Manan SS:key to my heart part 12 (who has kidnapped her?)pg 112 12/6 - Page 78

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Welcome back.
I missed ur updates sooo much.
Update soon plz.


Aww I missed my updates too ...!!!
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Part12


Present,


It was night and everyone was having dinner


"Chachu apko pata hei papa got me a new doll house,apko dikhaun?"maano said excitedly


"Han han zaroor ...per us se pehlei jaldee se complete your dinner,maano chachu ki good girl henaa" replied cabir putting the spoon full of rice in her mouth and she started chewing obediently


Everybody smiled ,


"So ab kia plan hei ?" Asked cabir


"Chal ab kuch puraani batei tazaa kertei hei" saying this both the men got up and maano extended her arms so that her father could pick her up and they went towards the lounge


"Navya tum chordi I'll tidy the table myself" said nandini


"Nandu ham kerei hena " she replied


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Both nandini and navya were sitting on nandini's bed,gossiping about different things ,suddenly maano came yawning


"Mama...ninni coming.." She said blinking her eyes sleepily


Nandu smiled and took her in her arms


Navya ruffled maanos hair lovingly and then said,



"Ham tumhary diary apnei room mei leker jarei hei..." She informed nandini and got off the bed


"Okayy. .."she replied


"navya"she called her name


"Han??" She replied


"please be careful... I don't want k cabir read kerei and past yaad kerei " she said sadly


"Nandu... Wese tou I would say that relax I will be careful... But if you want tou ham rehnei detei hei...ye sab likhna zaroori nhi na"navya spoke calmly


"Nhi navya ... I have written everything tou why not that dreadful incident too..after all it is part of my life...actually that part which changed my entire life "she said everything sadly and smiled at the end looking at maano



"Nandu..."navya was about to say but was,interrupted in between


"Navya ...I trust you" she said both smiled and she went .



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Navya's room.



Cabir had slept till now ,so navya got up from the bed and went to sit at the couch


She opened the diary ,and something popped up in her mind ,she smiled and then started writing



"Navyas POV"


"Hey dairy.. Meet me ...I am navya cabir dhawan...nandinis best friend,and I am here to fill few pages of you"


"so the last scene that she wrote was when both of them went somewhere to spend time with each other and there nandini got kidnapped,


PAST,


(Navya's POV it is ,so everything that manik has gone thru will be explained by her as I can't put maniks pov here )



Both seemed to be relaxed for a while as they felt somewhat of peace connected at the place ,manik told her that this was their father's favourite hangout spot where both the brothers used to come running when wanted alone time ,and nandini felt so good to know that.


Moving ahead ,a misfortune took place when manik suddenly turned back to see his wife just to find that she was not there ,for a while he took it easy as he thought she must be playing around.


"Nandini.. nandini"he called her name


He moved here and there


"Nandini kia mazak hei..kaha gai ho...?he said loudly..but yet again no reply


Taking a long breathe he sat down on the ground,thinking she might come back after few minutes,finally after few mins he thought of searching for her as he knew how stubborn she was..


"Nandini...where are you Yaar...there is a limit of every overness ...bahir ao ab ...mazak khatam kero...you came here to get relaxed ya to trouble me"he said seriously


He was passing by the same area from where she got missed when he saw her mobile phone


"Yeto nandini ka hei"he murmured


This time he got suspicious as it was the first time ,no matter what she would never be careless,that too for this much long time


"Gai tou gai kaha...??"he thought


He was getting tensed as the time was passing,o1 hour had passed by now,and manik had searched her everywhere at that place


"Kia keru...how'll I find her ...damnnn"he said out of frustration


He called mukty on the first place just to get sure if nandini hadn't gone home


"Hello...mukty.. mukty?"he was sounding worried and she recognised it


"Bhai kia hua?she replied


"Wo...main...wo.. nandini kia ker rhi hei?"he asked as he did not wanted anyone to know if incase she has got missing


"Bhai ...kia keh rhei ho?ap dono tou aik sath he gai they na??"she replied and manik got his answer


"Yeah...I'll call you later mukty ...take care bye"he hurriedly hung up the call


This was it manik was loosing,as never in his scariest dream he had ever imagined nandini to get missing like this and one thing of which he was sure was she can't run away like this to get rid of them especially when he had seen dadus love in her eyes ,and also there were few days to their contract to get over in.


