#3 *MY WORLD'S KING* (UPDATED PART 51) Pg 115 15/2/17 - Page 70

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Posted: 8 years ago
Congrats on the 50th part update...
The update was as usual very well penned.. His deep dark secrets is out to his soulmate.. He cares for her and the way he asked about her dad and both their insecurities...

Oh so the rain has got them to stay in a hotel. He is so much caring boyfriend any girl would want, he understand all her needs...

Oh MaNan semi romance nice...

What is going to happen in the morning...

Thanks for the update... Loved reading
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Posted: 8 years ago
As usual fabulous update...Manan convo was awesome... I am loving with your writing skills..thank you for update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wowww amazingg awesomee suprrbbb update
Finally manik ne apna past nandu se share kiya...beautifull lovely manan...continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finalllyyy
Thabk god manik revealed it all out
Happyyy
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update

finally manik is open to her..all his past and sadness in his life has been shared with her..thats called as true relationship..

they have reached to the next level of their relationship

u wrote it very beautifully

the intimate part was short but quite breathtaking

it was passionate

loved it

i hope next morning disastrous na ho unke liye

plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally like finally.
manik shared his dark life wid nandu.
finally usne sb bta diya..

Their passionate was very quite amazingly written ..
Loved it.

Waiting for next update eagerly.
Keep Smiling
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Posted: 8 years ago
After a long long time I loved the update
And manik was my favorite
I loved the way you have writen his side of the story
And the way nandini consoled him was beautiful
And at last their intimate moment was damn romantic
I've read this update so many times and I still can't get enough
And thank u so much for updating a bit early
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow wow wow is theonly word i can express on dis update
I mean u r an amazing writer dear
M so happy u update it so soon

Manan nd der love for each other
Der care and need for each other

Plzzz update new part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update...
really like ur story...
eagerly waiting 4 d nxt update...
do update soon...
keep writing
tc
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Posted: 8 years ago
I just loved this chapter'-'-'-
Continue Soon
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