TERE MERE DARMIYAAN(CHAP 27 PAGE NO.166 on 6/3)

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PROLOGUE:

A girl was sitting on the king sized bed which is decorated with full of rose petals but she was crying and her tears were continuously flowing down from her cheeks. Her eyes were now full of red because of tears. She was sitting when she saw door opened and her husband came near her and grabbed her arm roughly and made her stand in front of him and raised her chin roughly with his fingers.

"Why are you crying? Mrs.malhotra" he clutched her waist tightly and pulled her towards him and said "you should be happy darling" and he leaned closer to her lips but she turned her face and tears flow down from her cheeks.

"are kya hua? Yhi hota hai first night pe husband aur wife ke bich seriously tumhe nhi pata? Aww..poor nandu..innocent nandu..don't worry I will teach you everything, bhale hi ye shadi meri marzi ke bina hui hai but tum to ready ho gyi na sab se pehle to phir." And he kissed her neck very harshly.

"manik its hurting.." Nandini hissed in pain and manik with jerk pushed her on the bed and came near her and said "Really ab iski aadat dal do kyun ki I will torture you every day, every minute, every second tum regret karogi uss pal ko jab tumne muje haan kaha tha shadi ke liye.."

"shadi ke liye haan to aapne bhi bola tha manik" Nandini said and manik clutched her waist and digged his nails in her waist "really tumne mere liye koi option 6oda tha, agar dhruv tumhe 6od kr nhi jata shadi ke din to muje tum jaisi ladki se shadi bhi na kr pdti ye shadi sirf aur sirf maine mom dad ke kehne par aur is family ki reputation ke liye warna tum jaisi ladki manik Malhotra ko deserve bhi nhi krti" and Nandini jerked his hands and get down from bed and manik also get down from bed. She was about to left but manik held her hand and pulled her again.

"now you are my wife to one thing get in your head jab bhi main baat karun mujse pu6e bina meri baat ko adhuri 6od ke jane ki himmat mat karna." Manik said to her.

"agar itni problem hai to divorce de do manik muje main tumhari life spoil krna nhi chahti" Nandini said "really thank you so much for your offer but no thanks I will make your life hell and you know what main tumhe kbhi divorce nhi dunga" manik said to her and throw a pillow on couch and said "yhi tumhari jagah hai" with that manik slept on bed and Nandini slept on couch and she was just crying.

TELL ME SHOULD I CONTINUE?

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Sunshine2604 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Very interesting start.
Please continue.
Waiting to read the next part soon.
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looks interesting...cont soon
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Awsome Prologue...
Manik n Nandini r Married...
They both do not wanted to marry...
Manik wants to make Nandini's life hell...
Really loved it...
N dont ask that u should continue or not...
U have to continue...
Continue soon...
okay...
babyee...
tata...
cya..
take care...
stay blessd...

LOADS OF LOVE,
GARIMA
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#5
Nice..I like it..continue soon :)
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#6
Nice pls continue par is me manik ki koi gf mat rakhna warns boring ho jayega.
Update soon
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Oh god... monster manik... he wants make her life hell but i know.. one day he start loving her...
Plz.. continue this story n post the part as soon as possible
Keep smiling
Love mehak


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THIS IS REALLY GOOD
PLZ DO PM ME
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awesome prologue...

loved it so much...

manan got married for their family reputation...

wondering why dhruv ran away...

it will be an interesting journey for manan...when they fall in love...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Very nice concept...
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