal rahi hai practise ...

Nibedita( lead singer) : vry nice sir ..

Manik: continue...

Soha was listening to this ...

Soha: kuch bhi karke muje nandini ki team ko consert mein perform karne se rokna hoga...

Soha meets the group and tells

Soha: guys tum sab ke liye mere pas ek bahut acha deal hai

Team: kya mam

Soha: i will give u any amount u want but u will not perform in the consert...

Team: per mam

Soha: isse acha deal tumhe nahi milega...

Team : ok mam...

Soha: ab dekh nandini mein kaisi tuje manik she alag karti huin...

At the day of Consett...

Nandini is waiting for jer team...

Manik: nondini where is ur team ...

Nandini: pata nahi sir abhi ate hoge...

Manik: agar hum ag nahi jite to hamare company ko bahut loss hoga...

Next performance hamara hai,...

A announcement is heard...

Anocher: chaliye bulate hai hamare next team ko...our fav team...

Manik is vry tensed...suddenly a sound is heared...

Man ye saheb ji...

Jane he Sab ji...

Phir bhi banaye bahane ...ho ho...

Naina nababi ji dekhe hai Sab ji ...

Phir bhi na samjhe issare...

It was nandini...song continued...

Man ye saheb ji ha karta bahane...

Naina nababi ji na samjhe isssare...

Another sound is heard from nandini's back...it was maniks...

Dhere dhere ...naino ko dhere dhere ...jiya ko dhere dhere lage re saibo...

Dhere dhere began a dhere dhere apna sa dhere dhere lage re saibo...

A huge round of aplause was heard from the audience...

Anchor: result is in my hands...who is the winner ...any busses...

Audience: manik nandini manik nandini...

Anchor: absolutely right its T series ...manik and nandini...

Soha was feeling very jealous and left the place immediately...

Manik and nandini was awarded with a trophy and a deal ...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 8 years ago

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Awww so sweet story continue waiting...take care

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

CHAPTER 9

Manik in his cabin...

Manik: kya ho gaya hair muje ...why can't I concentrate on my work...

Cabir entry...

Cabir: kya hua Bhai...abhi ghadi mein to bars baje hai par tere chehere par bars kuin Baja hai...

Manik: pata nahi yaar I can't concentrate on my work...

Cabir: Bhai tu phas gaya hair...lagta hair tuje woh ho gaya hai..

Manik:kya????

Cabir: are wohi pyaar mohabaat love...

Manik: shut up cabir ...Aesa kuch nahi hai...

Cabir: thin his Bhai chup kara le muje...

Manik: acha nandini kaha hai...

Cabir: pata nahi...aja ayi nahi hai office...

Manik: kya ...kal bhi nahi ayi this air aka bhi nahi ayi...

Acha thin hai tum jao...

Cabir nodded his head and left..

Manik calls nandini. But her phone is constantly switch up...

Manik got worried and left to search nandini...

In nandini's house...

Manik: knok knock...

Owner: kya hai Bhai..

Manik: nandini kaha hai...

Owner: are use toh main nikal diya ...kabhi bhi rent thin time pe nahi deti...

Kaun rekhaga asi Laski ko.,

Manik: wht do u mean nikal diya hai...kaha gai hai woh????

Owner: muje nahi pata...cholo jao...pata nahi kaha kaha she chale ate hai..

Manik became tensed and started searching madly for nandini...

GUYS ARE U INTERESTED TO KNOW WHERE IS NANDINI...

STAY TUENED WITH MY STORY FOR MORE UPDATES...

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