MaNan SS || Living in a mirage | Important A/N & Chapter 24 on P.51|| - Page 4

Simply wow ... I Loved it ... I actually read twice :))) and thinking of doing again after commenting ... Just too good ... I am already eagerly waiting for the next update ...looking forward to read this ff
Kudos to u gal

p.s. You would want to update the chapter number with page number with today's date in ur title to let all know that u have updated :))) and ya may be PM too ... Do let me know when u update next dear

Dude you're such a good writer. *bows* *claps*

I loved it...makes me wish you were the CV and this was the story they were following😃

This is simply amazing! Wow! So many emotions and so many conflicts!
Ramchand seems a very nice man waiting for his Manik Baba.
The fight between nyonika and Nandini could not have been written better than this!
You are simply amazing and thank you so much for giving me another story to fan girl over.
Please pretty please update soon and PM me. 😳

awesome update...

Amazin'
it's very interestin' story
loved the way u wrote and ur writing skill is very good
I appreciate ur work
lookin' forward for more
update soon

Nice update

Nice start. Really good to see you writing fiction. Looking forward to the story. Keep the updates coming 👍🏼

Although I got confused - while reading bt jitta bhi I could understand was mind-blowing...loved it plz continue till the whole mystery unfolds...don't jst leave us hanging in suspense 😔
ND 1 more question...qa Manik k pappa bhi cruel types h ya he is okay like nt so inhuman types!? As u did nt disclosed any details abt anyone anywhere 😕