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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
THIS STORY IS SOMEWHAT GREY SHADED...VIEWERS DISCRETION ADVISED...PLZ DON'T COME LATER TO BASH ME
Prologue:

N: I hate u for doing this to me...you are a monster..

M: I know baby...i know i'm a monster...n now u are struck with this monster for life...

N: I'm not going to marry u...i wont ever...

M: don't shout baby...when u know provoking me will give u pain...he traces the dark purple mark near her lips...

Should I go and say your parents what we both do in the empty classes ...he smirks at her

Her eyes suddenly turns teary...no if her parents knew they wont let her go to Mumbai ...she can never fulfil her dream of being a fashion designer...

M: never...ever again talk to that guy of ur class else consequences would be worse...his eyes red with anger...

Character Sketch:

Manik Malhotra: 30 yrs old business tycoon and the God of fashion industry. Angry , dark n never going to take NO for an answer.(inspired by mills n boon n Thai lakron sawan biang)

Nandini Murthy: 19 yrs old student of space Academy school, Manali. Soon going to graduate . Mischevious, crazy n her personality is definitely a synonym to smilie. Dreams of becoming a fashion designer, wants to go to Mumbai after her school finishes because of her parents' constant fight.(well we all have a Nandini in us...inspired by us regular girls)

Mukti : 19 yrs old Nandini's bestie...her protector.

Abhi: 22 yrs old funny , caring, loves manik the most. Joined Creations recently.

Alya: 19 yrs old diva, sometimes a bit innocent n sometimes dumb...Nandini's partner in crime.

Dhruv: Manik's another step-bro. Loves him a lot, flirty, funny, fashion photographer.

Navya: 19yrs old mother India of her 3 crazy friends. She is always there to scold them if they are wrong.

Cabir: 25 yrs old met Manik in one of his worst times. Manik took him in n gave him a new life. Hence he thinks he ows his life to Manik. Always there for him. He is the M.D. of creations.

Neonika Malhotra: She HATES Manik. Reasons will be disclosed with time. She might be cunning and Manik's business rival but will never harm him. In a live-in relationship with Harshad Saxena(father of Dhruv n Abhi). Later will form a good relationship with Nandini. She is NOT an antagonist but a rival force in Manik's life.

Edited by aditi16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
carry on with this new story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
dr. m damn sure ur story is gonna hit bt i think u should change manik age n give 25... 30 bot jada ho jar gi baki plzzz mind mt krta sry if u didnt lyk n ya for me ur story is the bst... waitng for the nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
The title itself is so cute and apt
And its dark..m already quite excited
Update soon plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
n ya dr. plzzz do pm me... n post the nxt prt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
different concept...
waiting for the story...
pls continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Interesting prologue
Continue soon
Thanks dear for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Wow!
Promo is damn interesting
character sketch is also good
Manik is so big from nandu bt that doesn't matter
it would be more interesting
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Like the title of Ur ff
Prologue is very nice and different
Keep up the good work
Continue soon
Waiting for update
Pm me if possible
Edited by snow_remix - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Its going wonderful dear...plz continue :)
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