#3 *MY WORLD'S KING* (UPDATED PART 51) Pg 115 15/2/17 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
very well penned loved everything... their song practice, how she consoled him, how he gets cooled down by her, his concern, mother son talk his anger, his cute shopping...
their convo and his anger uff everything was cute cute cute...

waiting if she will join him or not for b'lore????
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: SHYPN

thanks for updating such a awsm update... I always wait for ur stories... OK now coming to story..
I am very scared of nyonika lyk manik bcoz she is very clever ...but story mein masala bhi toh chahiye... so cool...
shopping ...is tension for nandani... it's good she is still d same and her choices r also... means no change in clothing and living style simple .jaisi woh han... it's soo natural for behaving lyk DAT... I lyk nandani's character she can't use his credit card or going to trips wid him... she will b UNCOMFORTABLE!!!
Manik -I love him... in ur story I am fully connected to manan and can feel dere POV'S ...so I have no fear about manan separation due to doubt or misunderstanding...
Manik is soo protective toward nandu... he has fear of losing his star... he wants her to be his princess but she toh nandu han... he also want to b normal wid her lyk other couples but he is forgetting dere story is different... but as he said he doesn't care about world...
ab kya krega monster manik... I think manik will go alone or no speaking mode on and nandu will miss him and he toh can't live...or may b she Will agree and MaNan alone on 3 day concert... it will b interesting...
plz move d story wid twist...
waiting for next looong update


Glad that u liked. thankss... keep liking๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Congrats for the new thread dear๐Ÿ‘
The update was super awesome
Loved it completely
Can't wait to know what will happen next
Please update soon
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Now everytng seems be to turnnh on the grounds of reality!!
Like abhi and nandinis thing!
Then manik and neyonika!

Moreover manan too..
Please get some good ad super romantc banglor trip done wid manan revealatn to abhi and shree.

And please try to update atleast twice a week!!
Ur story line is sometng to wch evry manan fan can easily get conncted to and will surely become a fan of ur writng!!
So please dont make us wait for long long 7 8 days.
Updates are really amazng!
Continue!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#25
Congratulations for another new thread..
This story is not only urs but mine too gav and close infact would be of manys..
As this is about fan and a rockstar..their fantascies...something which every girl fream off..
Great job..
Loved it
Cont soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#26
Wow amazing update Dr...
Naughty Manik always annoy Nandu...
Manik and nyonika equation was always nice Dr.
Nandu dnt wants to go with Manik...
Manik was he'll angry with her..
congratulations for the new thread dr.
Waiting for the next update eagerly Dr.
Always stay blessed and happy Dr
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Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Amazing update girl..

But kya yaar jaan loge kya bachho ka?? Aise cliff hanger pe rakh rakh kar... ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Abhi nandu bond is pretty much good
N nionika ka gussa manik ne nandu pr nikal diya
Aww my poor babies
Btw nice update
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29
Loved d update...
n congratulations for ur new thread!
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30
niceee .. ng congratz for the new thread
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