He got something in his mind and immediately opened her cell phone,checking the recents he found a conversation that left him fully amazed


He turned the phone off in anger and headed to the place he knew she would be



On the other hand,



Nandini slowly gained her consciousness,and found her body entangled with ropes,she looked around and found the place secluded,


"Ye kaha hu mei...ahhh"she said holding her head


"Manik...manik "she whispered with a heavy head


Straitening herself and getting a grip on herself she realised that she has been kidnapped and manik was no where,she was feeling so restless on predicting what might happen


"Nandini you need to be strong or socho kia ker skty ho to get out of this place"she self talked in between her sobs


Few mins later she heard a guy talking on the call


"Mei larki ko yaha le aia hu,or agar us boss ka phone aei tou keh dena hamarei pass nhi,balkei call mat receive kerna usko pata he na chalei k ye larki hamarei pass hei,"he said sheepishly


"Han bhai itny piary larki haath lagi hei aisei tou nhi janei dunga"he replied again and this shocked her to the deepest core that more tears started flowing from her eyes


"Manikkk..kaha ho tum please save me... please... bachalo mujehi ...nhi tou aj pata nhi kia hojaeiga"she silently prayered breaking into silent cry


The guy's eyes fell on nandini ,he saw she was awake


"Uth gai tum..."he said ever so lovingly in a ridiculous flirty tone


Nandini turned her face on the other side,still the tears were rolling down


"Aww...rotei nhi hei...d dekho tum itny piary ho ankhei kharab mat kero mujehi roty hui larkia nhi pasand "he said seriously


Nandini was not replying as she chose not to argue instead to be quiet till she can


He extended his hand to wipe her tears,she at once pushed her head in a way so that he could not touch her face


"Woww larki tum to bari tez ho...maza aeyga"he said Looking at her from top to the bottom with dirty intentions ,


nandini wanted to die there itself she was feeling the lowest low of her life ,this humiliation was just making her feel sick more than her imaginations


The guy came more closer to her and placed the strand on her face behind her ear


"Hath mat lagaooo mujehi..."she shouted


"D...don't touch me"she warned him


"Achaa?"he said raising his eyebrow



Back with manik,


Till now he had lost all his senses,and was driving so harshly


"Manik aram se kese chala rha hei tu Yaar",cabir said


Manik was not replying to him


"Manikkk..."he said loudly


"Cabir nandini is missing...mujehi usko dhoondna hei at any cost so shutupp tujhei nhi chalna sath tou you can leave..mei akele dhoondlunga "he said seriously


"Yaar manik..aisa nhi hei ...or sun relax please mei tere sath hu ,per aisei kerei ga tou nandini mil jaeigi kia?"he asked


"I don't know...I just don't know "he said helplessly hitting on the starring


"I guess we should file a report "suggested cabir


"Nhi cabir mei khud dhoondna chahta hu...dadu ko nhi pata chalna chaheah"manik replied


"Wo manik...mei cal ker shukar hu"cabir told manik


"God no cabir...Yaar call ker or mana ker dei please agar Dada ko pata chala na tou unki health kharab hogy ...and I promise nandini ko mei dhoond ker launga"he retorted


"Per manik..."


"Please cabir",manik pleaded


"Okay"he replied


He was trying his best but they were not picking up the call


"Uncle nhi utha rhei manik..!!"cabir told him


"Damnnn!!"he said out of frustration


"Cabir I need to call chachi "manik said


"What?why??"he asked confused


"Kiunk mei janta hu nandini unhi pass hei"he said with full determination


Manik dialed the number,she was too not picking up the call


"Cabir tu aik kaam ker yaha ka sambhal mujehi Jana hei ..."manik said


"Per kaha !??"he asked


"at chachi"s place"he said with full anger


"Fine ..be careful"he replied and got off the car


In no time he reached his destination,


Manik hurriedly got off the car and went towards the door ,he knocked it with full force ,his anger was on the top of the world,he thought nandini would be here with her mother


As soon as she opened the door ,she found the angry manik infront of her,but she was crying,amd this was the first time manik had seen his chachi in this vulnerable state,looking at her all his anger got a pause , of course he was manik a man of golden heart that definitely shines yet hard with all glittery feelings.


