Hey..
Firstly welcome back to your oops!! our mother land. India me apka swagat hai..
How are you.? Abhi to jet lang right..??
How are you feeling..??
london ki yaad aati hai..??π
No worries.. you can cherish the memories of time you spend their..
Are ha i know i am late but kya karu meri wali story bohot time leti hai likne me hi time chala jata hai..
I know a simple apology is not gonna work
but buttering to chalega..
you are my sweet sweet didu.. you will forgive haina..
achi didi, pyari didi..
Now about the update..!!!
bilkul bura tha, mujhe padhne me maza nai aya...esa juth nai bolungi..
i will give true review of your work
This is how i feel abotu the update..
You asked me review as a reader right..??
See you are a writer and many a times reader add words to their vocabulary
after reading..
So its no harm in writting this way infact it will be good..
Users vocabulary will improve.. i do this..
like i need to improve mine., too
As a writer i would yeh love likhna mujhe shikha do..
lol
But it wasn't that hard to read i mean normal person can read you didn't used such hard words so thats okay no need to bother and i would suggest write in this way..
rest about the story..
Nandini is so scared to even face manik what if her emotional side would come up in front of him.
But nandu's father did the right thing i guess.
Any which way update to awesome he hona tha apne likha tha..
lol
Continue soon
Take care..
P.S Enjoy indian food made by your mother..π
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