Manan ss Yeh Hai Aashiqui TEASER Ch 30 B pg 126 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: riyana7

<font size="6">Do HURRY...Waiting eagerly </font> 😊
Awww what will happen when Manan will meet 😳 ...Jaldi post karooo...


Will try to make it asap
But ill take some tym may b till evening:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
hiii
update soon
waiting for update EAGERLY...
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Chapter 6


At malhotra mansion
Manik was passing by rishu's room nd saw him blabring something
He enterd d room wrapped his hand around his shoulder nd said wats up champ
Rishu: nothing bhai see na mom is not picking up d phone m trying frm long tym dad said to inform her about ur arrival firstly she wasn't picking up nd now its not reachable what to do said dialing again
Manik: its ok champ she is a dr she might be buzy nd ho skta h unka phn unke pass na ho
He replied him
Rishu: but bhai how to inform her i tried hospital's landline too but its buzy
Manik: don't worry champ i hav an idea don't worry i'll give her surprise by visiting her m sure she'll like it i'll pick her up wat say exclaimed joyfully big smile on his face
Rishu: but bhai app abi to aay uh must b tired na bhai uh should take some rest naa
Manik: nope champ m absolutely fine bro don't worry i'll bring her he said while waving him nd picked up his car key nd left not giving any chance to speak
Rishu: seeing him leaving saying are bhai meri baat toh suno but till then he left nd he sighed



At hospital
Nandu enters d room
Meera wipes her tears as dr was standing infront of her she couldn't see her crying
She enters nd asks frm her eyes hiw she
Meera: m fine beta don't worry nd dr n kha h sham ko hm ghr bh jaa skte h
Dr shocked listening this as how can she say this she can't even walk properly how can she b discharged she try to say smthing but meera with eyes asks her to b quiet infront of her
Dr understands nd asks nandu beta aap jake yh medicines le aau tb tk m check up krti hu
Nandu nods nd hugs meera asks her frm eyes to take care till she's back
Meera nods in agreement nd she leaves
As she left dr blasted
Dr: r uh mad uh can't even walk proprly nd ur saying to go home nd when did i say this to uh aaj toh kya tum do teen din tk kahi ni jaa skti she said glaring at her how can b so irresponsible towards her own health
Meera: dr m absolutely fine aap n to abi kha mra pass bhut kam tym h nd m woh tym yha iss bed p iss room m nhi beta skti mjh apni beti k sth rhna h apni akhri pal uske sath bitana h smjhne ki kosisi kry mra jana jaruri h aur m aaj use sb btana chahti hu jo mra andar kb s h ab m aur is bojh k andar nhi jee skti dr plzz he pleads crying
Dr keeps her hand on his shoulder understanding d trauma she is going through but as a dr how can she allow this as fr her most imp thing is d lyf of her patient nd she can't risk it so she once again tries to make her understand that if she leaves then her condition can b worsen but she doesn't listen to her nd pleads makes her sure that she will take care nd take d medicine on tym she promises nd says don't worry i take care nd jb tk nandu h mjh mri chinta nh wo mra acha s khyal rkhg pr ptani kb tk agr sach jane k bad usne mjh chod diya dr m kya krung jb use pta chlga ki jise wo apni maa manti h usne hi use dhoka diya use uski pehchan chupai uski halat ka fayda uthat wo mjh chod k chali jaeg mai kya krunh nd she cries bitterly imagining d consequences when she will tell d truth to her
Dr consoles her saying aisa kch ni hga bfr she could say further nurse enters nd says there is another emergency dr leaves asking her to take care she nods



