HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 43

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Posted: 8 years ago
When u r going to update...???
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Those who comment on this chapter. I'll pm u guys next chap.

Part 9

Murthy residence, Shimla

10 am

N: dad...u called?

V: yes...something important has come up...its time we inform u about ur future

N: future?

S: murthy ji...apke liye call hai...bol rahe hai urgent...

V: aiyyo shanno ji aapko bola tha...no calls important discussion is going on...

S: woh...urgent bole...

V: ok ...nandu beta stay here.

As venkatesh murthy leaves...

S: nandu apna ph de

N: kya hua aap tensed kyu ho...

S: ph de tu apna...[she takes out an old yellowish paper and asks nandini to type the no.]

N: who's no. Is this?lo, its ringing.

S: bahar jao aur dad aye toh mujhe bolna...

N: mom...

S: plz beta trust me...jao

On call...

Hello ?

S: nyonika?

Ny: who's this?

S: nyo its me?

Ny: shanno?

S: nyo save my daughter...wo aaj aane wala hai contract k liye, meri beti ko bacha le plz...tujhe to pata hai na in logon k saath zindagi se zyada maut mumkin hoti hai...manik malhotra se meri nandu ko bacha lo nyonika plz...

Ny: shanno plz tum ro mat let me try ...hum use kuch nahi hone denge...hum abhi aa rahe hai tumhare pass...Manik Malhotra humari nandu ko nahi le ja payega...bye

S: ok. bye

Unknown to them someone listened to their conversation...it was none other than nandini...she stood right outside the door listening to the one sided conversation enough to know of an impending danger. Manik Malhotra is not just an empty threat but a danger for her.

She knows her mother will try to pull her out of this but she really needs to plan something. The first name that came to her mind was Mukti.

She immediately called her

N: muku...

Mu: doll kya hua?

As she elaborated the situation to her bff also requested her to keep it a secret.

Mukti was travelling to her bua's place at manali tonight it would be the perfect situation for nandini to escape with her.

Her father has not returned yet...she left a letter addressing her mom, but couldn't bring herself to disclose the location.

It was pretty easy to come out of her house...what she didn't know was her mom knew of her plan n made her exit easy. Shanno dint want that life for her daughter. Nandini was the only faint ray of hope in her dark life. She couldn't let her lose.

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At the bus stop...

Nandini anxiously waits for mukti to reach, her bua has sent a car. Better sighed nandu, otherwise some or the other proof would be left behind.

She thought of her life. In the 19 yrs that she lived with her parents she had known there is something terribly wrong, much more than what meets an eye. Her parents are not just a disturbed couple. How much her mom fights with dad, she is always afraid of him. He has some wierd control on her. How she had grown up in an environment devoid of laughter n smiles.

Doll ?

Her revivre broke with Mukti's voice

As they started with their drive mukti's ph rang...the no nearly gave her an heart attack

Mu: tere ghar se ph hai...

N: speaker laga le...

Mu: he..hello?

V: mukti beta main nandini ke dad...woh tumhare paas hai kya?

Mu: nahi toh uncle...kya baat hai?

V: nandu is missing...woh bhaag gayi hai..socha shayad tumhare pass ho

Mu: omg uncle aap kya bol rahe hai...nandini bhaag gayi...

V: agar koi khabar mile toh plz hume bata dena

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N: mukti ab kya hoga agar wo log police ko bole toh wo toh mujhe dhundh lenge...

Mu: no worries doll hum zaroor kuch dhundh lenge..we will get through this.

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It was 9 at night when the doorbell rang. It revealed two well built n super handsome men along with few others they had thalis with lots of clothes n jewelleries. Along with them came in Manik.

M: hello sasurji...kahan hai meri biwi

V: manik what is all this?

M: ye hai mere dost cabir n brother abhimanyu, hum shaadi k baat karne aye hain. Aap nandini ko bulaiye.

Sh: wo manic

V: nandu bhaag gayi hai...

While manik dint comment his eyes revealed the anger brewing inside him.

M: how could she...uski itni himmat...kitni door bhagogi nandini.

Ca: manik calm down...we'll find her...

Ab: how long is she missing...

Sh: wo...kuch 2 hrs shayad...

M: how do u know...aap ne bhagaya use...how dare u...

Sh: main...how can i...i went to the temple and when i returned she was not there...kuch note waghera bhi nahi rakhi...pata nahi kahan hogi meri bacchii.[fake wails like crazy]

Abhi u know what to do...find her...manik's cold voice made everyone alert.

Shanno felt a chill on spine realising her baby was supposed to spend her life with a cold devil like him...thank god nandu took the right decision. She mentally patted herself as she said them nandu went some 2 hrs back, but the truth was its almost 5 hrs. With all wrong info they won't be able to find her. Her daughter would be safe with mukti. She would contact her tomorrow.

A shrill cell ring alerted everyone.

Ab: hello...yea Dan

Ab: ok we are on our way...

Ab: bhai we need to leave...

M: hmm...its not over Mr. Murthy ... nandini will be mine u cant do anything about it.

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It was close to dawn when mukti and nandini settled in their room. The journey was hell tiring. They just wanted to crash.

Tring tring...

Their worried glance clashed and an alert Nandini picked up her new sim-ed cell.

N: hello...

Heyy sweetheart...

N: ma...nik

M: aare u remember my voice...woh...toh how is manali..enjoying?[his sarcasm was spine chilling]

N: how did u get my no.

Mein manali mein...tumhe kaise pata.?

M:aare kitne sare questions...listen im coming to take u...bhaagne ki kosish bhi mat karna my guards are all around...so sleep for a while...his voice pure threat almost daring her to contradict.


precap: nyonika's entry...some truths, some past.


Do u guys want nandini to run again n them to meet in mumbai or manik to take her from here

love

aditi

Edited by aditi16 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
plz do cont soon...waiting fr the next
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Posted: 8 years ago
finally😳
my little bride...

y nyo hate manik... ...plzplz plz make manik got nandu from manali,,,plz


waiting for next...long update plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
lots of twists...chapter was really good...poor Nandu..i think manik will catch her in Manali only..coz i dont think he will let her go this tym..waiting for the next chapter..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Realy dear u r back,
Update was amazing superb.
I thought u left the story.
But realy happy to c u back.


I think according to ur title it will be amazing if manik will take her with him. His little bride.
But other option is also nice.
I know u will handle both situations nicely.
Plz dear don't be late this time.
Next part soon plz.
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am a new reader of ur stry n loved it alot...plz continue soon...make manik to catch nandini at manali...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey dear update was amazing...!!!
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome story gal...next part plzzz
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