Manan SS:key to my heart part 12 (who has kidnapped her?)pg 112 12/6 - Page 42

Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 8 years ago

#411

Thanks for pm.dear

Wow..very very beautiful and romantic update.

Manik came back early. ..

Nandni was missing him too...

Maniks mear touch gives nandni a shiver ..😳.

When he will really touch her what will happen then. .☺️.

But their this meet was awesome and also in the darkness. .😳😆.

Manik was so much caring. .he did everything what will a loving husband do. .😊..but now he sees nandnis bear body..I wonder ..

Ab hosh gum ho gya hai..😳...

Now what will happen. ..but you stopped ..😆😳.

Please try to update soon ..can't wait to read or I can say to see..😳.more.

Very very beautiful and innocently awesome chapter. .

You wrote very very beautiful. .

All the scenes were very natural. .

Thanks for sharing this amazing chapter.

Looking forward to seeing more soon. .

Stay blessed and happy.

Love your di..

Jyoti.

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manikmalhotra2

@manikmalhotra2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#412

The update is awesome ...amazing ... marvelous ...fabulous

Nandini is having feelings for Manik ... and she also misses him ..wow

And awww Manik is so caring ... He takes care of him like a good husband

And His touch ... affects Nandu ... amazing

And wait what she has to say to Manik ... waiting to know

Love the chappy ... no special favourite part ..whole was my favourite

Thanks for the pm

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Shrabasty Habil

@Boo131

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Posted: 8 years ago

#413

Heyy! I'm a new reader of your fanfic and tbh the concept, your witting and these characters have attracted me. I was like only 6 chaps noo. I need more. But then again it was worth reading them. They are beautiful. Your updates are really nice. Hats off. It would be a great help if you PM me onwards, all your works including this. Anyways, thank you so much for working so hard and writing such beautiful chapters. Allah Bless you!

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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#414

Awesome

Nandu ki feeling jagi

Nice update

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shruti1997

@shruti1997

Voyager

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Posted: 8 years ago

#415

Awesome update
Too gud
In spite of nandus rude behaviour
Manikin took care of her
He was so much tensed
Thank god nandini realised
her mistakes done in past
Loved the little romantic part
Amazing update
Waiting for the next update
Update soon

Thanks for the pm

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ChocolatePie14

@ChocolatePie14

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Posted: 8 years ago

#416

"""""""""excuse me" he frowned and said""""""" I LOVE THIS DIALOUGE THE MOST... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... YOU ARE RIGHT... I SHOULD STOP BLUSHING... BUT I CAN'T... PLEASE UPDATE SOON... LOVE YOU FATIMA...

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