Corridor
Nandini was carrying d medicines dr had asked her to bought nd was cross checking it while moving towards d room nd suddenly bhummmp
She bumped into someone
She was expecting to hit d flour but then she realises she was not on d floor but two strong arms were holding her frm her waist her eyes were closed her duppata was covering her face
Man: r uh ok
Nd she comes out of shock nd opens her eyes to be lost in dark brown eyes of d owner of hands holding her preventing her to hit d flour
As it was a net duppata her face is vissible nd they both lost in each other eyes as if trying hard to remember d pair of eyes
Slightly his one hand move towrds d only barrier not giving a clear view he removed her duppata frm her face giving a clear view of her
Nd then his hand automatically moves towards her face caressing her face nd she responded to d touch as she had d feeling before as recognising it she had felt before too but hardly remember both were lost in each other
But there trace was broken by a boy who came running nd said mam aap yh medicine store or hi bhull gyi forwarding d medicine
Both straightened themselves
She places her dupatta properly nd takes d medicine thanking frm eyes with a smile
Man: r uh ok m sorry woh m apna phn dkh rha tha i didn't see uh m sorry
Nandini blinking her eyes as if saying its ok with a smile nd nods
Man: m really sorry mne jan puch k nhi kia bdw m manik forwarding his hand to shake
She first looks twrds him nd then his hand in delima whether to shake or not
But finally she gives up nd shakes hands nd again were lost in each other still holding hands but seems to b lost in each other eyes nd touch as it runs shiver in thier body
This tym a nurse came nd brought them out of d world nd says mam patient ki medicine ka tym ho rha h
She comes out frm her dreamland nd remembers for what work she came nd leaves his hand nd runs to room in which meera was there
Manik: after coming out as she looses d grip frm his hand he comes out nd sees her going nd shouts are nam toh btati jau bfr she could hear she enters d room
Manik: in this thought manik yh kya ho gya h tjh aisa kho gya tha unn ankho m aur sb kch bhul gya aur yh baichaini kaisi h shit uska nam bh ni jaan paya aur ek baar uski awaz bhi ni suni. Manik yh kya soch rha h tu name awaz kya ho gya h tjh she is just lyk any other girl nope she is special she os beautiful uski badi badi akhein aisa lag rha tha ek bar dekhu to phir bhr hi ni aa skta unn mh kho jane ka man kr rha tha ek pal k ly bh nazre hatne ka man ni kr rha tha pr mjh uska nam bhi ni pta
Nd suddenly his thought process was broken by continuously ringing of her cell
It was of cabir asking abt his whereabout he told him dat he'll b back picking up chachi nd hang up




No precap

Sorry guys for making uh wait actully my right hand got twisted
😭 nd some how managed to write this
Next part will b late as my hand is paining nd i can't strain it more
Waiting fr ur valuable feedback do tell me hows it
No pm fr this guys sorry
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Hey buddy
Nice update
manan meet finally
and they feel
connection too
Am so happy
But I have a
Confusion please clear it
Nandani can speak or not
Please tell me buddy
And I want next
part
asap
Eagerly waiting
Love
Diya😛😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Hey buddy

Nice update
manan meet finally
and they feel
connection too
Am so happy
But I have a
Confusion please clear it
Nandani can speak or not
Please tell me buddy
And I want next
part
asap
Eagerly waiting
Love
Diya😛😛😛


Yup she can't speak
But if dis prblm is frm begining??
What happen to her she lost her memory??
How come she met meera??
Why she is equivalent to her mother??
What truth meera was talking about??
If uh want more ans to uh ques then b updated
Uh ll get all ur ans
Nxt update will b tmrw 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Thank uhh dear 😊 😛
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Chapter 7


