Manan SS:key to my heart part 12 (who has kidnapped her?)pg 112 12/6 - Page 35

manikmalhotra2

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Posted: 8 years ago

#341

It's awesome ...amazing ... cute ... lovely ... fabulous chappy

Nandini is changing ... it looks so awesome ...and MaNan scenes are really amazing

And Manno scenes with MaNan are really cute and sweet ...

And what is the mystery behind Park ...really excited to read the next part

Love it

Thanks for the pm

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pinky

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Posted: 8 years ago

#342

fab update ..nandani is changing ...loving it

manoo wow beautiful name ...manan r awesome

ty for pm ...

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anya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#343

dat was a lovely update...

loved it more...

nandini's bonding wid her family...aww...so lovely...

in past...she is realizing her feeling 4r manik...

wtng 4r manan moments...

cont d nxt part soon...

keep smiling!!!

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Sofiafarooq

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Posted: 8 years ago

#344

Manik already loves her.
Both are no accepting each other.
And in present they are happy family.
Will wait for next update.

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akshima1995

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Posted: 8 years ago

#345

Loved the concept
Awsm update 👏
Eager to know the past
Eagerly waiting for next update
Cont soon...
Please pm me

Keep smiling
N Stay Blessed 😊

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Inaya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#346

Hey fati...

Firstly sorry yrr phele toh mujhe pata nhi tha... aur jab pata bhi chala jab bhi itni late ho gyi... naraz mat hona... aage se time aa comment krugi promise...

i read all ur parts in one goo...

Very interesting and unique concept dear...

Love it ...

Present is very good... lovely... but past its nice... finally nandini ko thoda thoada samjh aa raha hai..

Each and every scene describe very amazingly...

Maza aa gaya... too good ...

U did a fab job...

Continue soon... um waiting...

Thanks for pm...

Keep smiling...

Stay blessed..

Lots of love...

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Fatima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: Cute_Inaya
Hey fati...
Firstly sorry yrr phele toh mujhe pata nhi tha... aur jab pata bhi chala jab bhi itni late ho gyi... naraz mat hona... aage se time aa comment krugi promise...
i read all ur parts in one goo...

Very interesting and unique concept dear...
Love it ...
Present is very good... lovely... but past its nice... finally nandini ko thoda thoada samjh aa raha hai..
Each and every scene describe very amazingly...
Maza aa gaya... too good ...
U did a fab job...
Continue soon... um waiting...
Thanks for pm...
Keep smiling...
Stay blessed..
Lots of love...

Thankuuu inaya...:*

Mein naraz nhi huuu I'm happy k tujheiw pasand ai

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Fatima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#348

Promo

It was night I thought of taking a warm shower,it was so soothing in that cold weather,i finished and came back to the room as I forgot to take my clothes along with me,I wrapped my body with the towel ,I went upto the closet ,I was about to take my clothes when I heard the knob of the door rotating

"Is time kon hoga..dadu so gai or chachi bhi" I thought

And next what i saw surprised me..I thought I was dreaming

"Manik"I merely whispered and thats when he looked at me,

Suddenly his gaze changed as he looked at me from the top to the bottom and then I realised that I was standing in the towel only

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I think you guys are loosing interest in my stories hena??

So guys tell me clearly if you want me to finish I'll soon end them

Aik ki happy ending aik ki sad ..!

About the promo..something must be on the way ahmm type u know..do you all want it?????

Do comment and don't forget to hit like

Love

Fatima

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Dua Arafat

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Posted: 8 years ago

#349

Hawww...

Promo ahm ahm...

Only towel...

Tum kia likh rahi ho?😳

Hehehe...

Age nikal gai..

Waiting for this only towel ka kiya hota hai...

Or ye ek ki happy and ek ki sad kiya baqwas hai??

Ghaliyan yahan p khani hain ya private p?

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Fatima

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Posted: 8 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: dua_arafat
Hawww...
Promo ahm ahm...
Only towel...
Tum kia likh rahi ho?😳
Hehehe...
Age nikal gai..
Waiting for this only towel ka kiya hota hai...

Or ye ek ki happy and ek ki sad kiya baqwas hai??
Ghaliyan yahan p khani hain ya private p?

Towel utarnei ki der hei bus ahmmm shh hahahaha

Mujhei chocolate khani hei bus plz

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