Manan ss Yeh Hai Aashiqui TEASER Ch 30 B pg 126 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 8



In car
Manik: chachi i missed uh soo mch he said while driving
Chachi: i missed uh too beta
Manik: what happen chachi aap itna udas kyo ho mjh dkh k apko khusi ni hui
Chachi: are nai beta aisa kch nh m very happy pure 6 months k bad apne bete s mili hu khusi ni hogi tujh to mri yaad hi ni ati tabi itne dino bad aya
Manik: no chachi aisi koi baat nh aap to janti hi h na kitna kam h wha pr business plus music bh isly thoda busy tha bas lkn aap sad kyu h apke face p badi wali smile missing h
Chachi: kch nh beta bas woh work load h na to m just tired aisa kch nh
Manik: pakka aur kch baat nh na
Chachi: haan mera bacha aur kch baat nh

They reach malhotra mansion after half n hour drive
Inside
Chacha : is scolding rishu as why he let manik go to pick chachi he should hav send driver nd manik was also not picking up d call
As after some tym chachi nd manik enter talking nd laughing
Chacha: yha hum log pareshan h aur inhe dekho aram s haste hue aa rh h manik beta tum apna phone kyu ni utha rhe th m kb s call kr rha hu he said looking towrds d main entrance
Manik: m sorry chacha j woh phn silent p rakha tha toh kch pta hi ni chla m sorry he replied
Chach: pta hi ni chla yha apni chachi k sath gappe marne m aur kch dikhai hi ni diya hmm
Chachi: are kya aap bh ate hi shuru ho gy dkhiy kitna thak gya h mera bacha isse aram bh krne do manik beta tu ja fresh hoke aa mai tre lye garma garm chole banati hu she said kissing him on forehead
Manik left to his room




In evening hospital
Meera ask nurse if now she can leave discharge papers r ready na
Nurse says papers r ready
Nandu keeps hand on her shoulder meera could guess through her eyes what she meant to say as she is asking if she is sure she is fine or not
Meera assures her by taking her hand in her hand nd says beta jb tk tum mere sath ho mjh kch ni ho skta nd is hospital s jada khyal tum mera rakh sakti ho na...
Nandini nods nd hugs her
They left d hospital after completing all formalities



Malhotra mansion
At dinning area
Everyone gathered except manik
Chacha ask cabir where is manik beta
Cabir: he's sleeping actully he must b tired na
Chachi : let him sleep some more tym atte hi mjh lene chla gya aram bh ni kia thak gya hga mra bacha tb tk m table set krti hu tum sab ko bh bhuk lagi hogi na chachi says smilingly as after a long tym his home is full of laughter chit chatting she feels lyk home was very happy
Mukti nd aliya too goes with chachi for helping her in setting table
After some tym manik to join everybody fr dinner settles at dinning table
Manik: thank uhh soo mch chachi uhh know how mch i missed ur food thankuh so mch chachi he says kissing her on cheek
Chachi pats at his back nd says chachi ko thanks bolega makes a morsel nd makes him eats nd asks kaisa hai beta
Manik: chachi ur world best cook uhh knw its amazing this cholle i just luv it no one can beat uh he says kissing her hand
Chachi: acha bachu mai bhi dkhti hu kab tak meri tareef karta h tu dkhna jb teri biwi ayegi tab tere ly wo hi best cook hgi tb tu mjh bhul jaega
Manik: no ways chachi aisa kabi ni hga uhh will b best always
Mukti: no chachi ur right jb iski shaadi hgi na tb iski biwi k hath ka khana hi pasand ayga ise
Nd cabir interupts haan or na bhi aaye toh khana pdga aur tareef bh nahi toh bhuka rhna pdga hai na chacha
Chacha: haan cabir beta tum sahi keh rehe ho tareef toh krni pdgi wrna agle din khud khana banana pdga he said laughing litely
Chachi: acha toh aap isly mri tareef krte hoo hmm chachi says glaring chacha
Chachi: are nai shaano ji aap toh wakai bhut acha khana bnate ho woh toh mai bus cabir ki baat kh rh tha he said stop laughing as chachi was giving him kill uh luk nd he gave i didn't mean it luk
[I didn't introduce na chacha MANISH MALHOTRA owner of malhotra enterprises after death of his brother RAJ MALHOTRA nd chachi SHALINI MALHOTRA (shanoo ) dr by proffesion nd was lyk mother to manik after death oh his mother NEHA MALHOTRA ]
Meanwhile manik was lost in thoughts of hospital girl don't know why but he remembered about her lost in his thoughts
Mukti taps him brought back frm his dreamland nd says kya hua abi s hi apni biwi k khayalo m kho gya she said laughing nd glares to aliya
Aliya bluses as mukti see her
Manik : huh..!! Kahi ni m bas intzar kr rha tha kb tum logo ka khtam hga or mai apna khana kha paunga khair chodo tum log lage rhe ho mjh s or wait ni hga he said eating
Cabir: wase chachi manik is right ur d best aur yh dum aloo my fav its awesome thank uhh chachi
Mukti : haan chachi aur yh mater paneer i just luv it apke jaisa koi ni bna skta
Aliya: haan chachi nd this mushroom its amazing
Dhruv: yes chachi thank uh soo mch apne sabk fav bnaya nd yh bhrta its out of world thank uhh soo mch chachi
Chacha: yh kya shanoo ji apne sabka fav bnya aur mere ly kch nh giving a sad expression
Rishu: mere ly bh ni
Chachi: are itna sara toh hai na aur wase bh bache abi aay h aap log toh roz hi apni farmaishay puri krte ho yh mne apne bachoo k ly bnaya h chup chap khaiye aur rishu tu bh
Chacha nd rishu luking down eata whatever is there sadly
After lots of chit chaating nd laughter whole family completes there family dinner having icecream as desert everyones fav flavour
Nd retires to there room as they r still little bit tired due to there long road trip