Hospital
Manik moved towrds d way shooing of all his thoughts remembering why he's been here he entered a cabin but found it was empty nd was about to leave when d door flung open nd a landy wearing lab coat a stretiscop hanging around his neck
A wide smile came on her face as she saw d person standing infront of her she can't believe his eyes if it was real or she was daydreaming
She didn't even come out of shock when she felt d person huging her she realized that it wasn't a dream but reality she replied to hug
After some tym they broke d hug
Dr: manik beta tum yha kaise kab kisine mjh btaya ni beta tum kaise ho kitne patle ho gy ho apna bilkul khyal ni rkhte tum she said in one go not giving him any chance to speak one she stop
Manik: chachi chachi relax m bilkul thik hu or hum subh hi aaye h apka phone ni lag rha tha to mne socha apko surprise de du to m apko pick krne agya he replied smilingly how mch she care for him
Dr: beta apko ane ki kya jarurat thi aap itni dur s ayye ho uh should hav taken some rest or mai aa hi rhi thi ghr but uh knw there was n emergency
Manik: cmon chachi m ab apko pick krne bh ni aa skta
Dr: ni beta mra khne ka wo mtlb ni tha m bas kh rhi hu aap thak gy hge after such a long journey na
Manik: nope chachi m bilkul thik ab aap chaly mjh aapke hath k chole khane h plzzz
Dr: are beta she said cupping his face with one hand apko plzz khne ki koi jarurat nh mai bh apki maa jaise hu na toh kya aap unse bh aise hi plzz khte nahi na
Manik nods nd say sorry
Dr: beta chaly appko bhuk lagi hgi na hmm hum abhi ghr chlte h or m apne beta k ly garma garm chole bnaug
Manik: hug her nd say ur d best chachi nd kisses her forehead
As they were about to leave a nurse enters bd says dr room no 187 m jo patient h yh usk discharg papers h aapke sign chahy she said frwrding her d papers
Dr: she took d papers but she can't sign as its matter of someone's lyf she can't so she thought to talk to her once more
She moved towards manik nd ask him beta i had an imp work could uh just wait fr some tym i'll b back
Manik: ofcourse chachi aap aram s apna kam khtam kr lijye mai yhi wait krta hu he said smilingly nd reassuring her
She moved out of d cabin with d nurse


Meera's room
Nandini gave medicine to meera nd asked through her teary eyes hows she now??
Meera gestures her by hand to come close nd sit beside her
She sits beside her holding her hands
Meera: m fine beta mjh kch ni hua or dr n bh kha h m ab thik hu just relax agr tum aise kroug to tumhari tabyt khrab ho jaeg phir mera khyal kon rekhga or tumhe pta h mjh tumhare ankho m yh aansu bilkul nahi pasand n phir kyu tumhe aise dkh k mujh aur takleef hoti h bacha plzz don't do this to me don't cry aur dkhne abi hme yha rukne ki bh jarurat nh dr n kha h sham ko hm ghr jaa skte h that means m fine haina look at me she said making her look at her face wipes her tears hugs her
Meanwhile dr who was standing at d door listened there conversation
Dr comes close puts her hand on nandini's head nd ask meera how is she feeling now
Nandini wipes tears just rolled out of her eyes nd stand up letting dr to check meera properly
Dr: meera agr tum chaho to aaj raat yhi ruk jao aur wase bh kl tumhe tests k liye ana hi h toh yhi ruk jao yha pr sab h agr tumhe kisi ki jarurat hui raat mh
Dr was trying her best to convince meera to stay as its gud fr health but meera was not at all ready to listen
Meera: no dr its fine m thik hu aur wase bh nandu h na mera khyal rkhne k ly aur tests k ly m kl aa jaung
Meera pleased dr frm eyes to let her go
Dr signed off as she was not at all ready to listen nd she signed discharge papers nd asked meera to promise that she will come for test
Meera noded
Dr left instructing her to not to miss her medicine nd b tmrw on tym she caressed nandu's head nd left


Precap manik lost in thoughts of hospital girl

Sorry guys fr late nd this crap update
But next one will b surely b nice one nd long too will post it in 24 hrs
But tell m about dis too critcisms r also welcome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
SUCH a beautiful full of love this story is...
the simplicity and the beauty in this story is attracting me towards..
very nice update...
👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
The must awaited part has finally updated..
Finally they met..
Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
its interesting...so plz cont soon
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