Manan ss Yeh Hai Aashiqui TEASER Ch 30 B pg 126 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81
woww!!!! intrstng story...u penne it so nicely...
jus now i read all part in one go...i just loved it yr...
the way u described the story is just amazing...
u knw wot u rocjed it...
m totally in love with ir ff...
must say u blessed with writing skill...
leep it up...uplss update soon dea...
desperately waiting for next part...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Read the 9th and 10th chapter...
wow amazing..
the story is progressing well...
in 9th chapter so much suspense..
as to what work meera is doing...
what truth she is talking about..
and a lovely bond between meera and nandini...
in 10th chapter...
loved the rishab and manik bond...
manik bought the painting made by nandini...
and he was not fond of paintings before seeing that painting.. lovely...
in all good work...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Superb.Can't wait for 2morrow..

AS ALWAYS AWESOME
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Hasi-Pani1

woww!!!! intrstng story...u penne it so nicely...
jus now i read all part in one go...i just loved it yr...
the way u described the story is just amazing...
u knw wot u rocjed it...
m totally in love with ir ff...
must say u blessed with writing skill...
leep it up...uplss update soon dea...
desperately waiting for next part...continue soon


Thank uhh so mch dear
Will update soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: parthadmirer

Read the 9th and 10th chapter...

wow amazing..
the story is progressing well...
in 9th chapter so much suspense..
as to what work meera is doing...
what truth she is talking about..
and a lovely bond between meera and nandini...
in 10th chapter...
loved the rishab and manik bond...
manik bought the painting made by nandini...
and he was not fond of paintings before seeing that painting.. lovely...
in all good work...👏


Thank uhh so mch dear
Great ur lyking d suspense
Keep showering ur luv will keep entertaining uh 😳 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: aavani

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="3">awesome update...
poor nandu...meera 's condition is critical na...ohho...
loved manik and rishab convo...
so the owner of the shop is abhi...so sweet...
so indirectly manik is coming closer to nandini...loved the painting scene ...
continue soon
u penned so beautifully...
thanks a lot for the pm
take care</font>




Thank uhh so mch dear
Appreciating d work
Will update asap 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 11 A


In hospital

Nandini and abhimanyu reached there nd went to emergency room
Meera was still unconscious
They saw her through glass of door
Nandu was in tears till now to see her mother lyk this she can't hold back herself tears were brimming out
Abhi tried to console her but it was all in vain
Dr came there
Nandu nd abhi straightened themselves came to her
Abhi asked her dr hws aunty kya hua unhe
Dr: luk i wont lie this tym i had seen d result her condition has worsened now she again missed her medicine there r very less chances now she had very less tym now i m sorry nandu beta mjh tumh kl hi bta dena chahy tha but meera didn't let me tell uh d truth m sorry beta she said this with teary eyes as she too was very attached to them keeping her hand on her head
Nandu was broken hearing d news that was lyk earth was shaken
Abhi: but dr kch to hga koi medicine anything dr we can't loose hope lyk this
Dr: i know they r some test going on m waiting fr result but now its too late we r trying r best
She said can't hold back her tears she left frm there
Nandu was too mch broken her world was on urge of getting destroyed
She fall on her knees tears were coming out continuously
Abi was too on urge of crying but keeping himself strong he tried to console her it wasn't working only d thing that could console her was meera only her better ness could calm her bring back her smile shine in her eyes but seems god was too cruel to this little pure soul
After some tym when there was nothing left tears too stopped
She was just sitting facing d door hoping fr some miracle that dr will come out nd will tell her that her mother was now out of danger
Abhi brought a coffee fr nandini she refused
Abhi: nandu i know this is very difficult but baby doll if uh won't take care of urself then how uh will take care of aunty plz hav this for aunty's sake plzz he said with pleading eyes
Nandu took it took 3-4 sips nd kept it back
Abhi's phone rand he excused himself
He didn't go that far his syd conversation was audible
Abhi: no i can't come just cancel it
Abhi: i said na i can't means i can't luk my family member is in hospital i can't come
Abhi: do hell with ur deal i don't cate uh will get ur advance back so don't uh dare threat me this tym he was very loud to seek d attention of everyone in d corridor
He cut d cal nd went back to nandini
He sat beside her
Nandini asked frm her hand what happen
He said nothing nandini bas wo ek client tha he wanted to meet me
Nandu stood up nd went inside d cabin that was near they were sitting
She came out with a writting pad nd a pen
She wrote on it
Is this is d same client frm uk they hav been trying hard nd finally got it when he last went there fr n exhibition nd took one of d painting nd they lyked it very mch they wanted to give them a big order fr which they had already given advance
Abhi just nodded as he didn't hav words to say
Rose to came to hospital as it was late afternoon nd she was also worried about them
Nandu: abhi plz uh can't do this now only tum mjh smjha rhe the aur ab plzz tum jao yh deal bhut imp h plzz abhi she wrote
Abhi: no nandu i can't leave uhh alone nd it will take atleast 10 to 15 days i can't go
Nandu: plz abhi nd m not alone here everyone is there nd maa ko kch ni hga she calls meera her mother nd a tear escaped frm her eyes nd fall on d paper
She forced abhi by making him swear on he
He finally gave up as he didn't have any other choice
He left after instructing her to take care of herself too with aunty nd he will b in touch
He moved to rosy nd asked her to take care of nandini she noded
He left aftr some tym as he had a flight aftr 3 hrs
Rose comes near her sit by her side she was just looking at d glass door
Rose: nandini m sure aunty will b fine don't worry
Nandini didn't say anything tears were again forming in her eyes
Rose after getting no response thinks to change her mind divert her attention she starts praising her painting she brought in d mrng
Rose: nandu tum subh jo painting layi thi it was fab amazing don't hav words fr that she said with big smile
Nandu smiles little faintly
Rose: nd uh know what tumhare jane k bad ek ladka aya thi woh toh pagal ho gya tha use wo painting bhut pasand nd uhh know i sold it for 12 thousand nd day guy without saying anything just bought it she said smilingly
Nandu gave a shocked look to her
Rose: arey what happen an't uh happy
Nandu nods in disagreement
Rose: what?? Didn't get what she was trying to say
Nandu still had d notepad in her hand she writes on it
It wasn't fr sale
Rose shocked look at her
Nandu : i didn't wana sell it i just brought to saw uh guys
Rose: m sorry nandu i didn't knew
Nandu just looks down as destiny was not in his favour her dream that painting was also gone



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Hy guys thanx alot fr showering with lots of luv
Yesterday only my result declared nd i passed out with extreme gud marks so my mind was out of order was partying whole day but seeing ur luv i some how brought my mind on track nd wrote this i know its not upto mark such an intense part bear with it nd i won't b updating fr 2 days tmrw is FRIENSHIP DAY
Guys happy FRIENDSHIP DAY in advance 😊 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Such a heart wrenching update...
she was broken listening to the doctor saying her mother cannot be saved..
poor nandini.. she is broken..😭
but abhi is there to take care of her..
but to her luck abhi had to go for a deal which nandini only has forced him..
and lastly more sad part..
the painting she was not willing to sell.. is sold by rosy...
waiting for the suspense...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its nice dear n happy friendship day to u also :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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emotional and heart touching...ohh...its brilliant
u penned so perfectly...keep up the good work dear...
loving abhi a lot..true friend...!!!!
thanks a lot for the pm
continue soon
take care


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