TERE NAAM ZINDAGI (CHAP 26 ON PAGE NO.101-102 20/3 updated) - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Gosh! I'm loving this story.
Seriously this is soo good.

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#32
Awesome
Amazing
Superb update
Manik jealous anger...agr uska dil kre toh wo aryamnn ko maar dale...plzz dear manan frst tym kese mile wo bhi btana attraction ya fir love at frst sight ya koi tashan scene tha in donno ke beech...lovd it...continue soon
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

loved the nandu control manik...knows how to stop his anger...

glad that they are the cutest and the most understanding couple...

hope aryaman stays far away from manan...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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It's an awesome story plzzz update soon... Loved each bit of it, port Nandini stuck between brother and love. Really excited to know what will happen next?
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CHAP 3:

manik and Nandini were sleeping on the bed and she woke up due to her phone. She picked her phone and said in her sleepy tone "hello" and she woke up with a jerk when she heard voice of her brother "nandu doll 10 baj gaye hai aur kahan ho tum haan" and Nandini fumbled and said "wo..woh bhai sorry main abhi ghar aati hoon" and she cut her phone she was about to get down from bed but manik held her hand and pulled her on his chest and said "aise kaise ja rahi ho wo bhi muje bole bina kyun?" manik asked her and she tried to broke the hug and said "manik plz 6odie na bahot late ho raha hai bhai ka phone bhi aa gaya manik plz 6odie na" but manik tighten his hold on her and said "pr aaj to college bandh hai phir kyun jana hai chalo na mere sath raho main bhi off le leta hoon office se what's say?" but Nandini kissed his cheek and said "ji nahin aap office jaiye aur muje ghar 6od dijiye chalo na manik" and manik leaned closer to her lips and lose his grip on her waist and Nandini took advantage of this and pushed him and get down immediately from the bed and ran to bathroom and show her tongue to manik and manik said "you have to pay for this ms. Dhawan aur soon to be mrs.malhotra.

Nandini stopped in mid way and said "a6a soon to be mrs.malhotra ye kab decide hua" and manik walked towards her and grabbed her arm and said "you are only mine get that ab jaldi se jao aur fresh ho jao" and he left her.

Nandini went to bathroom to get ready and came out from bathroom and saw manik was very disturb she massaged his hair and manik jerked her hand away Nandini again massaged his hair but he again jerked her hand away Nandini again massaged his hair this time he closed his eyes and Nandini encircled her hands on her neck and kissed his cheek and said "manik kya hua?" manik made her sit in his lap and caressed her cheeks with his thumb and clutched his waist and pulled her and said "you love me right? You won't leave me right? Tum mere sath rahogi na forever?" and Nandini kissed his forehead and said "yes manik I will be with you forever hamesha..its Nandini Dhawan sorry soon to be mrs.malhotra's promise I love you manik and she kissed on his lips. And manik went to bathroom.

Nandini was making breakfast for him. manik came out and both sat on the dining table. After breakfast manik parked his car little far away from her house. She was about to go but manik held her hand and said "princess I wanna tell you something, wo mere sare friends ne ek picnic plan ki hai sab apne wife aur apni girlfriends ke sath to main bhi chahta hoon k tum mere sath aao pls jaan" manik said and Nandini held his hand said "manik picnic ke liye main bhai ko kaise pu6 skti hoon aur waise bhi wo haan bhi nhi bolenge so plz manik hum pura din sath rahenge na.." Nandini was about to continue her talk but manik cupped her cheek and said "pls na doll try it na just for me na cabir ko bolo na ku6 jhoot bol do ku6 bhi" Nandini sai "no manik sorry main bhai ko main har bar aise jhoot nhi bol skti pls try.." Nandini was about to continue but manik jerked her hand and said "go tumhara bhai wait kr raha hoga so pls tum mere sath apna time waste mat kro go" Nandini came out from car she was about to explain something but manik drove his car with full speed.

Nandini came to her room and she tried so many times to call him but he didn't pick his call. Whole day Nandini was trying his phone and messaging him but he didn't replied to her. In the evening she messaged him that "okay I will try main bhai ko manaugi picnic ke liye" within one second he called her and she picked up "I love you..love you...love you..thank you so much muje pata tha meri doll meri baat zarror manegi" and Nandini replied "ha kyun ki mere monster manik apne control se bahar ho jate hain gusse mein is liye aise hi aap har baat manva lete ho aap" and manik giggled on her statement and said "aur tum man bhi jati ho" and both continued their talk and after sometime Nandini joined her family.

Navya was preparing dinner and Nandini came to kitchen and came near her and said "muje bhi bolo bhabhi main bhi help krti hoon apki lao main kuch banau apke aur bhai ke liye" navya gave her I-KNOW-EVERYTHING wala look and said "nandu ji hum sirf apko kehne ke liye hi apni 6oti behen nhi kehte tell me what's cooking in your mind? What you want?" Nandini laughed and said "what's cooking? My navya bhabhi is cooking." Navya said "pathetic joke and stop buttering me now tell me" and Nandini closed her eyes and said " muje friends ke sath picnic pr jana hai meri sari friends ja rahi hai aap bhai ko samjayenge to wo na nhi boloenge." Navya said in very caring tone "agr cabir tumhe kisi baat ke liye stop krta hai to isliye kyunki hum jante hai tum bahot hi zyada innocent aur nave ho aur cabir nhi chahte ki koi tumhara fayda uthaye tum samaj rahi ho na main kya keh rahi hoon nandu?" Nandini hugged her and said "yes bhabhi main samaj rahi hoon aur I promise main aap dono ko kbhi hurt nhi karugi plz ab to aap bhai ko manayegi na" and navya pulled her cheeks and said "ha meri maa hum dono mil kar manayege".

Everyone was sitting on the dining table. Nandini served him kheer and said "bhai aaj maine banayi hai aapke liye bhai specially for you bhai" and cabir said "sweetheart kya baat hai kya chahiye aap ko?" Nandini made a cute pout and said "bhai I want to go picnic with my friends plz bhai muje jana hai" cabir said "but aap aise akele matlab sirf friends ke sath to main aap ko akele nhi jane de skta sorry" cabir continue his dinner and Nandini looked at navya with pleading eyes and navya said "cabir jane dijiye usse uska bahot man hai to fir uski sari friends jaa rhi hai to waise bhi wo kahin nhi jati sirf family ke sath hi bahar jati hai pehli bar wo jana chahti hai to plz jane dijiye" Nandini stand beside him and encircled her hands on his neck and said in her sugary voice "plz..plz..plz..bhai" and cabir said "okay baba chale jana" and Nandini navya and riya hugged him tightly and evrone enjoyed their family time.

Sorry no manan...

But picnic time to romance time...

Tell me how's it????

Edited by parthmanikniti - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Awesome update... Such a cute family scences, loved the family bonding that you described in this chapter... "Soon to be Mrs Malhotra" was such a cute moment between manan... It was so cute how Manik got flattered in second when she said she will try to get permission...
Overall a very cute update, waiting to read more...
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome update waiting for picnic
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

awesome update...

loved it so much...

manan are just adorable...

hope nothing separates them...

hope the manik's and cabir's rivalry finishes soon...so that manan can be with each other...

hope that there is no twisted secret behind manan's relationship...cause that will break nandu's heart...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Nice update. Waiting for manan.
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#40
Manbir ke jhagade khatam hojaye plz taki manan will be together and navni bond was awesome
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