HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi guys... I'm back once again ... kya karu riting ka bhoot chad gaya hai mere upar... so coming to business this is a new topic plz give it a look n say if I should continue or not...

HIS LITTLE BRIDE

Background of the story:

Manik Malhotra is an upcoming business tycoon and head trusty of SPACE ACADEMY school n college. In this world full of bad he have curved himself into a monster. Relationships are not his style...give n take with his so called mom Neonika have absolutely faltered his view on love, n relationships. Younger brother Dhruv , his best friend Cabir n step brother Abhi are the only ones he calls his own...yet there is a slight distance n they are sometimes afraid of his anger . In one of his visits to Space Academy school in manali sets his eyes upon 12th std. student Nandini Murthy.

Nandini Murthy a beauty with brains is a naive shy darling.

Well if u take her shyness as damsel in distress then back off. A kind hearted soul yet she knows how to stand up for herself and fight for right things. Her besties Navya, Mukti n Alya are her support system. They love her n she loves them more than words can ever define. Coming from a disturbed family background seeing her parents fight she wants to complete her school n go to Mumbai , make a different life for herself away from them.

Note: I'm going to alter Nandini's character a bit...someone we all relate to naive, shy yet someone who can make her point in the hour of need...our nandini from early episodes .

Manik might be a grey shaded character...some parts might be a bit dark...I will give warning in those parts...If you don't like plz stay away don't bash me later...

Lastly I'm fairly new in writing...any suggestions or criticisms plz feel free to say.

NOW SAY IF I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT...

ADITI

INDEX:
part 1: pg 8
part 2: pg 12
promo: pg 20
part 3: pg 22
part 4: pg 29
part 5: pg 35
part 6: pg
part 7: pg 51
part 8: pg 65
part 9: pg 69
part 10:pg 79
part 11:pg 87
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jai18 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's great! Continue please :)
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pls continue... As v ll not get to c Maniks character in the serial nemore... Let's keep parth n Manik alive in these stories
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The title seems to be damn interesting
plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Loved your concept about Nandini
Pls pls cont

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ofcourse u should continue yar...seens to b intrstng by d 1st luk itslf...wl b waitng fr u to uolod..plz continue soon...

Plz buddy me if u wish to n hv no prblm n snd me pm once u upload
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds very interesting ...please continue . Thanks for pm. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You should continue... The concept is good... Plz try to post daily...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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His little bride-- love the title :)
It's so good to read Manik is Nandini's.
Well, eagerly waiting for next.
Please continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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NICE...😊
PLEASE CONTINUE...
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