Manik's room
Manik was standing at window enjoying cool breeze lost in someone's thought
Yup he was thinking about nandini fr him hospital girl
Girl whom he hardly met for few minutes had this big impact on him since he met her he can't stop himself frm thinking about her he was lost thinking about his eyes his touch as if it was familiar nd that strange feeling he had when they shake there hand he can't just take her face out of his mind girl whose name also he didn't know he was just thinking about her nd on d other syd


Nandini was collecting clothes frm terrence nd suddenly a breeze comes nd his face covered with his duppata nd she remembers about that boy whom she collided in hospital nd how he removed duppata frm her face how they were just lost in each other nd shiver that pass through her body when there hands touch she was also lost thinking about him as if trying remembering something but couldn't nd her thoughts were broken by meera's voice calling her




Screen divided in two manik standing on his window nd nandini on terrence both lost on each other thoughts




Precap: meera unconscious


Hashh finally done with it fullfilled my promise giving it early
Now its ur turn guys tell me hows it
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Nd those who wants pm buddy me do cmnt nd hit d lyk button
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Just read all the parts... I like ur concept..
the way u write is awesome.. loved the manan scene... first meeting n itna impact... I'm so curious to know their past... both have lost so much. . lets see wats their connection..
eagerly waiting for the story to unfold..
can u please update a bit regularly.. with lil more of manan scenes.. just a request... otherz its going awesome... update soon... will wait :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Guyzz sorry but m very disappointed uhh guys r not at all showing interest not comenting
This hurts it takes lots of tym to write nd update so guys its a request atleast tell if ur lyking it or not only then i'll continue with this so guys do give ur feedback whether gud or bad only then i'll update next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
hi,
dear aisa nahi hai
I like your concept and respect your hardwork
but mujhe jada likhna nahi aata tumhari tarah
mai kya karoon
but aage se try karoongi ki aisa na ho
I really appriciate your hardwork.
and please continue
thankyou

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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Lovely update..
full of family time... teasing and fun...
loved it to the core...
so manik and nandini are attracted towards each other in one meeting only...
story is progressing nicely...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
yes dear please post next parts...
your story is progressing nicely..
we would love to read further development in it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
amazing...
beautifully written...
loved family time... teasing and fun...
manik and nandini are attracted towards each other in first meeting only...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
awsome dear i read all ch at once ...its superb plz pm me when u update next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
amazing
beautifully penned
loved it
plz continue
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aliyaangel

Just read all the parts... I like ur concept..
the way u write is awesome.. loved the manan scene... first meeting n itna impact... I'm so curious to know their past... both have lost so much. . lets see wats their connection..
eagerly waiting for the story to unfold..
can u please update a bit regularly.. with lil more of manan scenes.. just a request... otherz its going awesome... update soon... will wait :)


Hy dear thank uhh soo much 😊
M trying my best to update regularly
Soon after some more parts it will b more manan only so till then enjoy dis 😉 😉
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