#THREAD 2 Humsafar...CH 26 Pg 123;PROMO Pg 136.. (5.03.2016) - Page 105

Originally posted by: samanf

Awsum chapter di...uh r back wid a bang...

Everything was so beautifully described...

As a reader i could automatically feel da departure pain n longing of both of dem..

At some point I wanna blame MANIK for not being so considerate enough of leaving his love lyk dat...leaving g her alone in darkness...but yes deep down I kno he is kno where at fault ...he is equally suffering...

So who to blame actually... I guess no one...at some tym no matter how strong or mighty one is...or how smartly we hav designed every plan for ourselves but dere is a sumting called destiny ...on which we r absolutely helpless...it may be a blessing for sum while a curse for others...

But atleast dere is a ray of hope amidst this thunderstorm on seing da guilt stricken caring parents... This is where MANIK n Nandini won...dere pure n innocent love have bound dem to rethink about dere decision...

Uh hav very well portrayed dat one shud not alwaz go by FIRST IMPRESSION IS DA LAST IMPRESSION saying...

Though MANIK was at folly in da past...but one shud just not stick to da negative side...n see da positive aspects too..

Hope her parents realize his sincerity n genuineness towards her..

Really looking forward for da next update...Nandini working wid da malhotras is sumwat a positive step of dem coming together again...

Great chapter it was...

Continue soon.. Tc

Originally posted by: 591994

Nice promo dear...loved it... Waiting to know what u hve planned next... Cont. Soon...

Originally posted by: nandininiti

amazing promo
at last manan will meet
nandu is so nervous
update soon please

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Nandini's pov was well penned. Hats off. Her pain and hurtful state was well shown.nandini's moments with little nandini were blissful.wow nandini's parents got to know about manik changed for good.he truly loves nandini. Omg nandini to work with manik.that will be mindblowing. Eagerly waiting for manan's meet and nandini's reaction. Continue soon.this story is getting interesting. Love to read more. Can't wait for their meet.

Coming to the story right from the start way u penned it was commendable. Each and every update was beautifully penned. Manan's bond was well shown from strangers to lovers.every step of manan was well penned.I must say u r an expert in penning all kind of emotions especially humour.love bappa's scenes with manan.

start from way nandini consoled manik in their introduction scene.,Manik's gradual fall for nandini due to her beautifully heart and soft behaviour,Fab4's teasing sessions,Nandini's past was so emotional and well penned. Hats off,Aarav and nandini's friendly moments,nandini and aarav's meet after ages,little nandini and nandini's moments, Manan's love realisation and confession and especially each and every manan's moments were beautifully penned. U r an amazing writer. Keep up the good work.

Update soon.thanks for pm

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Vry vry sry dear 4 late commentinggg...

Update was so fabulous...Lvd it 2 core...

Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...U nailed it...

Nandu in Aarav's home...Really aarav n sanjana r true friends.

D way dey supportin nandu ws fabulous...Manik won awrd..

Aarav came 2 knw abt manan's current situation...

Aarav askin nandu 2 congratulate manik..Evn manik also waitin 4 dat..

Poor nandu so so much shattered...D pain of her heart u penned it perfectly..

U nailed it dear..Nandu cnt talk him...She just lft..

Aarav bein a true frnd alwys supported her,...Lvd dat frndshp momnts vry much...

Rishi n seema r confused on their decision regardin manan..

Dey r able 2 c manik's luv 2wrdz nandu..Manik Lvs their princi madly...

Dt courier vala prt rckd...Manik s agn proving dem dey r wrong...

He did evrythng 4 nandu..His lyf s revolved around her...

Nandu's parents shckd knwin manik transferrin d flat 2 nandu...

Now dwy r able 2 understand hw much dey hurted their children evnthough dey r crct in their pov...

Nandu s also shckd seein d papers of their house...

Aarav talkin nandu's parents was really fabulous...He presentd manik's pov...

Nandu s in so much pain..Bt she didn't shwd in her face...

Felt vry bad 4 her,...Nandu refusing 2 wrk vid Malhotra industries in fear of meetin malhotras...

Poor grl...Nandu's fathr sayin against her statement...I think he s melting..

May b he will reconsider his decision...Nandu s in a shck hw 2 face malhotras..

Really awesum update...Lvd it so much...So much emotional...

U penned it vry well...U expresssd d pov of both nandu n manik damn perfectly..

U nailed it seriously dear..Do continue...Waitn 4 nxt prt..

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Awesum promo...Lvd it so much..

Manan meet on d way...

Nandu s so nervous on meetin manik face2 face..

Waitin 2 knw wt will hpn..

Do continue dear...Pls update soon...

Originally posted by: Samruddhi_Kadam

Awww diii

Its marvellous

I can't describe it in words

Seriously

And I'm fool what had thought

I never had thought that this can be a reason also

And yes the update was awesome as usual

You always gave super duper wala update

I loved it so much

Thanks for each and every pms

Now waiting for the next update

Manik and nandini face to face after 10 month

Its going to be very interested update with emotional one also

I hope that soon we can see manik and nandini as manan...

promo is too good

Take care

Update soon

Originally posted by: Drashtiii

Hey..

Firstly welcome back to your oops!! our mother land. India me apka swagat hai..

How are you.? Abhi to jet lang right..??

How are you feeling..??

london ki yaad aati hai..??😭

No worries.. you can cherish the memories of time you spend their..

Are ha i know i am late but kya karu meri wali story bohot time leti hai likne me hi time chala jata hai..

I know a simple apology is not gonna work

but buttering to chalega..

you are my sweet sweet didu.. you will forgive haina..

achi didi, pyari didi..

Now about the update..!!!

bilkul bura tha, mujhe padhne me maza nai aya...esa juth nai bolungi..

i will give true review of your work

This is how i feel abotu the update..

You asked me review as a reader right..??

See you are a writer and many a times reader add words to their vocabulary

after reading..

So its no harm in writting this way infact it will be good..

Users vocabulary will improve.. i do this..

like i need to improve mine., too

As a writer i would yeh love likhna mujhe shikha do..

lol

But it wasn't that hard to read i mean normal person can read you didn't used such hard words so thats okay no need to bother and i would suggest write in this way..

rest about the story..

Nandini is so scared to even face manik what if her emotional side would come up in front of him.

But nandu's father did the right thing i guess.

Any which way update to awesome he hona tha apne likha tha..

lol

Continue soon

Take care..

P.S Enjoy indian food made by your mother..😊