Manan SS:key to my heart part 12 (who has kidnapped her?)pg 112 12/6 - Page 44

Originally posted by: Fatima_mir

Finally u read

Thankuuu... Chal nhi kehty kuch :*

I'm glad that u liked it

Thank u so much...for leaving...
And I didn't liked it...I loved it

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

Finally itna dhoondne k bad kiss mil gai..

Seriously yar kia twist dala hai yar...

Lipstick suck karo... And he holded her hands... ufff that was really mindblowing... You penned it beautifully... Bohat zabardest tha...hatts off

Abhi main ne sirf yehi parha... baki ka comment bad main... This was only for the kiss... baki wale k liye wait...

Love you

Take care

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

so I'm here to comment for the rest of the chapter

3 months contract... it's gonna trouble later😆

but bichari Nandu don't have any other option na...

So Dadu Nandu ko dekh k surprise...

waise while writing i noticed something...😆

Dadu and Nandu same same😆

now back to it...

Nandu Dadu k pas wapis a gai as well back to his hubby... and ab party...hmmm

so kiss discussion... Mnaik ne keh bhi diya k Kiss kr k chore ga😲 hawww..

Nandu bach k.. huare Mr.Manik is ... Mr.Naughty..

Nandini ko realise ho raha hai... and now she is getting to know the real Manik...

dadu ne kia bol diya...

Dadu ji apke mind main kiya chal raha hai??

phir se ek room??

Or aj to Manik ki intensions bhi sahi nai...

so Nandini back to room

or ab sath sona hai...

Haww Manik kitna besharam saf bol diya he wants to smooch her...

Eyes close...

And Nandini ki condition... oper se lipstick laga k or gar bar kr di.. bichari...

And what a line... "suck it or else let's go to bed and finish it forever"

and how was it.. ye to oper likh diya😳

Manik ne jo kaha tha vo pura kr hi lia... but abhi to two months the or 1 month main hi ho gaya to next two months main kia hoga???

Take care

Love

Dua...

Originally posted by: Fatima_mir

Hahah dadu and nandu samee hei

Wese mujhei bhi apni lines badmein pasand ati hei like seriously I wrote that "suck it or else let's go and finish it forever" hahaha

Baki k month mein wo kereiga Jo har husband wife kertei ahmmm😉😃😆

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

waise dudu bhi same hai😆😆

han kabhi main bhi baith k lines dekh rahi hoti hon...

but line zabardest thi...

vo hubby and wifey wala😉 waiting for that...

waise I forget to tell you line bhi zabardest thi... "Happy First kiss wifey"😳

lovely update finally everything falling into right place

WOWWW...


What can say.. i came to know abt you through your friend DUA..I started to read the story that both and Dua are writing together.. love itt..

I came across to your index last nigh and finished reading most of the short stories.. and i am in love with your story the key to the heart..

I always thought that what if they are blood related and still hate each other but actually love each other..

That's why your story was superb for me.. one question in muslim culture.. you can marry your very first coz.. bc my parents are first coz.. i was abt to but my father saved me.. he he he.. but i did not know that Hinduism main yeh allow hain.. sorry its not a criticism.. but i really want to know the culture.. I read all the chapters.. plzz pm me with the link when you update next time.. thanks for writing Manan..

Sabrina

this is not fair update soon yaar

Okkk..

this is so fascinating story..
i loved it.. 😊

a very light hearted story..

okk in flashback..
thodi gar bhari ho ri hai..
but i think happy happy
moment b dheere dheere aa ri hai..

after this latest update..

they way nandu manage her family
her lovely daughter .
n her husband ..
jinke naam hume malum nai...
very beautiful family..

i hope that husband is Manik..
as nandu said that this marriage
is first n last..

so cute writing all her past in dairy..
book published karne ka irrada hai kya.. 😉

chap 7 was hottt yaa.. 😳

keep smiling n take care...

Originally posted by: sabrina.shown

WOWWW...


What can say.. i came to know abt you through your friend DUA..I started to read the story that both and Dua are writing together.. love itt..

I came across to your index last nigh and finished reading most of the short stories.. and i am in love with your story the key to the heart..

I always thought that what if they are blood related and still hate each other but actually love each other..

That's why your story was superb for me.. one question in muslim culture.. you can marry your very first coz.. bc my parents are first coz.. i was abt to but my father saved me.. he he he.. but i did not know that Hinduism main yeh allow hain.. sorry its not a criticism.. but i really want to know the culture.. I read all the chapters.. plzz pm me with the link when you update next time.. thanks for writing Manan..

Sabrina