#THREAD 2 Humsafar...CH 26 Pg 123;PROMO Pg 136.. (5.03.2016) - Page 24

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92

Wow wat a beautiful update...
Nandu supported manik and his family in such an amazing way...
Hats off to her...
Nd finally ridhima will try to be same wid manik dats an owsm hope for manik...
Nandini is gem of a person...
Plzzz update new part soon


Hi,

Thanks a ton!!!! 😊😊... Yes, she stood by the man she loved and his family... she knows what importance his family has in his life... Yes, the ray of hope has come that will mend the relation between Manik and Ridhima...

Glad you liked it.

Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiara115

Wow.. that was a treat to watch...

Nandini was outstanding. ..
Kavya ko acha maza chakaya...
I hope nandini will be able to mend manik and her sisters relation..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly


Hi,

Thanks a lot...😊😊... glad to know you liked the strong Nandini... She will give her best mend the relations between Manik and Ridhima...πŸ˜‰...

Take care...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sohai121

Amazing one ...kavya such a negative person she z awww nandu took stand for manik n his family such a awesum moments ...hopefully manik n ridzi get bck together ...are u closing dis ff????


Hi,

Yes we do have negativity around us and we really need to stop it from affecting us... Nandini just stood by Manik, her Love and His family...😳... Yes, Manik and Ridhima will be together hopefully, fingers crossed...😊😳...

Hhhmmm coming to your concern on this FF being closed, well for now i had decided and promised the readers i will continue it... and tell the complete tale of how MANIK & NANDINI became HUMSAFARS...😳😳

Happy!!!!!😊

Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: etuu

Nandini took manik's side & stand for him... This is very overwhelming for manik... Hope manik & ridzi sort out their problem which was created by witch kavya.. Update next part soon


Hi Eetu,

Ok i won't start with a Thank you today happy...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†... Yes, Nandini stood by the man she loved and his family... 😊... even i hope their problem solved soon... aab toh Nandini is also there to support ManikπŸ˜‰...

Thanks to bolna padhegaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

And yes i have a story in my mind for the OS/TS you wanted me to write... let's see when i can write it...

Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome update loved how nandu slapped kavya nandu ne acha sabak sikhaya ridz n did is impressed with nandu n now nandu unka relation bhi thik kar degi. I'm again saying u dear pls don't separate manan. Update soon


Hi,

Thanks a lot and glad to know you liked the update...😊... Well, our Nandini knows how to stand by her Love and that can impress anyone right...πŸ˜‰... I will surely update soon...

And one more thing, if it doesn't hurt, it's not LOVE...

Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Hi,

Thanks a lot... glad you found it nice...😊

Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mkayal

Finally all getting set on track!! And nandinis reply wws just fab!! Post the next part soon !! With manan scenes too!!


Hi,

Glad you liked Nandini's reply...😊... hhhmmm i had completely dedicated last few parts only on Manik and NandiniπŸ˜†... but we need to progress the story ahead too, hope you understand...

Take care.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome!! Nandini was too good today to handle that irritating kavya... The way she stood for manik was just outstanding...I just wish riddhima also forgives her brother,manik really misses his sister... Thanks the pm... Pls continue soon... 😊 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

NOTE - There is a song in the chapter and i have modified its lyrics a bit...I request everyone to read it... they are hilarious...πŸ˜†


CHAPTER 21 (C)

DHRUV & ALIYA'S ROKA CEREMONY...


10 MONTHS LATER (continued...)

WRITER'S POINT OF VIEW-


A lot had happened in these 10 months in everyone's life. Manik had finally come back to live with his parents in Malhotra Mansion... Nandini had held his hand while he took the step he was hesitant in. Manik's sister Ridhima lived in the same city but the differences were way too much between her and Manik. Ridhima had finally started to speak with him after a long time and the brother sister duo finally came back together.


The family that had fallen apart due to Kavya was once again together under one roof because of Nandini, as she had constantly encouraged Manik to speak with his sister. The Malhotra family loved the girl since the day she had walked into their life. She had not only saved Manik's life that day, but had also supported and motivated Manik to get back to his family and friends.


This was one big reason that Malhotra's FAMILY WALL now had her photograph there. Manik's room had Nandini's photographs and also had one photograph in which they both were together, it was from the night they went with FAB 5 for dinner at Hotel TAJ [Chapter 21 (B)].


MANIK'S POINT OF VIEW-

MALHOTRA MANSION

I had reached home with mom and as we entered Ridzi was standing there with a grumpy face.

Ridzi- Manik you have spoilt my kids, now go and handle them... I just can't do it...

"Ok... Tum handle nahi kar pati dono ko that doesn't mean I am at fault..." I smirked at her and I knew I had awakened my sister's monstrous side... She ran behind me to hit me and I got my Jij's between us...


Ridzi- Sid get aside... Kya keh raha tha tu Manik... huhhh I am not capable of handling my kids... Sid hattoo... Firstly, you spoil my kids and then you say I can't handle them..

She finally gave up and was on verge of crying and went to Dad nagging like a kid as always... Jij's and I both chuckled over it...


