Manan SS:key to my heart part 12 (who has kidnapped her?)pg 112 12/6 - Page 52

sanikagokhale

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Posted: 8 years ago

#511

Awesome update!

So Manik and Nandini going to make good memories!

Eagerly waiting for that!

And loved the father-daughter bond of Maano and Manik!

Awesomely written!

Continue soon..

Take care😃

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archu_asok

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Posted: 8 years ago

#512

Awesome update.the way u penned this update was mindblowing. Manan's convo was beautifully penned. Nandini wants to be friend with manik.it was blissful. Nandini's POV was mindblowing and well penned especially "I want to make place in his heart" and "I want to apologies to him". Daddu and nandini's part was blissful. Manan's moments were beautifully penned. Present track was also beautifully penned. Loved father and daughter bond in the update. Manno and nandini's convo was blissful. Totally an blissful and phenomenal update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

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Inaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#513

Very beautiful... awesome... superb... update dear...

Naughty manik...

Nandini ne frnd ka kaha aur wo woh ...

Their moments was beautiful...

Now let see naughty manik kya krega...??

Present track was lovely...

Mom daughter and dad part was awesome...

Very very beautifully penned dear... u did a fabulous job..

Love it...

InsaAllah she will fine very soon... i 'll keep her in my prayers...

Continue when u get time...

Thanks for pm...

Stay blessed...

Lots of love...

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nikki.smiley95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#514

that was amazing dear...happy to see nandini taking initiative😊😉

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urvxshi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#515

finally long awaited update...its superb and awesome..enjoyed it thoroughly...pls pls update soon tx

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Sweetsuraiya2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#516

Awsome update dear... Loved it... Eagerly waiting for your next update... Plzzz update soon...

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manikmalhotra2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#517

The update ... it's awesome...amazing. ..marvelous...fabulous. ..really sweet

Nandini Manik to act as his husband but is unable to say ... and their convo to be friends and act like wife and husband ... it was amazing really sweet

And Manno scene is really cute and sweet

I'm really excited to know what is Manik upto ??

Love it

Thanks for the pm

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