"Chachi what happened ..??why are you crying?"he asked as she was crying continuously


"Tum yaha?"she asked wiping her tears


He straightened himself and replied,


"Nandini ko bahir bhejei"he said sternly


"Kia?..na.. nandini yaha tou nhi hei...maa..manik ye tum ..ki..kia kehrei ho .."she said in bits ..this time she was not crying but trying to cover up something it seemed


"Please excuse me ..I'll check her..I! Sure wo yaha he hei"he said and tried to move in


"Nhi hei wo ander...suna tumnei nhi hei"she said breaking down totally


"Phir kaha hei ?"he asked seriously because she was his last hope and he was confident that she must be here only


"I don't know"she replied lowering her eyes


"You are hiding something"he reply suspiciously


"N..no..I am not"she replied


He was shocked for a while , getting the flashback of time spent with her ,how they used to fight, how she always wanted him to be her friend,their tifs , fighting about who loves Dada more, their first kiss,even second kiss,every eyelock that they have shared ,how he used to avoid looking into her eyes only to not get caught..he knew she was changing but he wanted her to confess ..he too had never confessed but he knew he feels something for her ,


"How can I be so careless...wo mere sath thy or mere pass se somebody kidnapped her..."he cursed himself


He was about to leave when chachi stopped her


"Manik..mere bety kaha hei?"she questioned


"i thought k ap usko apnei pass lei ai hei "he replied simply


"I need to go "he said and at once moved back fastly... chachi's phone started to ring,and hearing that manik stopped ,he turned around ,he could clearly see the color of her face changing.



Back with nandini,


The goon was about to come more closer but suddenly his phone started to ring and he had to leave saying he'll be back


Nandini completely broke into tears ,


"Papa...kaha hei ap...apni bety ko bachalei ...aj mere izat khatrei mei hei...Mujehi samajh nhi arha kia kerun..."she cried helplessly


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TO BE CONTINUED

how was it???who has kidnapped her what do you think??
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update loved it continues soon please update soon this time don't let us wait loved who is the bas***d who have kidnapped nandini what is nandini's mom is hiding from manik
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazing update..
I earlier thought her mother has done somthing.. But y will a mother ask such dangerous people to kidnap her own dAughter ... Don't know... Kon krwa sakta hI yeh...

This story just keeps on getting more n more Intresting

Thank u for the upDATE

LOVED IT
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Posted: 8 years ago
How can be readers so heartless... 27 people have read and liked the update but only 3 commented...
Plz people.. If ur reading the uodate say somthing atleast just to motive the writers... When writer can write thousands of words... One word won't hurt u either


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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow update..
Nandu is kidnapped...
Manik was soo worried...
But who did tht...
Waiting for next..
Luved it...
Update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

How can be readers so heartless... 27 people have read and liked the update but only 3 commented...

Plz people.. If ur reading the uodate say somthing atleast just to motive the writers... When writer can write thousands of words... One word won't hurt u either



Thankyou so muchhh mehak seriously means alottt... lots of love 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Had some updating issues but now its solved so I got to comment
Shit this is one scary update
Where the hell did these villains came from n I hope that the kidnapper guy don't harm nandini physically
Or will they really harm nandini n whose child is manno of what is her real name
Manik pls find her soon
And thank god Fatima u updated I was dying to read this story and u have written this update n displayed every emotion through ur writing

And yes readers pls do comment more or else how will she give next update soon when their will be no motivation for her
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hayeee...u r back!!!
Kitna miss kar rahi thi main iss story ko!!
Poor nandini..
I am wondering who kidnapped her?????????
Nxt part plzzz jaldi update karna..story is on cliffhanger noe..curiosity bardaash nahi ho rahi hai!!
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