Dad scolded me as usual and she giggled about it. It had been such a long time I saw her like that. My heart was elated to see her behave just like old days. I silently smiled and said to myself... "Thanks Nandini... Aaj Ridzi is with me because of you..."


Mom finally came to intervene and reminded me that everyone has been calling us to reach early for Dhruv and Aliya's ROKA Ceremony. I traversed my eyes on everyone and realized they were all ready except Viaan and me. We both rushed towards my room.

I firstly got my Champ Viaan ready in a cute black suit that matched mine. He pulled my tracks and I sat to match his height.


Viaan- (nervously) Manik Mama how do I look?? Please sachii sachii say... You know today Riya will also come with her palents (parents)... I want to look handshum (handsome) like you...


I chuckled on his cuteness; yes my champ liked a girl Riya in his class. He used to share everything with me... "Viaan, champ you look very handsome... Riya kya sab girls aap pe flat ho jayengi..." His eyes were bright with happiness...

Viaan- leally (really) Mama... (I just nodded in a yes and we high fived.)


After he left I got ready and glanced at Nandini's photograph... "Stop ogling at me Nandini... I know I am looking HOT... Hope aaj ceremony ache se ho jaye..." I smiled and gave a flying kiss to her picture. I quickly got her scarf and placed it as Pocket Square. I always carried it with me.


We all were sitting in the cars when Samaira started to nag that she wanted to be with me and champ in my car. I got her from Ridzi and we all left towards Hotel TAJ for the ceremony.


HOTEL JW MARRIOTT, JUHU


We reached the banquet hall reserved for Dhruv and Aliya's ceremony. It was a small function with close family and friends with no media intervention. Everyone had arrived and we began to attend all guests personally. Giving personal touch to guests was something I had learnt from Nandini; she was a Pro at it. Samaira was with me as she wasn't ready to get off my arms and Viaan was with Mom. Jij's, Ridhima and Mukti made sure all guests were being served properly. Dhruv and Aliya's parents were too happy to see us taking the responsibility of the arrangements.



The decors and set up were just like we had planned and were feeling relieved when everyone praised the ambience... Trust me it one hell of a thing to do, infact more difficult than the event that was next lined up for FAB 5...





Jij's, Akshay and Cabir finally got Dhruv who was wearing Kurta Payjama and he looked handsome in that attire... Ridzi and Mukti went to get Aliya who was looking gorgeous in a yellow lehenga. We had a group hug and then we made both of them sit in their respective places and the ceremony began. Their mothers did the Tilak for both and we all were extremely happy to see them. Everyone blessed them both for a happy life ahead...



After the Tilak I began to look at the last minute preparations along with Cabir. Everyone was seated and there was lot of hungama happening as all the aunties were singing songs and teased both Dhruv and Aliya. Everyone was asking Reena Aunty (Akshay's mom) to sing as she used to sing witty songs... She instantly agreed and then called everyone to sit around her. Everyone began to sit in a closed circle as we had the set-up like that so that everyone was involved in the function... Cabir and I were making sure everyone was comfortable...

Reena Aunty asked everyone to join her and then Cabir got the dholak and sat next to Dhruv... Ridzi and Mukti sat next to Aliya. Reena Aunty then called me...

Reena Aunty - Manik beta come sit next to Dhruv... come fast...

I went and sat next to Dhruv and Jij's... Samaira sat on my lap and Viaan was on Jij's lap. One of Dhruv's relatives asked Reena Aunty...

Relative- Reenaji aaj kaunsa kissa suna rahi hai aap...

Finally Reena Aunty spoke...

Reena Aunty- aaj hum kissa sunenge Dhruv aur Aliya ki shadi ki raat ka...

Everyone started to laugh and asked her to start, as everyone got impatient to know what might happen on their wedding night... Dhruv and Aliya were blushing and glanced at each other in between...

[SONG - DHINAK DHINAK DHA...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QOPdE9rNXNM

]

Cabir, Sid, Ridhima, Mukti, Abhimanyu, Akhay and cousins -

O Mausee Kisse Denee, O Kisse Khatte Mithe
O Kisse Mote Mote, O Kisse Khote Khote

Mukti and Ridhima-

Oye Khatam Hee Nahee Hote
Dhinak Dhinak Tha

Reena Aunty-

Suno Suno Aliya Kee Aur Dhruv Kee Kahaanee, Dhinak Dhinak Tha


Dulha Thoda Aaiwayee Tha Dulhan Thee Sayaanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
Dur Des Se Aayee Thee Woh Roop Kee Raanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
Jal Bhun Jaave Saans Naa Nadiya Kudhe Jatanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha

[Dhruv and Aliya blushed...And everyone teased them.]

Cabir, Sid, Ridhima, Mukti, Abhimanyu, Akhay and cousins -

Kaise Hua Milan, Mausee Hame Bata
Arey Shadi Kee Raat Kaa Kissa Hame Suna,


Cabir and Sid-

Bataao Naa Mausee

Reena Aunty-

AliyaKo Kya Sujhee Jaane Thee Woh Divaanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
Ruth Ke Kundee Band Kar Baithee Ek Naa Maanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
Dhruv Ko Kundee Thok Thok Yaad Aa Gayee Naani, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
Arey Sir Ko Khujaye Socha Bechara Khatam Kahaani

[Dhruv and Aliya were embarrassed...😲]

Cabir, Sid, Ridhima, Mukti, Abhimanyu, Akshay and cousins -

Dhinak Dhinak Dha

O Meree Jaaneja Aise Sitam Naa Dha

Itana Mujhe Bata Meree Khata Hain Kya

Reena Aunty-

Phir MANIK aur CABIR Ne Dhruv Ko Samjhaaya, Kya Samjhaaya
Mithee Mithee Baate Kar, Sache Jhuthe Waade Kar Gadhe
Tab Maanegee Teree
Aliya


Dhruv Bola Chanda Taare Launga Aliya, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
Arey Aliya Bolee Kyon Karatee Ho Baat Puraanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha


Dhruv Bola Naam Tere Kar Du Jindgaanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
Aliya Bolee Dub Maro Chullu Bhar Paanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha

Cabir, Sid, Ridhima, Mukti, Abhimanyu, Akshay and cousins -

Phir Kaise Hua Milan Mausee Hame Bata
Arey Shaadee Kee Raat Kaa Kissa Hame Suna


Reena Aunty-

Phir Woh Aaya Mere Paas
Maine Kaha Arey Gadhe Taaro Kaa Achaar Daalega
Ya Chaand Ka Paapad Talega
Maine Usake Kaan Mai Phuka Mantar, Dulha Pahucha Darwaaje Par
Aur Pata Hain Kya Bola,


Cabir, Sid, Ridhima, Mukti, Abhimanyu, Akhay and cousins -

Kya Bola Mausee

Reena Aunty-

Sona Chaandee Le Aaya Hu O Meree Aliya, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
Aliya Bolee Aadhee Hee Mai Kholu Chitkaanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha


Hire Motee Bhee Laaya Hu O Meree
Aliya, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
Aliya Ne Phir Jhat Se Kholee Puree Chitkaanee, Dhinak Dhinak Dha
O Mere Raja Bolee Jaldee Bhitar Aa,

[Dhruv was trying to hide behind me and Aliya was hiding her face by her hands...and everyone was dancing in between...]

Mukti and Ridhima-

O Mere Raja Jaldee Bhitar Aa
Aaise Naa Tarsa O Mere Raaja,

Cabir and Sid -

Phir Kya Hua Mausee

Reena Aunty-

Kundee Band Aur Battee Gul,

Cabir and Sid-

Phir Bataao Bataao Mausee Bataao
Phir Bataao


Everyone Together-

Dhinak Dhinak Dha, Dhinak Dhinak Dha

O Mausee Kisse Denee, O Kisse Khatte Mithe

O Kisse Mote Mote, O Kisse Khote Khote...

Mukti, Ridhima and cousins-

Oye Khatam Hee Nahee Hote...


Everyone was dancing and then Mukti dragged me too... The ceremony was going well and the guests were too happy and were involved in the entire function... I left and went to attend Abhimanyu's dad... I was speaking to him about our next big event lined up in a week's time... Mom was standing just a few feet away from us with Reena Aunty...


Reena Aunty- Avantika, Manik ke bare kuch socha tumne... (Concerned). If you say then shall I speak to Mrs. Singhania for their daughter Aarohi?

My mom smiled and ignored the question... She looked at me and I smiled back at her... I knew why she did it.


Suddenly, all the aunty's called me and asked me to sing... I tried to avoid it but then the legendary singers like Alkaji and Sonu Nigamji asked me to sing... They all had to come to bless Dhruv and Aliya... We had a close association with them and also they were a part of our next big event in a week's time...


Sonu Nigam- Come on Manik, aaj toh tumhara gana banta hai...

Arijit Singh- Manik... Come on buddy... Kuch toh suna de...

Alkaji- Mana Manik beta you are now an international singer and FAB 5 humare music directors hai... But, humari baat toh rakh sakte hona...


I was completely speechless and spoke... "Alkaji, please don't say like that, we can never match up to the craft and music you have created all these years... I'll sing..." Everyone started to applaud for me and as I approached where the Piano was placed... I took Viaan and Samaira too with me...


Viaan sat on the chair and started to play the piano and I adjusted the mike for him. He played the prelude and after he finished everyone was applauding for him... I was feeling so proud of my champ... He looked at me for my approval if he played correctly with a puppy face... I ruffled his hair and gave a high five to him... His eyes were bright with happiness...


Viaan- Manik Mama now youl (your) turn...

I smiled at him and removed my coat and placed Nandini's scarf on the piano... And then Mukti took the coat from me and I sat on the chair...

Edited by ankita_t - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow update...
Luved bro sis bond...
Sis as usual enjoyed hr brother getting scolded...
(Even I luv it...typical elder sis)
Luved tht bond b/w mamu and and bhanja...
But where is nandu...
Song was really wow...
So manik ks going to play piano...
Luved it...
Update soon..
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